dean2011
 
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Reply Wed 20 Apr, 2011 02:18 pm
@dauer,
yh ure not basic thts to complex for u u just a retard who needs a V card ure not the best ure hairy chest is like a beavers shave it use sum gilette and tweezers ure not the king ure just the retarded thing what people go on about haha u can beat me in wrestling thts why i saw u in showers gettin 2 big poles up ure ass what u on about dont act tough last time i checked u were a puff u turned into a winner ure a loser like tht guy who sits on the street corner begging for sum starbust choozers ure not a beginner in rapping ure a chump u look like fuckin quazimodo with a hump u cannot not rap shut ure mouth before u get a bitchslap.
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Tic Tac Nic
 
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Reply Wed 20 Apr, 2011 02:48 pm
Why is lame ass Emcee's dissing on the same dude over and over again?
He hasnt been battling for 7 goddam years...
theprofessor
 
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Reply Thu 21 Apr, 2011 02:41 am
@ Tic Tac Nic,
cause there fresh and they only see the 1st pages , man how come noone will battle me ???
Tic Tac Nic
 
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Reply Thu 21 Apr, 2011 04:19 am
@theprofessor,
I'm wonderin' the same thing. It got quiet.
I'll battle you. Let's get get get itttttttttttt
theprofessor
 
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Reply Thu 21 Apr, 2011 09:47 am
@ Tic Tac Nic,

there you go tic tac nic , when u read it make sure u see all the wordplay or else you'll miss have the points .

don't even need to battle to leave the cattle believing
the reason why proff the one leading the castle,
ya'll never eden my garden , or at my table
thwart lives with forks knives spoons ladles
of course id , fortify my rhymes with something fatal , its called a purpose
u worms still trying to crawl the surface ,
trying to figure out what all this dirt is?
your fallen brothers an earths kids , i've bin ******* with yo momma
osoma nations like obama's nation cause trauma ta conversations
honor an respect , way i treat people , karma an fate , what i use to beat evil
what you speak ? segal or norris ,
got bruce lee verse's an jackie chan in the chorus
emcee's jist , b twist , ya fetus , and 1 of u gone up ya addidas , concience ask'd do u need this ? my nike shirt said just do it ,
don't think about the consequence , u aint gon get pinch'd ,
ur gonna get smacked, back up,
throw two bottles ,only 1 breaks,guess homie only half cut
get cronic'd supersonic johnny neumonic
u cant even get broken bitches an crack sluts ,
supersize ya fries ,only way you ever mac up
its jusst a fact what ?

Peace yo Prof
Tic Tac Nic
 
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Reply Thu 21 Apr, 2011 01:32 pm
@theprofessor,
UFO's comin' down to earth, what?
Alien invasion, but ain't gonna do **** to me, but,
I gotta come up with some new ****, before I call it new quits
We itchin the back of our heads, cormulated by 2 widths
We the group of people who never back down our promise
I can predict now that's we'll never end, we correspawn with nostradamus
But if we belive the sequal, and we believe the people
We can achieve many more than the muslims feeble
and im not talkin' about the religion im talkin about the terroism
what if america lost, who would be incontrol now?
I reap people in there dreams to find out the question
I guess this is my only mission
I dream on to find the missing part in my mind
But I always come to a dead stop, someones thoughts come inside me that arnt mine
I remember when we used to walk in streets and play
But today's events are getting worst my day
People getting raped, at these rates they're never gonna stop
I'm worried if this world could go down in just 1 pop
I know this isnt a rap battle, but I just need to get ready
Cause Im now battling one of the best on this thread.
It's like the Freeworld against Shady
But I can get back on you proff, the patients will speak for itself
Now lets get this battle started, its heart is beeting, and it needs health
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charliesforce
 
