Neverending Rap Battle

are we doing this collab or what? cause imma write soon.

anytime ur ready homie

and whitey I honestly just talked to him an forgot to tell him , he'll be ready by tommorow night

It's all good just wondering when I need to be done by

no worries , just come hard i think with the 2nd round we will give 48 hrs instead on 24 just so it can be better , more quality lines

Okay I'll write tonight. I got an idea what ta do with this. I'm gonnaget just look for a beat so I can flow to it, cause that's the only way i can write.

i'm controlling the brain
kill yourself, i'm killin your name
lighting you up with an arsenic flame
your bowing to me like you were my dame
disrespect me... i'm sending shots through your window pane
mixing your coffee with a dangerous bane
step in your house with matches and propane
this is what happens when you go insane
you wake up tomorrow like nothing happened.... like everything stayed the same
people saw you at the scene,,, and the cops try to explain
you lost control so there's no memory of this that you can regain
i only know that i brunt your ashes...every single grain
i remember this because the burns on my hand...they still remain

this is life.....

try more multi's.. i like it a lot, but here's some ideas

window pain, still no way, single grain (like you said)
propane, go away, no wait
explain, check my brain, let's say
regain, leadway, t-pain, e-brake, these fangs

just some examples from your lyrics... once you get a hang of multis, your **** flows better, it sounds better, looks better, it just overall makes you a better mc. it takes practice to get it down, but it makes a song you write go from 5 minutes to sometimes takin the whole day to right.. it's not supposed to be easy to write bars, make it sound good... maybe im just a perfectionist on what i do, even though my lyrics arent perfect by any means, but just get the hang of prefecting your lyrics tou your standards, feel me?

Feel like I drank my first carat and let it go down deep.
Steep canyon peeled echos and ancient flood-gates filled-portions.
Adrenalin-karat seepin’ narration,
Track incarnated fluid-wedged taste your own potion;
True hooded penance drink,
Antidote for a kid sick of the weep;
Chain-coat for a man ready for the deep end of the ocean.
Clean cut line, accentual cell nine way ta decal,
Deepened ink font, calendar widened by eons of art,
Lance tine dactyl woke to caw and call this his feat.

Diable ta kid translation: I’m not a rapper, but if I were, I’d still say that **** was smart.

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lol.

what you LOLlipoppin about?

your whack bars, whack structure, whack lyrics, whack language, whack ego, whack everthing.. you can't spit, you can't write, you dont know what real hip hop is. have you touched a mic? have you put pen to paper, instead of fingers to keys? and the statement of the day.... get the **** off of the neverending rap battle forum, cause you evidently can't write or spit. and you're just hear to stir **** up cause jacking off and raping your son only takes up 1/4 of your day..

ight, hollaa.

lace the toliet wit arsenic wit ya arse in it , arsenals of farce gimmics
**** dont wanna get personal ,curtains called said im far from finished
fart in cynnics faces , tell um they smell like ass
u wanna know something im like ask
u wanna flow something im might rhyme like a blind dyke
I can smell that pussy,
pussies are like assholes I like mine tight
cushy kush G's like rap flows I might lime light ,
but still crack open that bud
**** will crack open that mug ,
leave ya hopeing that bloods just a ketchup stain
leave ya throat open
down the street
they found ya teeth , inside your tounge screaming catch up brain
get up change , attitude , clothes , flows , still tha same dude
in a suit , in a group ,in some boots , still school u in some hoop
under the pillow machete an Buddha
pajama pants sleeping with freddy AKA kreuger
and the bride a chucky wide eyed screaming **** ME
give her some laffy taffy an say lets get daffy , dont ever duck me
1000 bucky larsons ******* commiting arson to be a star some
come hard , others pre cummited a felony , tellin me , my melodies
will always be in there cock shade
My Dewey Cox made ta Walk hard Rock hard an play the skin flute
human orchestra's torture the chorus rawwww an begin ta shoot
n wont stop cumming hard , till someone in charge
gets shocked ,when they try to cut my dick off ,
my one eyed cyclops looks at um an says piss off

I'm not here to nurture yer retractable guns, runt. Neither to pick-up yer unsure-of-the-culture-stunts garbages. I'm not the cure to yer gurgle. So shut the **** up.

LOL - anyone else notice how K stopped reading a dictionary an thesaurus b4 he tried writing

big difference in the integrity of your schemes an vocab

I told you u might aswell stop posting your **** at me lol

u wanna chill out an be apart of the community , well you know your more then welcome ...

U still claim u dont rap - yet I can verify at least 10 RAPS you have written lol

well then guess what I DONT RAP EITHER

IM A ******* HIP HOP ARTIST

look im more then happy I inspire anyone , but ur slander is just slander and Im in it for a bigger picture , so ima lay back on the battle raps an get back to what I believe may help the world one day , that's my reason for rapping

i only battle cause well heck its fun - and i like to sharpen both sides of my sword some times the tip of the hilt for those emcees creeping up from behind

I only wanna help people - if you wanna do something that opposes that I'll just go around , over , or right through you ....

Ci senor ? comprende ?

PEACE NUCKA

and no thats not racist its short for CAN-NUCKA

cause canadians are Canucks nucka

retractable guns eh? never pulled the trigger on a gun at a human being, so that's another garbage statement you've made. you're whole facade is fuckin stupid. dont diss the rap game, cause you don't know deadly **** about it. ************.

well **** lol...damn man genius

yea i get it...i'll work harder on it thanks man

bambs im officially moderating TROLLS

do not pay attention , do not respond to him , its feeble an the only thing of us that should stoop to that low a level is our boots when we are stomping a bitch ass cat