oh...sh*t.....yea no disrespect to u Detox......i still wak...jus learnin this ish......much respect to u an the groups......
here's a freestyle for ya'll, or a call out to any MC who wants to battle.
Yo, check it..
gettting tired of waiting, why won't anyone challenge me/
i know you'll get mercd, theres nothing you can do to damage me/
i'm calling out anyone who has the balls to step up/
Imma kill whatever you have, even if you step up/
so just spit agianst me, anyone, execept bitches who act tough/
and you know who you are, aint gonna say no names, YTZ and 4D/
my rymes are so good, it's coming through your screen like three 3-D/
I ripped the mic away evertime 4D and ytz tried to touch/
if they did touch it, I'd send them away being supported by two cruches/
******* fags, dont know how to take a hint/
I made them write so much, their wrist was put into a splint/
they actually had to spit some good **** for it to be red/
no matter how hard they tried, i was already too far ahead/
they could never catch me at the pace they were going/
you kids are so poor, that's why your moms out hoeing/
your kids are a waste of nature, lyrically you'll never start growing/
the only thing that's showing/
is that you both guys dont know the 1st thing about flowing/
lol, i said this was a freestyle, but what the ****, i just killed two birds with one stone/
i'm the unknown, coming with just more then muscle tone, to rip you from your own throne/
cause i'll break your leg bones/
wont stop there, i'll work my way up, till i **** up your neck bone/
on this forum, i'm very well known/
you kids have no on your side, you kids are on your own/
you should of thought about that before you started to talk **** to me and quik/
you guys held a gun to my face, I didn't flinch.....oh yeah when you pulled the trigger, all i heard was "click,click,click'/
you only could afford cap guns, which is why i heard the click/
my rymes amaze you like david copperfields magic tricks/
you can say your rymes are slick/
but I red the fineline about you, your rymes dont even stick/
so if you want to battle, come at me with a ryme that's actually worth the effort to reply back/
i'll leave you defensless, like a vitcim tired to railroad tracks/
can't believe i'm givin you two this much slack/
4D come at me witha decent ryme, and put away YTZ's nutsack/
yo, that was more of a diss to 4D and YTZ.....so what ya gonna do
whoa tite ish man......i need to write some more an practice,
yeah, I'm just starting too believe it or not, I started like a month ago, but I'm a fast fast learner, already battle on the streets now, geting to work on my metaphors, similies, punchlines, wordplay and getting my sound together, just keep practiving man, I got ya back.
my last freestyle was kinda wack, I'm tired now. it'slike 1:30 am..
oh sh*t here in aus it's 15:38, yea im workin on ma metaphors, punchlines an the construction of a rhyme.......the bars etc well get sleep cuz spaek to u lataz......
my bad Detox i didn't know either so sorry 4 comin at u
it's early so i'm bored so lemme spit some bars
we had a mixup when detox called dr eryk wack/so no disrespect man disregard my verbal attack/but 4 all u bitches stop talkin **** behind my back/step up 2 the plate so i can see what u got/chances are though i'll have u in a dirt plot/on my chain and my watch i got mad rocks/i'll hit u wit so many bullets u'll think you have chicken pox/we got a group on here it was 3 now it's 4/we the illest mcees so u know we aint poor/we could have other people kick in your door/but we prefer 2 do it in person/just so we can see ur condition worsen/i guess i got skill but i aint tryin 2 be aarogant/i left Aso like a ghost now he's transparent/no one wants 2 battle me so i guess ur all in fear/knowin that if u step 2 me u'll be knocked off of here/a few people here respect me and i got respect 4 them/but 2 other mcees i spit on them wit phlem/the mic i rip up no matter who i'm against/when i spit at u u back up 2 the fence/if u wanna battle me u don't have 2 much common sense/cuz my attacks don't relent/until u realize u made a mistake and repent/i should be chargin some other mcees here rent/some people should give up rappin like a sacrifice 4 lent/i hate people who take one quik shot at u and leave/2 those bitches i make sure they don't breathe/step 2 me if u think u got skill and u can beat me/and who knows maybe i won't destroy u completely/if u got me on ur side i gurantee u'll win/cuz i killed more people than osama bin laden/that's it 4 my freestyle so peace out/someone step up cuz i need a fair bout
o-dog u lookin 4 another battle wit me
someone wanna battle me? just hit me up, i'll even spit 1st!!!
someone hit me up 4 a battle cuz i'm gettin mad bored
if there is anyone on drop me a line
yo, quik, no one wants to battle us.... sucks...
i know we need some new people on this forum
yo dr eryk 4 now we'll battle on here but let's try 2 find some new sites 2 battle hit me up if u find a good one
aight, so we'll battle? if so you spit 1st. lol
i'll try to find a good site... aight
no i'm not sayin we'll battle again i'm sayin that we'll keep battlin people on here unless u wanna go again
lol ohhhh, see I thought you wanted me and you to battle, it doesn't matter dawg, you wanna go?
