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Write an essay about your thoughts and attitudes on your two favorite majors/minors. What would you like to focus on within the topics presented? How do you think you could benefit from our college? How do you want to use your experiences from our college in you community?
Im a student who wishes to apply to USA colleges for the next Fall term, of which the Application deadline is around November/December 2006. This is only 1 of quite a few essays im required to submit. I owe myself 2 ur help. Thx so much.




"Good communication is stimulating as black coffee, and just as hard to sleep after." Taking the quote from Anne Morrow Lindbergh to its deepest implication, innately did I find myself in high concern to the powers and consequences with which Media communication has imposed an impact on virtual minds. Half of curiosities, half of empiricism, I an inquisitive Journalist having incurred the temptress to this propagation industry since early teenage, have detected an acute absorption in Major 11 "Is the Media defining Truth?"

Media, in terms of broadcasts and information transportations, contains by itself a wide range of means and styles in which personal, organizational or governmental perceptions, consciences, visions and sometimes delusions rotate. With appreciation of subjectivity lurked beneath each seemingly non-biased presentation, it requires a clear and vigilant judiciousness to define the trustable extent of this conveyance, as well as a full possession of faculties to remain one's own standpoint under media pressure. As a probationary writer, I would like to explore the tactics of information comprising, of publicity management and, most essential, the intellectually influential demagoguism. As a critical reader, I also expect to gain a sufficient fathom in those skills so that my communication sensitivity will be oriented in an administrative way. To my belief, those sleights are on offer at School XXX together with dexterities that her attendants fetch along.

The second Major that I choose is Major 3 - The Ultimate Political System. Regarding to the fact that my Vietnam is on the Socialism side, to which jaundiced discriminations and misjudgments are vulnerable, I feel the urge to justify what Socialism, in a citizenry wingspan, has acted upon its people. Do we slay? No. Do we rob? No. Do we raise hostility against wealthier, stronger countries to get fixed on a reactionary conservation? No. What we now thrive for are international friendships and collaborations, the understanding and a chance of complete harmonization. Very inside, Socialism and Capitalism are just two names; they do not have the rights to discriminate man from man, nations from nations. This statement absolutely matches with the social comprehension and cultural exploration delivered by School XXX - a genial environment of conception exchange and interaction. In my strongest desire, the ideal Ultimate Political System is the global accordance of Civilization, Peace and Humanity, the ideas of which I wish to take back to Vietnam and proclaim, "School XXX is an icon of the world's amiability and willingness to help."

Above all, my foremost attitude to School XXX is the nexus between those two majors. Media communication will play a magical role in regional advertisement; however, its effects partly depend on the intervention of Political System as either stimulation or prohibition. I hope to obtain a clear envisioning on those issues through a lifetime experience at School XXX with students of other intellects. My country might be aware that, when an individual can earn the opportunity to integrate with friends worldwide, to express her own ideas and get opinions and discussions feedback, why is there no chance for itself?