dfc100
 
  1  
Reply Mon 2 Jul, 2012 11:08 am
@WhiteMofoMonkysmugla,
yessssss!!!!!!!! haha i got it
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thedarknova
 
  1  
Reply Mon 2 Jul, 2012 11:10 am
@Illustraight,
U only consider them gentle cuz they didnt beat ur ass
Like every rap u went up against his heat dont last
cuz he spits a spark i spit fire like a flamethrower
Ill throw ur ass out like ur mom did ur dad can u blame her
I cant believe she didnt abort ur ass when she had the chance
Talk bunch of **** about how ur life sucks those arnt raps those r rants
U saw two kids in the sandbox do u want to play too
U would probibly melest them the way u do
I see the manning up failed
Prolly fucked it up when u were getting impaled
By k or was it a differnet guy whore
Wat r u calling ME a lesbian for
u where the one who got his puss licked
By his own cousin while he sucked his dick
Busting 69's in his aunts room
U sound like a whack job on shrooms
So dont come at me with ur sob story crap
How bout u get those kids out ur lap
So we can finish this bitch
And when im done with u i leave ur pathetic ass in a road side ditch
lil host
 
  1  
Reply Mon 2 Jul, 2012 12:25 pm
@thedarknova,
darknova are u a wizard
wat kind of nickname is that it will work for lizard
man i am rullin ma way back
i am on track
this guy is pathetic he ate a dinner and called it a snack
oooooooh that wack
and when he gets on stage ooh all he gets is a crowd attack
and then goes into racism and shouts is that because i aint black
no its because suck
and u aint out of luck
u just barely suck
and the crowd gets angry of the flow that he got stuck in
and then losses to a rapper that just got ten
and hes askin wats the cause
man i am sure its u
and the story ending is the funniest part too
he gets kicked by a shoe
cursed by a drunk man that told him **** u
and betrayed by his crew
and i think that story one day will be true

lolz ahahahahaha
thedarknova
 
  1  
Reply Mon 2 Jul, 2012 12:54 pm
@lil host,
Stop playing this is big boy stuff , lil host
By the time im through with him he'll loss his will to post
Ill be impressed if he even survives this bully
Well he wont be alive fully
but he is full of **** and piss
how u gonna call that a diss
More like i was fighting a kitten
Even that has more fire than what u were spitten
So dont come at me thinkin u could win
Or i'll kill ya again and again
So keep playing with ur little toys
Just leave the rapping to the big boys
thedarknova
 
  1  
Reply Mon 2 Jul, 2012 12:58 pm
@thedarknova,
For fun no reall anger lol
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theprofessor
 
  1  
Reply Mon 2 Jul, 2012 01:01 pm
http://soundcloud.com/milkboxkids/yeaaaaaa

check it out mafuckas
thedarknova
 
  1  
Reply Mon 2 Jul, 2012 02:03 pm
@theprofessor,
Nice track dawg
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WhiteMofoMonkysmugla
 
  1  
Reply Mon 2 Jul, 2012 02:04 pm
@theprofessor,
Sick shat as usual lol
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shutdownpow
 
  1  
Reply Mon 2 Jul, 2012 05:11 pm
@theprofessor,
here is my prelim verse for the four horsemen,,i'm doing big,,i'm doing from a heaven standpoint,could change it,,i need some more biggie refs too,,its not finished so give me some tips

blowing clouds of smoke with no dro lil kim or redbones
but thats irrelvant good thing heaven came with headphones
the bretheren i left on earth are still penning deft poems
from the left of the breastbone until the last breath homes
i took mines in the city of angels now they sing to me
your legacy lives on they still writing heat quite easily
scenery and imagery BIG POPPA dropped some nice seeds
hopsin and slaughterhouse the new meaning of mic fiends
allight b strong beams pillars supported with awkward love
nice scenes no pipe dreams just rolling joints like officers
lock it up,the boiling points on point but yall turned it down
making silly songs about dances the masses spurn you now
spittin writtens over rythyms has returned like i'm yearning to
but PAC made that impossible so use that as a learning tool
write about dramas and llamas but live your life realistic
perfect ur craft and hopefully add commas to your digits
stop processing the gimmicks ur limits will reach farther
write everyday like bloggers,hope they never ask WHO SHOT YA!!!


