Wed 4 Oct, 2006 07:54 am - its very helpful though. but would you please give me some more detail on how hard to follow my piece is? is it on the content, that the whole story is vague and lacks of focus (my Vietnamese... (view)
Tue 3 Oct, 2006 11:01 pm - Would you please give me some opinions on the piece? Please forgive me for my annoyance, for all I have done is to post my own works and to ask for comments, I did not play the role of a true... (view)
Wed 13 Sep, 2006 10:41 am - Dear Aidan,
I feel appreciating of your comment, but first, please give me a chance to explain my point.
Inspired by the real marriage of two celebrities Fiona and Karl, a controversial topic... (view)
Wed 13 Sep, 2006 03:38 am - This is the second short story that I intend to submit as a writing sample for my application at US colleges. I would be very delighted to receive your feedbacks. Thank you
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Sun 3 Sep, 2006 07:44 pm - [quote="stuh505"][quote="sozobe"]an American's reaction will likely be "Teen [i]Flower[/i]? What the heck kind of magazine is that?"[/quote]
Softcore porn... (view)
Sun 3 Sep, 2006 07:40 pm - I have recast some awkward sentences. Hope that this time will be better. And thanks to sozobe's suggestion, I will include some parentheses for that.
CO-CURRICULAR ACTIVITIES
As a... (view)
Sun 3 Sep, 2006 06:59 pm - Thanks for your advice. This is actually not an essay, just an answer or a list of activities (as the Admission Officers actually request an explanation for boxes of Co-curricular Activism I have... (view)
Sun 3 Sep, 2006 09:00 am - You have got me out. I can anticipate that your reaction will be the same to those of College admission officers, and it would be wise of me not to submit this piece. There should be some other... (view)
Sun 3 Sep, 2006 07:41 am - So far I have just received prospectus from some US colleges and universities like Princeton (my dream school) and Macalester. For Macalester, they request me to return the Part I of the... (view)
Thu 31 Aug, 2006 10:46 am - It is not the first time i have to say thanks to you, aidan. As I am not quite accustomed to interviews (I actually prefer fictions), I don't know the appropriate form then just wrote it like... (view)
