Neverending Rap Battle

i never lost nthn but..................my life...........ma voice................ma hummanity...............my ppl.............................. now u are tryin to take ma country noooooooooooooooooooooo sry that wont happen

Wtf are ur talking about

man just some philosphy **** lolz are u up for a rap batlle

Everyone watch eurgh vs DNA its some pretty crazy ****

Makin threats to take the steps with your bitter judgement 
But there's that one thing u gotta live to love it 
Wrists are bludgeoned bloody slits are runnin 
While kids are ******* losin there future a repeating cycle dude
Hearts gone cold so when I bleed it's leaving icicles 
Kids bleeding to fight for food they can't even sleep sound 
Steps from the edge yo hes feeling weak now  
deep down you want them to stop you 
Or at least know there's someone below who won't drop you 
Can't cop food half the people in this country are hungry 
Moms need guap for the kids she's sleepin with somebody for money 
Games shows give away a million dollars for nothin
While struggling G's are killin coppers for something 
If your behind bars your the toughest
You don't got it rough if u think your life's hard then your bluffin 
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there's so many messed up things in the world This country won't show the homeless living on welfare 
They can't even afford to pay for their healthcare 
I feel bad for those who know what poverty is 
one Day you'll stomp out the buisness owners and say kharmas a bitch 

hypochondriac insomniac think ur gonna die fallen asleep in the back a Pontiac , comedy act ,common relapse , inside the synapsis , where sin happens ,bin rappin ,since devils entrapment ,and ashin the ashes to ashes ,of the fallen into the cauldron, walled in the chambers of cratos , picking up thor hammer , plato thought of aries anger marry’s manger sacrificing heavenly dangers ,penalty of seventy sabres serenity entity lost in providence , honest conscious lieing to it self everyday , hell everyway, he thought of doing right , was accosting another humans life , filled with doom n strife , looking for a knife to cut a carcus , u don’t wanna ******* start this the rage consumes the heartless , trapped in a cage grappling with minimum wage wrestling to stay an starve carve his heart out and eat whats left , screaming **** death lifes worse without the touch of the one you love so much , out a touch , outta dutch , about to erupt , lost in a frenzy a fury , all that blends in the burgundy , faces lacerated smashed with hatred , saw the reflection in the glass couldn’t take it,couldn’t fake it so much hurt in the dirt zombies are attacking snacking on his actions as people stare gasping , no one asking you ok , how the **** was your day , hooray , yay ,went to bed with the 13th broken nose an 4 more stitches, for your bitches cause your dickless and couldn’t stand up , with a punk put his hands up , I don’t give a funkadelic , grew up in violence , at my house again with two ******* sirens,had a guard in my cell tell me my moms birthday cars contraband ripped um up an didn’t give a **** , think im not gonnna stand , u don’t need a gun in hand , to become a man , I hope you got a plan when my hands around ya throat yo chokes , folks listen im a great guy with fucked inhibitions an a mission with enough intuition to know some will listen cause there told to ******* listen others does nothing but cause distance , some wont listen till someone diss um , then there pissed n pistoling a chance at getting there shot , at getting um back , if your forgetting im rap , and remember its all music and how you choose to use It then you know its useless to make excuses for hate ,whatever you choose to do its your fate , better get yours straight before its to late

oh my god...this was ******* awesome man!!!!

iam the master cause ill capture yo flow, ya wack MC cant beat what ive become the evil beast in your nightmares or yo dreams yo aint got none iam more than a beast but still ill scar yo face with my claws looking like cleaver blades watch yo self, when i come theres will be no hope for yo escape ill rip your limbs off like a fly without its wings.

lol is this suppose to be a rap?

anyway do you want to have your first battle
how about
DFC100
vs
freshflowe

one verse each and we just let other people just say whose verse is the best...what do you say

multies-ILL-9..DFC-7
Round 2 Decision Winner of the First Match DFC-100

personals-ILL-6..DFC-8
structure/flow-ILL-7..DFC-7
wordplay-ILL-8,DFC-7
punches-ILL-6..DFC-8
metas-ILL-8..DFC-7


best way I can explain this battle , Illustraight yours was a great verse but more of a cypher
DFC-100 , kept one solid theme you and apocalypse, being gay and it was all straight disses , as this is a battle I lean towards punchlines as one of the strongest suits ,so I scored dfc higher one his use of consistent multis an punches , but illustraight has some good long punches , great battle guys

