Neverending Rap Battle

what up dre,,if ur the real one,,i need a beat!!!,,nah,,welcome

ko,,ur **** was about to explode,,then u said the plant thing,,im not trying to be a tutor,,but run it all the way thru my dude,,salute

take a seat i'll murder u over this weekend,,nice,,i'm instigating,,lmao,,dont mind me,,,good battle

Nah. The tutoring is what I need. Go for it. And thank you. I felt that it went flat afterwards as well.

Before this starts IM NOT SUICIDAL lol I read a story on my Ela final about a boy struggling and it kinda became inspiration wrote all of this during school There's gonna be more but this is a start


M2 steps from the edge

(           )= hushed voice 

Intro 
Sometimes life gets u down and your just sooo ******* close to the edge we all have those times.... I'm having one now *beat drops* but I have music to let it out here it goes 

Boom 
Boom 

Chorus 
(Steps from the edge)
You know I'm so close (close)
(Steps from the edge)
But I'm feeling so lost (lost) 
(steps from the edge) 
I just wanna go home (home) 
(steps from the edge) 
But I'd rather be gone (gone) 
x2

Verse 1 
Makin threats to take the steps with your bitter judgement 
But there's that one thing u gotta live to love it 
Wrists are bludgeoned bloody slits are runnin 
While kids are ******* losin there future a repeating cycle dude
Hearts gone cold so when I bleed it's leaving icicles 
Kids bleeding to fight for food they can't even sleep sound 
Steps from the edge yo hes feeling weak now  
deep down you want them to stop you 
Or at least know there's someone below who won't drop you 

Are you suicidal?

No, but really. I really liked that. Nice.

my insecurities are hurting me
my face is permanently burgundy
if you wanted to beat me to death you should have just murdered me
never asked for this, i hope you understand
when i'm writing the devil is the shadow that guides my hand
back in preschool we did a play you know the one with jerry and tom
i saw everyone else's but where the **** was my mom
my mind is to crazy for you to stop
my thoughts are to heavy for you to drop
if you notice people on the bottom, always make it to the top
you really don't know how it feels to be a hurt kid
the dust on my heart made it become turbid
the devils mind is pulling me do i stop resisting
but i know he'll pound my head intill i stop existing
you would think a home would be a safe haven
not when your mom is exactly like satan

I'm gonna go eat some raw eggs and hit bricks to feel like a man again.

I've never been the greatest
But if you're nameless and you hate this
Then I'll blast you with the famas
Till you're brainless
Cuz my aim is to maintain this
I beat down the ego I have
**** swag
All I need is this attitude and class
So I laugh
I don't need to use cultural trends to spread my name
I don't sag, smoke, or have a fuckin chain
Never gonna be changed by this fame ( that I don't have )
I'll spit flames on you lames and remain untamed
Spit flames, get dames, all-prodick game
Whip came into the picture and the haters admit shame
I don't aim to be one of the best, I aim to be IT
Take one wrong step and I'll tear you to pieces
Now believe it, I've got 12 shades of lipstick on my penis.

Old. Real old. There's some parts I'd like to change. Any suggestions? Some parts just aren't right.

old?,,there was dope lines in there,,,,**** swag all i need is attitude and class,,nice,,multis hittin,,truthfully that verse does what i need to do,,shorten my lines,,,i liked this ****,,salute

darknova,,ur not ******* with illustraight,,stop it,,lol

i think bambino does something on here thats a good exercise,,,he dont mind putting his metaphors and punchlines out there to see if u get em,,we need to do new **** here,,thats a good thing we can do to see how strong ur metaphors and punches are from time to time,it will improve ur thought process i beleive,,i will be posting a few soon,hope to see some as well

i will also be setting up a battle tournament soon,,if u use the site,,,u should wanna get down,,lets see who can go in a room,,write fire with all the knowledge we have of each other it,should be fun,,,5 bars,,due in 24 hours after both check ins,,,,we will have categories for the vote and u have to explain y u picked the winner of the particular category before choosing ur ultimate winner,,,,and everyone in the tournament will HAVE to vote,,,3 votes is the winner and move on with the final being however many bars u wanna write,,,we only need about 8 emcees,,will be working on it

i dont even know what that means

Thanks man

I felt it. Brought a tear to my eye. It's relateable. I'm a stranger to tears, so now I have to do something to feel manly again. Long story short, I liked it.

battle rap tournment.... will it be on this site???? and if it is i would like to be part of this

damn man.... thanks.... respect... i also read the one you put below mine and dude i loved it... keep it up man.... and never give up...peace

Damn straight. Peace

im in

whats poppin ? **** talking knuck oxin
kick ya nuts up in ya guts and digest um
ur **** wouldnt be nuts if it had my presence
all these other contestants are cunts wit no essence
congested cant flem it you cunts can cum get it
cum pressin concosive compressions
cum fresh n 9 months in rhymes **** son pressin
one question n its rhetorical
if metaphors could kill
when your on the floor dead chilled, your head spilled ,
is that bloody metaphorical ?