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Reply Thu 21 Apr, 2011 02:16 pm
Close your eyes till you can hardly see
Ima cause a nasty scene
Like charlie sheen in a kamikaze army machine
Mr miyagis karate team cant spar with me
Coz i be Mohammed Ali of the barring scene
**** a harmony ill bar supreme with utter and heart and , teeth-
-Kinda fucked, say that to my face and atleast there still be apart of me
Im partially open to point and laugh outside a pharmacy
Mothers needing samples off of a glass of wee
To finally find out that the fathers me
Reale
 
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Reply Thu 21 Apr, 2011 04:14 pm
@Illustraight,
lmao to be honest, the bitin was an accident, wateva anyway :}
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Reale
 
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Reply Thu 21 Apr, 2011 04:15 pm
@charliesforce,
love the last lines 'Im partially....fathers me'
so sick Smile
Illustraight
 
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Reply Thu 21 Apr, 2011 05:10 pm
Seein’ another day is like watchin’ a woman walk by
In string stockings, leather boots coverin’ those tall thighs
And small guys with dark eyes
Wearin’ Jeffrey Dahmer smiles armed with knives
Cross ‘em by the alley, you get mauled and sniped
At least that’s half the life that takes place in the darkest night
The cops find the body lyin’ in the moss by mornin’ light
Durin’ the daily hours
People live their normal lives like nothin’ happened
Then they read about it in the morning Times
All of us just want to get on with life before we die
That’s why we pray for today, ‘cause we don’t know what tomorrow buys
Christians read the Bible
Muslims recite the Quran in five days a week
And Jews makin’ sure they read the Torah right
Heartless swines run their mouth constant and it’s not polite
Snap like crocodiles with big appetites and the heart to strike
I know that this verse tells a story of the darker side of life
Let’s take a gander at the positive side
charliesforce
 
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Reply Thu 21 Apr, 2011 06:27 pm
@Reale,
haha thanks man i laughed myself as writing it lol ive got a nasty writers block right now though Sad
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Reale
 
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Reply Fri 22 Apr, 2011 10:38 am
@Illustraight,
Sorry to be picky, but Muslims recite the Quran '5 times a day' when they pray.
: }
Illustraight
 
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Reply Fri 22 Apr, 2011 03:50 pm
@Reale,
I know THAT; I was just being generic.
gansta371
 
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Reply Sat 23 Apr, 2011 03:46 am
roses are red,
grass is green,
spreed your legs and i will fill u with cream!



Roses are red,
lemons are sour,
spread your legs and give me an hour
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Reale
 
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Reply Sat 23 Apr, 2011 03:49 am
@Illustraight,
lol Smile
How old are you by the way? I'm thinking 20s...
Illustraight
 
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Reply Sat 23 Apr, 2011 05:49 pm
@Reale,
And you'd be right - I'm 25.
Tic Tac Nic
 
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Reply Sat 23 Apr, 2011 07:20 pm
@Illustraight,
You're 25? Lmfao, omg
charliesforce
 
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Reply Sat 23 Apr, 2011 09:14 pm
Now this is like the old me, man it feels good to be writing properly again.....PEOPLE JUDGE IF YOU WANT??? THIS IS MY REMIX TO ICE CUBE "GANGSTA RAP MADE ME DO IT" BUT IM SPEAKING ABOUT UK'S GRIME RATHER THAN RAP. PEACE!

Parents
Hypnotised by wicked Lies
Grimes victimized as inflicting crime
Inside Kids twisted minds
And Fedz think its the **** i rhyme
That Insists on killing guys
Well tell me when you Pigs can fly
If Anybody wanna bring sticks n knifes

I diddnt start that fight
I diddnt spark that beef
Or bark the heat

to be continued...........






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charliesforce
 
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Reply Sat 23 Apr, 2011 09:15 pm
@ Tic Tac Nic,
IM 16 IN JULY HOW OLD ARE YOU/OTHERS?
Illustraight
 
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Reply Sun 24 Apr, 2011 03:56 am
@ Tic Tac Nic,
I did mention this in one of my earlier freestyles:

Quote:
I’m 25 now, I’m attainin’ late in rap
I’m still in my early days, which is a saving grace at that
 

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