Did frost ever send in a verse

not yet hes travelling across canada at the moment i can text him he'll probally give it to me haha

drivin down i-90 with three hoes in the back
dizzy, the weed is holdin um back
tryin to find a pull over only to bash
show um my stash, got um sittin on my lap
there models yeah
changin the station, they laugh
one points out my jason mask
i distract her with a case and a bag
"keep your eye on the road"
i pull over to the side of the road
grab her by the face and drag
spray mase and gag, cause she's beautiful
slip a pharmaceutical in her yagga
watch the trick bitch move like Jagger
smother the other bitches after
smear the blood with my hand all over
strap um to my land rover
with masking tape
class A basket case
that drinks when he collaborates
asks the wall how the mason tastes
no chronic, definately nada
chop the beat like Jeffrey Dahmer
ppl say i have a lotta
issues in my brain
so i put the 9 to my temple
watch the tissues fly from brain
flyin away, and by the way
this is how i opperate
intoxicate, hold up your cups
cock block the fake cause they can't **** wit us
date rape, take drugs hospitalize the fake thugs
**** your hopless romantic like Drake does

im the releast, there's no one as real as me
im the realest, others pale in comparison
im the realest, ill make ya cry tears for free
im the realest, you don't even belong to breathe air im in
the realest

Aight lol

I'll set your GARAGE on FIRE fore I ever SHED LIGHT on the subject
you're dead right im holdin a musket
look to your left you'll see the head of your husband

gimme a heavily set bitch with a british accent
i titty **** that, bitch calls me a scum bag
she walks away im like "wait come back!"
then i realize her weight, she's fat
i could probably catch her
im runnin after her
i realize she's faster
shes turnin around backwards
flickin me off callin me a dirty bastard
i finally catch her and stab her
slice her adams apple
stump on her head like a herd of cattle
i heard her babble under her weak distant breath
"you're sick ******"
so then i DO titty ******
blood all over my rubber WHA!
i didnt mean to go into such vivid detail
but i steam rail british females
and put there implants on my car like decals, Adele
settin your garage on fire, talk about sheddin light on the subject
ya dead right im holdin a musket
look to your left you'll see the head of your husband
fuckin the Muppets cause they wouldn't gimme my ten chicken mcnuggets
im actin up, cut that.... yo, that was whack as ****

Ill Break your window of opportunity to shatter your dreams

hey can u help me out with this rap i need pointers fixes and any other help u can give
this is to the rap of becareful what u wish for by eminem

Verse 1:
So, this is it
this is what i wished for just isnt how i envisioned it
pain to the point of being imprisonment
left me wishen things had been different
been thinkin i shouldnt have wished this
cuz u cant take things back no matter how hard u try
i just have to fix things with the truth and that aint no lie
cuz i lost my only love
the girl i used to dream of
but now its a night mare with out her here
without her the nights bare and the canvas is clear
and trust me i no these lyrics are whack
must of wrote em on crack
i still cant believe i wished for my old life back
and they said to be dareful and wish more and fight to get it
but i say
Chorus:
Be careful what u wish for cuz u just might get it
and if u get u just might not know what to do with it and it may come back
on u ten fold, i said, Be careful what u wish for cuz u just might get it
and if u get u just might not know what to do with it and it may come back
on u ten fold
Verse 2:
wish i could go back to her some day
but im in a rage every day
dat i moved away
so ill have to prove i can stay
in her heart
wait let me restart
back to when i met her in 5th grade and we made a connection
we had so much in common it was like she was my female reflection
after i moved i knew my love for u could never be
im coming back for u just u wait and see
i wanna show u my feelings are true
but how could i show that to u
cuz when ever i try to talk i cant find the words i want said
dats why i had to write this instead
we could start off slow
so i can get to know u beyond ur glow
but let it shine
when i take ur hand inside of mine
and i no im not peter patrellie
and u leave me felling like spagetti
like a spineless mess
and i know this rap isnt the best
and im not the fastest
the smartest
and sure as hell aint the strongest
but i will love u the longest
and ill put my life into getting u back
dats y i layed dis track
i hope i can be ur only exception
and ill never try to win u with diception
and that aint no lie
if u dont believe me i might cry
tears of pain
from the thought of not being able to see u again
and it all ended with one stupid wish
dont make the same mistake i did just obey the chorus
Chorus:
Be careful what u wish for cuz u just might get it
and if u get u just might not know what to do with it and it may come back
on u ten fold, i said, Be careful what u wish for cuz u just might get it
and if u get u just might not know what to do with it and it may come back
on u ten fold
Final verse:
i want u to no my intesions are good
but i had to show u the only way i could
through this rap made of scrap
that may sound like crap and no this aint a trap
to get you and leave you
if only u knew
how alone i felt
and all the pain that was dealt
towards this kid who just wanted his friend
ive broke my butt trying to getcha so call me da split end
but when u love like i do its like a vibe u get
go ahead and bob to it
but be careful what u wish for cuz i got the ****
Chorus out:
Be careful what u wish for cuz u just might get it
and if u get u just might not know what to do with it and it may come back
on u ten fold, i said, Be careful what u wish for cuz u just might get it
and if u get u just might not know what to do with it and it may come back
on u ten fold.

Well the first couple bars are Ems lyrics