Bambino
 
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Reply Sun 10 Jun, 2012 08:02 am
@WhiteMofoMonkysmugla,
Yeah I'll just do that. Gimme a couple hours
WhiteMofoMonkysmugla
 
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Reply Sun 10 Jun, 2012 08:14 am
@Bambino,
I had 5 bars worth of rebuttals do write 5 bars worth of rebuttals and add it on I'll wrote 5 bars of regular **** then we will have an equal amount of bars and rebuttals sound good?
WhiteMofoMonkysmugla
 
  1  
Reply Sun 10 Jun, 2012 08:15 am
@shutdownpow,
Just YouTube Canibus chokes you'll find it
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Bambino
 
  1  
Reply Sun 10 Jun, 2012 08:20 am
@WhiteMofoMonkysmugla,
What? Lol.
WhiteMofoMonkysmugla
 
  1  
Reply Sun 10 Jun, 2012 08:37 am
@Bambino,
I had 5 bars worth of rebuttals lol do u write 5 bars of rebuttals but then you would have 19 bars overall so I wrote 5 bars of just regular stuff then we both have 19bars and 5 bars of rebuttals lol
Bambino
 
  1  
Reply Sun 10 Jun, 2012 08:45 am
@WhiteMofoMonkysmugla,
So you want me to write 5 bars of rebuttals essentially?
WhiteMofoMonkysmugla
 
  1  
Reply Sun 10 Jun, 2012 08:49 am
@Bambino,
Yes lol Then it will be even
shutdownpow
 
  1  
Reply Sun 10 Jun, 2012 09:38 am
@WhiteMofoMonkysmugla,
im getting dizzy,,u two work it out and send them to prof,,lmaoooo,,i did vote on the first one tho,,good **** fellas
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KOFactor
 
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Reply Sun 10 Jun, 2012 09:40 am
I got mine in. It's not that good considering I forgot the deadline and had to speed write crap. I will admit to using lines from some of my old songs. Oh well. I'm goin back to sleep
shutdownpow
 
  1  
Reply Sun 10 Jun, 2012 09:52 am
@KOFactor,
If u sent it to professor..cool...he will post...gnight,,lol
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shutdownpow
 
  1  
Reply Sun 10 Jun, 2012 10:27 am
@warchild..he wanted a quik battle
I own spitters JOAN RIVERS flow war need more style
Throw grenades in ur crib **** KIDS,I'm so WAR CHILD
Nah,I'm more vile simply just a bit more vicious
Ate ya before, kinda bland this time ur delicious
U about to get ko'd like copelin leave ya mind wobblin
Mine steady throbbing throttling lyrical clobberings
Don't even bother him he didn't listen so I fathered him
being disrespectful lately so I grounded and sparked him
Electricians mindset current flow is like sublime text
Stop the crying and regret ur ass ain't even rhymed yet
Don't let this get u down keep ya head up like jugglers
rhymes hard yet exotic like white monkey smugglers
I'm 730 that means crazy I'm reveling in morphine
We know u stuck on 714 like the bambino morphing
Into a ghost I'm on the way to get some on her knees sex
cop a glock then point it to ur chest like a V NECK...figure it out..lmao
KOFactor
 
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Reply Sun 10 Jun, 2012 10:36 am
@shutdownpow,
I feel like there was an indirect shout out to me there somewhere.
shutdownpow
 
  1  
Reply Sun 10 Jun, 2012 11:22 am
@KOFactor,
Lol....u a funny dude ko..I like that..yep yep...good catch..I was gonna put everyones name in there...I was freestyling on the ferry boat...wrote it in ten...yeah I just put u and copelin together..no disrespect,...bambino..being babe ruth stuck on 714 homers..and white monkey was self explan..haven't felt like writing much lately
KOFactor
 
  1  
Reply Sun 10 Jun, 2012 11:36 am
@shutdownpow,
Haha. I'm cool with it. And thanks.
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samyboy27
 
  1  
Reply Sun 10 Jun, 2012 11:39 am
@Illustraight,
FINALLY
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samyboy27
 
  1  
Reply Sun 10 Jun, 2012 11:41 am
i been done with my verse along time ago............
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samyboy27
 
  1  
Reply Sun 10 Jun, 2012 11:41 am
proff has it.......send yours to proff as well
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samyboy27
 
  1  
Reply Sun 10 Jun, 2012 11:42 am
n let the JUDGIN BEGIN..............
Illustraight
 
  1  
Reply Sun 10 Jun, 2012 11:49 am
@theprofessor,
Round 1 (against samyboy27)

Two dope boys having a really bad battle
**** a verbal war, I should back-hand slap you
I fought you less than a year ago
Started off in a modern way, then a Shakespearean flow
I bet you remember that, Sam – but just in case you don’t
I’ll take the notebook from you, and re-iterate the notes
And just for you to understand it better, I’ll say it slow
Here is my modernised version of a play I know:

Macbeth
Is this a rapper which I see before me?
The man in front of mine vision, gazing a being so gory
I have thee not, and yet I hear ye still
A cowboy rap artist, whose talent is less than real
Art thou not a rapper, but a bad actor
Who has skills which have adapted to a crap factor
Or art thou but a rapper of the mind, a false creation
Who has dug himself into a hard situation?
I hear ye yet, with a style non-existent
No man alive wants to stand up and listen
This samyboy, a person so witless in his prime
Wouldn’t kill me if he turned back the spin of time
Mine hands crush thee, this young wretched amateur
A consequence this be, for a reckless challenger
Go forth, go to! Stray from mine land
You just beheld the mightiest form of my hand

Battling Ill is like a mortal against God
I’ll spread his brain like Scrabble, or God spreading stars
Fold him up like Poker once I have dealt the cards
That’s my “ace” in the hole, I’m a vet at “heart”
I’m a vet apart
If hip-hop was a cocaine market, you can call me Pablo Escobar
Serve you like fish sold in a seashore restaurant
You couldn’t handle my weight, therefore you’ve found yourself against the odds
WhiteMofoMonkysmugla
 
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Reply Sun 10 Jun, 2012 11:53 am
@samyboy27,
Just post yours now I guess lol
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