oh...sh*t.....yea no disrespect to u Detox......i still wak...jus learnin this ish......much respect to u an the groups......
here's a freestyle for ya'll, or a call out to any MC who wants to battle.
Yo, check it..
gettting tired of waiting, why won't anyone challenge me/
i know you'll get mercd, theres nothing you can do to damage me/
i'm calling out anyone who has the balls to step up/
Imma kill whatever you have, even if you step up/
so just spit agianst me, anyone, execept bitches who act tough/
and you know who you are, aint gonna say no names, YTZ and 4D/
my rymes are so good, it's coming through your screen like three 3-D/
I ripped the mic away evertime 4D and ytz tried to touch/
if they did touch it, I'd send them away being supported by two cruches/
******* fags, dont know how to take a hint/
I made them write so much, their wrist was put into a splint/
they actually had to spit some good **** for it to be red/
no matter how hard they tried, i was already too far ahead/
they could never catch me at the pace they were going/
you kids are so poor, that's why your moms out hoeing/
your kids are a waste of nature, lyrically you'll never start growing/
the only thing that's showing/
is that you both guys dont know the 1st thing about flowing/
lol, i said this was a freestyle, but what the ****, i just killed two birds with one stone/
i'm the unknown, coming with just more then muscle tone, to rip you from your own throne/
cause i'll break your leg bones/
wont stop there, i'll work my way up, till i **** up your neck bone/
on this forum, i'm very well known/
you kids have no on your side, you kids are on your own/
you should of thought about that before you started to talk **** to me and quik/
you guys held a gun to my face, I didn't flinch.....oh yeah when you pulled the trigger, all i heard was "click,click,click'/
you only could afford cap guns, which is why i heard the click/
my rymes amaze you like david copperfields magic tricks/
you can say your rymes are slick/
but I red the fineline about you, your rymes dont even stick/
so if you want to battle, come at me with a ryme that's actually worth the effort to reply back/
i'll leave you defensless, like a vitcim tired to railroad tracks/
can't believe i'm givin you two this much slack/
4D come at me witha decent ryme, and put away YTZ's nutsack/
yo, that was more of a diss to 4D and YTZ.....so what ya gonna do
whoa tite ish man......i need to write some more an practice,
yeah, I'm just starting too believe it or not, I started like a month ago, but I'm a fast fast learner, already battle on the streets now, geting to work on my metaphors, similies, punchlines, wordplay and getting my sound together, just keep practiving man, I got ya back.
my last freestyle was kinda wack, I'm tired now. it'slike 1:30 am..
oh sh*t here in aus it's 15:38, yea im workin on ma metaphors, punchlines an the construction of a rhyme.......the bars etc well get sleep cuz spaek to u lataz......
my bad Detox i didn't know either so sorry 4 comin at u
it's early so i'm bored so lemme spit some bars
we had a mixup when detox called dr eryk wack/so no disrespect man disregard my verbal attack/but 4 all u bitches stop talkin **** behind my back/step up 2 the plate so i can see what u got/chances are though i'll have u in a dirt plot/on my chain and my watch i got mad rocks/i'll hit u wit so many bullets u'll think you have chicken pox/we got a group on here it was 3 now it's 4/we the illest mcees so u know we aint poor/we could have other people kick in your door/but we prefer 2 do it in person/just so we can see ur condition worsen/i guess i got skill but i aint tryin 2 be aarogant/i left Aso like a ghost now he's transparent/no one wants 2 battle me so i guess ur all in fear/knowin that if u step 2 me u'll be knocked off of here/a few people here respect me and i got respect 4 them/but 2 other mcees i spit on them wit phlem/the mic i rip up no matter who i'm against/when i spit at u u back up 2 the fence/if u wanna battle me u don't have 2 much common sense/cuz my attacks don't relent/until u realize u made a mistake and repent/i should be chargin some other mcees here rent/some people should give up rappin like a sacrifice 4 lent/i hate people who take one quik shot at u and leave/2 those bitches i make sure they don't breathe/step 2 me if u think u got skill and u can beat me/and who knows maybe i won't destroy u completely/if u got me on ur side i gurantee u'll win/cuz i killed more people than osama bin laden/that's it 4 my freestyle so peace out/someone step up cuz i need a fair bout
o-dog u lookin 4 another battle wit me
someone wanna battle me? just hit me up, i'll even spit 1st!!!
someone hit me up 4 a battle cuz i'm gettin mad bored
if there is anyone on drop me a line
yo, quik, no one wants to battle us.... sucks...
i know we need some new people on this forum
yo dr eryk 4 now we'll battle on here but let's try 2 find some new sites 2 battle hit me up if u find a good one
aight, so we'll battle? if so you spit 1st. lol
i'll try to find a good site... aight
no i'm not sayin we'll battle again i'm sayin that we'll keep battlin people on here unless u wanna go again
lol ohhhh, see I thought you wanted me and you to battle, it doesn't matter dawg, you wanna go?
The REAL Truth
Yo eryk and quik kid, I'm here to call you out,
Show you b****** what real rappin's all about,
See I came to this site knowin I could take y'all,
Natural talent, like Albert Pujols and Baseball,
I been here four days, Monday through Thursday,
And this douchebag dr_eryk won't stop talkin ?'bout his wordplay,
You want some wordplay, b**** take it from the better man,
Go visit Michael Jackson cause your album will Neverland,
You got bad rhymes, no flow, no style or rhythm,
You couldn't get on a record if your f***in floor was tiled with em,
And as for dj quik kid,
Why's your name reflect your sex life? It's kinda sickening,
Brace yourself ?'cause TheTruth is wicked,
And I'm blowin up in this place faster than your dick did,
Little b**** takes it in the ass like youngbuck,
And the way you write your lines is annoying as all f***,
So spit back if you want, write another f***in book,
But if it ain't written in lines, I won't take a second look,
Cuz every punch line has a cliche in it,
So write as much as you want cause you ain't sayin s***,
So its about time that someone like myself took action,
Cuz I owned you with my rhymes but can't beat the faction,
Cuz eryk, you got murked. TheTruth flat out rattled you,
But if my friend was the judge, I could win every battle too,
You're at the bottom of the barrel, stop tryin to get higher,
Cuz if you're f***in with TheTruth, you're a goddamn liar,
TheTruth, keepin b*****s like you shut down,
I'm takin over able2know. What now?
