Neverending Rap Battle

Silly I kill these Achilles, don't stand a chance.... Genius

Wooo mean Shut down me likely likely

thought it was bam and murdock my bad

thanx man,,quick,,just starting writing again,,getting back into it

?, im waiting if he kicks his verse

Nah just write one and send it to prof in a message so nobody has an unfair advantage

yhh done mayn, just waiting for ko

yeah murdock,,inbox it to him,,and he will post u and ko factors at the same time

ii8 done that, so wens it gonna be uploaded or we waiting for ko?

If ko sent his..prof will do it tomorrow...I'm gonna suggest if ko if don't drop..will get a substitute by Tuesday..but I think ko sent his in..so we wil see

my bad,,,thursday

just alittle something because i haven't posted anything for awhile

i did it by myself, all on my own
with the lights out in my zone.
left me for dead my body is rotten.
i became better the colder i have gotten.
its like i've been shortly gone, dead and forgotten.
my heart is the only thing in me thats stoppin.
i'm at the end of the road
i'm just.... to cold
i'm shivering i feel like i'm old.
you dont know how it feels having to carry these boulders.
you dont how it feels having the world on you shoulders.
i've just become to twisted.
from the pain i've inflicted.
finally i actually feel gifted.
because the weight of this world has finally been lifted.
i'm a fast runner fly off of the track,
i ******* ran marathon with broken back,
just to get on top of this crap,
**** sports we all bow to rap,
the top fell off and i filled in the gap.
you need a couple of bars not one but several,
i made it to the top and i didn't need the devil.
**** the stars that shine bright
put a bullet in there head and blown out there light.
and howl life a wolf at the end of the night.
i'm better than you
no ones better than drew
i'm like a one man army take down your whole crew
you wanted this battle now what do you want black or blue.
the safe to rap i ******* broke the code
i made it to the top already now im at the end of the road.

this is nothing big

a good way to end the first round good job guys ...

Murdoch 212

Faggot ass KO sending in-directs of chapters/
Cause KO know i got more thick & hard bars than the hair of rastas/
If ur name aint jack u aint a jacker, ur fake as plastic & can get wrapped like plasters/
Learn from ur master otherwise u could earn a disaster/
I could bring thunder and a storm together but much more faster/
Got u thinkin u serving for world war so ur wrapped at this point cause it matters/
Make u blood thirst so u think worse and adapt to this life of anger/
While i live glamorous, check my family tree theres more leaves to make money than bankers/
Enough of the banter, get a rope son and i'd do the honours to hang ya/
Too mucch dramas, too much niggas claiming they the hardest as if i wont attack ya/
Fact is you know where my gat is so i can leave ur ass shatterd down and batterd/
KO go home and be like **** mayn imma payback that bastard/
Keep swearing, you gone end up dead like the last nigga abandand in a kaskit/
Bring a masscre, chain and saw, masked up for this game of war/
Maintain the sword, i swore that i wouldnt use a gat, still i spray back four/
Its a pay back law, so get used to it as im retaliating back for more/
Cause i luv ta maintain this war/
My main aim is to bring pain so my enimese be painin raw/
Battlefields bringin on sets wagin war/
while i sex whores till they sore im wagin more/
Uhh, similar flow?, its the same exact as the one that i rap/
Now i see u spittin lyrics, diseased up like skillige as a comeback/
You probs aint black, but u sure dam must have had a mud bath/
Thinking u got six figures, **** that u probs had too much of that ruck sack/
Hittin those verses got u thinkin u slinging fire, nigga u wildin out/
Smile now, but damm after this battle i'll take that smile out/
Out the room, booom at ya face, put u in ur place, make u fly out ya house/
Call it my house, and if ur hoe dont know, then she bout to be finding out/
You stired up **** as u spit, now u neeed give a rest to that lying mouth/
Call urself somethin when really darg u aint nothin but a minor now/
Im on fire now, you tryina keep up with numbers but i got ya tryina count/
My bars is bumpin, spinin, hittin ur head got u counting up for nothin/
Plug heats and aim from far range at ur face, replace it cause ur ugly/
Halloweens over son, so why u still got ya self lookin like a Pumpkin darg/
You be choakin hard, if not that i bet you would be mumblin harsh/
Uh, i see u flexing out ur chest size and lien bout ya six pack/
I tech guys like you who lie bout they abs when really its six flabs/
You do the math, ohh wait u cant count so imma take that back/
If u think these bars isnt true, darg u best belive im dissin on u/
No subliminals or in-directs straight from the depth im shittin on u/
Up from the air like a pigon do, u can see from miles im killin on dudes just like u/
Got u sweatin like a fat girl got me thinkin what u must be going through/
Uhh no need for the jibs, look kid u look like a crack theme like u need powder to sniff?/
Talking bout money power and respect, u aint got power bitch/
Your so dumb and fat, bet you'd jump off a cliff just for some sour ribs/
I rest my case bitch, aint u the same dude that be lipsin dick?/
You the nude that be suckin dick and be humpin sticks in ur clit/
Im rapping my verse logic, entertainin able2know givin out knowledge/
About u, spit out more than couple lines or two, u cant stop it/
MURDOCK will leave you sucidal, make ur own inner system vomit/
MURDA was the case, throw me in a cell and throw the key as u lock it/
**** that, bring a whole firm to block it, still i'll unlock it/
Come back and attack with the mac, leave his punk ass shockin/
Call me batswag cause im always blacked swagged and ready for the Robbin/
Bang bang with the strap, like motha**** who u mockin?/
After this battle i know for a fact i'd win, so sit back as the croud lol'in/