WhiteMofoMonkysmugla
 
  1  
Reply Mon 2 Jul, 2012 05:35 pm
@shutdownpow,
I like it i think it's a well put together verse yes you do need to put in a few biggie references if I didn't already know u were trying to be biggie I wouldn't have been able to tell but overal I feel the verse caught the primary points of the song good work homie Very Happy
shutdownpow
 
  1  
Reply Mon 2 Jul, 2012 06:16 pm
@WhiteMofoMonkysmugla,
thanx white,,i just wrote it real quik on the ferry to work,,yes i do have to make sure you know i'm speaking from biggies perspective,,i'm gonna probably add 2 more bars on top to take care of that,,plus a couple of more references,do we have a beat for it?,,that way i can structure the words accordingly
WhiteMofoMonkysmugla
 
  1  
Reply Mon 2 Jul, 2012 06:33 pm
@shutdownpow,
Prof Said he was gonna personalize one for this so idk if he got on that yet
shutdownpow
 
  1  
Reply Mon 2 Jul, 2012 08:10 pm
@WhiteMofoMonkysmugla,
okay okay,,im getting excited because i usually dont write verses for song,,i'm gonna tweak this mother to perfection,lol
WhiteMofoMonkysmugla
 
  1  
Reply Mon 2 Jul, 2012 09:17 pm
@shutdownpow,
good shat bro Very Happy I'm struggling with getting any ideas for my big pun verse
shutdownpow
 
  1  
Reply Mon 2 Jul, 2012 10:30 pm
@WhiteMofoMonkysmugla,
smoke some **** in a dark room with headphones,,throw on some of his **** and get busy,,lol
dfc100
 
  1  
Reply Tue 3 Jul, 2012 06:14 am
another multie

my father left or hes dead because he was never home
my mom was never around so i'll be forever alone
Illustraight
 
  1  
Reply Tue 3 Jul, 2012 06:42 am
@thedarknova,
THE WATCHER (thedarknova DISS)

[Intro]
Oh, Mr. Darknova
You are never gonna learn, are you?
I would’ve thought you’d get the hint by now but you just end up wanting more
You insolent little man!

[Verse 1]
Things just ain’t the same for gangsters
Whether you’re in New York, London or Havana
Everybody wants to be tough these days
with their tough characters, and these rough clichés
But very bad things can happen from acting
Darknova is so stupid that I should just stamp him
until he make holes straight in the underground
I don’t know how he can strut around, he’s a ******* clown
I’ve seen him come, and I’ve watched him go
But everybody knows that he’s just a ******* cock-a-roach
Rough from coke, now his gut is bloated
from smoking too much crack, yet he loves to gloat
I should bowl him over like ten-pin bowling
I think maybe my big friend in his face will show him
He’s a crazy guy, so **** him, meng!
If he’s the darknova, I’m the Big Bang!

[Hook]
Everywhere that I go
People use too much coke
I’m surprised they don’t choke
From the amount that they smoke
Everywhere that I go
They put on fronts just for show
It’s only fair that they know
That they’re just stupid as hoes!

[Verse 2]
It seems that my verse after the last didn’t teach him
So it’s up to me to give this joke a little beating
And by “beating”, I mean a whup-ass right in his butt-crack
and leave him on the floor smashed so his pals can have a laugh at him
(Ha ha)
I’m gassing him, I’m nabbing him, I’m grabbing him
Canning him like plastic tins of mackerel fish stashed in his granny’s fridge
Gashing him with nappy pins
and grassing him like fat bags of cannabis had by Jamaican rasta friends
Boot him in the sack, shoot him in the ass
Euthanise this man, whoop him with a crack and put him in a cast
Fool him with a laugh (hoo-hoo-hoo-ha-ha)
Then put him in the bag, cook him into ash and tomb him in the grass
He won’t hit me with a metaphor, get me with pathetic bars
Stick me with weapons, or even pick on me forever more
‘Cause he’ll be in the bedded floor
with sticks covering every part of his body as he rests through dawn
where the horses get extra forage
However more, it’s Illustraight that gets the better score
whether he’s playing hockey, tennis or even skittle ball
Let it go, darknova, this battle is over
.... Just admit it, faggot, it’s over!

[Hook]
WhiteMofoMonkysmugla
 
  1  
Reply Tue 3 Jul, 2012 06:50 am
@shutdownpow,
Good idea but not a smoker lol
dfc100
 
  1  
Reply Tue 3 Jul, 2012 08:21 am
@Illustraight,
wow you used the same theme as eminem did for the osama diss
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shutdownpow
 
  1  
Reply Tue 3 Jul, 2012 09:03 am
@WhiteMofoMonkysmugla,
Good...that's twenty years added to ur life..lol
 

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