VS

KO Factor

So apparently "Cap'n" Murdock is my next opponent
Bust a "cap in" murdock's skull, witness his head explodin'
'Narr, darg", bitch please
Everyone here knows I'm the "scourge of these seven seas"
I could just refuse to drop and take the L, "scupper that"
This ******'s wack, new plan of attack
Thunder clap, crack the whip on this ******'s back
Smack! Leave your body smolderin', yet you keep soldierin' on
Burnt and "smokin'", hope you brought a "pack"
I've got a knack for makin' up for what I lack
'Avast!" Away with that
Heads up, cuz you're gonna be "given no quarter"
In other words, there will be no survivors of this verbal slaughter
I ma finish this contest, placin' 1st and gold
I'm a rising dragon, die you faggot, "Fire in the hole!"
I'm quickly scribblin' ****
Ill with my pen
Flippin' **** not givin' an inch
Make bacon out of this squealin' pig
I've got the noose ready, time to dance "the hempen jig"
I'm comin' through this battle like a hurricane
White and dirty but I,m murderin' lames
Verbally hurting and burning your brain
I swear every time I read your raps it sounds all the same!
I'm spittin' wolf's bane, so there's no more "dargs"
Don't you ever think that gets old? 'Narr"
I'll verbally merc this faggot, "Argh!"
There's a reason they call me the ******* "wild card"
Duckin' and dodgin', verbally slicin' your flanks
You're at your "rope's end" so mother ****** "WALK THE PLANK"
My name was too easy to flip for everyone, so I'm steady voodoo cursin'em
So I fuckin' changed my name like hittin "self-desruct" on your personals.



bars bars bars

This is the last battle of the first round ... lets get it ranked an move on to the second round

Ill tiebreak judge if it's needed

Good **** dfc..salute...cool beans...will judge around 12 pm...good job guys

Cool white...

It's KO. Rhyme with my name now! Fuckin' dare you.

Not really a challenge, I'm just messing around.

Hope you all understand the pirate phrases.

Multies..murdock.7..ko.6..none steady by either..murdock had a few more in his lines
Personals..murdock..7..ko.7..kinda even here..murdock came right out the box with the faggot ****,lol..ko styed pretty much with the pirate refs but at some point u have to let that go
Wordplay..murdock..7..ko.8..ko had it going on with the pirate thing..mudock was more straight to the point
Structure..murdock..7..k.o.8..ko was easier to read and flow..murdocksverse was longer and some lines were stretched
Metaphors..murdock.7..ko.7..there weren't many that stood out to be honest
punches...murdock.8..ko.7..murdock made some attempts,truthfully some fell flat but he had a few..more wordplay and similies from ko

First off thanks guys for the battle....good ****...murdocks verse was a bit longer so he had moreoppurtunities to go in..and he was consistent if not spectacular..watch some of ur wording murdock..I got what u were saying,but better word placement would have made it cleaner..I feel u guys have to get a bit more personal and acerbic with the lines...a lot of lines just felt like freestlye material..same thing with ko...he was witty with some of the pirate refs..but it kinda leveled off into more of a freestyle..watch how long u stay on something ko..it was clever with the pirate thing but sometimes less is more,one bar can suffice sometimes...no expert..trust me..but if u guys watch some kotd,smack,url battles on u tube..u will see how grimy and **** this dude these guys get...I have to give the edge to murdock because he was more in attack mode but ko was right there..if he just a couple of more wow lines along with the wordplay..he would have won..but murdock by a nose