Neverending Rap Battle

visious enuff to walk into a kitchen to kill midget bitches
flier than wicked witches, twitchin my stitches that i had in my broken nose
strong enuff to break both of your collar bones with one of my toes
kill whole bunch of hoes and leave notes at the scene to get the world pissed off
get you pissed off, im hurlin off, the mic, so you can say im sick but not realize what i am behind the mic
im more than ill, im more than under the weather, **** the rain is hear
imma pain in the ear, tryin to quiet down, im learnin how now
im burnin your house down, and you're goin with it, no point in yellin now
im fuckin bitch, quit tryin to do your cuddle
hidin subliminal messages inside your soduku puzzle
the triple 666's wasnt a coinsidence, it was self defense
im pressed against a mess of a fense, the pickets are entering my chest

proliferate ,
flow lifted state ,
so gifted weight
,of the,
soul shifted fate,
oh this the date,
notice mistakes,
focus this trait,
hope is this taste,
hopeless pissed waste,
wrote this **** faced,
quote this dick face,
dopest mix tapes,
smoke this with faith,
broke his lips, face ,
soak his bitch waist,
when scrod is dict tate,n ,dick channey , dict channing

tatum, famous for ******* yo head up ,

u can hear um chanting

ehh check these multi's

surrendering is the best, hands up and on the wall, pansie up in the car
roll ya up in a ball roll ya down the grassy knoll, punch a bitch in the face till she falls
help her up and tell her to call, this number if she thinks that im raw
the whole task and all, wrote my number on a basketball
your the cat im the dog, stand no chance in a brawl
put you in trance and snatch your braw, do a dance and in the hall
your granpa called, said he paniced the car, sent a cannonball on this bar, and vanished us all
started speakin spanish to stall, granite im raw, i just managed ball
unconrollably on us all, no need to insult, my weapons are assault
definatley the rawest, more friendly stories, you heard about me
im turnin quickly, quit bitchin at me, pullin down my pants, hind sight and ditchin this beat

@thedarknova

Dark nova needs to start over before I decapitate heads
Depart shoulders eradicate legs so be a smart soldier
do what ur heart told ya and get rocked like large boulders
Or solo guitar moments taken out the game like card folders
My spit so hot fart I feel like I'm lost in incenerators
U couldn't be this cold if u were defrosting refrigerators...lol

The rhyme scheme gets a little weird at times but this is probably the realest **** I've ever written CHECK IT OUT

Struggling- 

Verse 1

Life or death wife in debt night is red dead end job with lame pay
Time stands still as the days change goes in just to get less pay
 Hairs on his neck raised 
His checks lame 
20 years still not an ounce of respect 
When he spent tons of time shedding pounds for that check 
The boss gets to lounge in the back 
He does all the work and you have the balls to lay him off
He's got bills coming in who's gonna pay it all 
So he makes the call he's to pussy to do it in person 
He's afraid the workers will work him and hurt him 
Life used to be perfect guess id say it's curtains but he can't afford it cuz his life is worthless 
Steps from the end of a cliff screams in done with this **** that was the end of his days, boss calls next morning to offer him a raise. 


Chorus- x2
For all the people wondering why they left us 
For all the people looking for your next love 
For the people searching for their best stuff
All you struggling people gotta keep ya head up 
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2nd part of chorus 
 Even if you got problems life can cure 
Death isn't the answer 


Verse 2
What about strugglin label mates with Razor blades made of paper plates
Lookin for an ace of spades to make some change and pave the way for some greater days 
Cuz he ain't sellin units ripped up eleven blueprints 10 sales 7 from his two kids don't know where that loot is Drugs in his blood he's pukin screaming "love wasn't enough I'm through bitch!" goes to the closet and grabs a nine says babe you'll always be mine phone rings but it wasn't in time cuz a contract offer was on the other line

Chorus x2

maybe check your first bar...

"dead end job with lame pay" em says that in "rock bottom" somethin to consider. good song all around though, nice multis.

seems as if the vodka helps....

0:23-1:12
back to the backseat, ohp the seatbelt is unfastening
oh now she's droppin her doors, betta whip out the deek out fastly
ass is so crafty im thinkin bout urninating on this bitch, till she's deteriated
furiated cause she didnt give me brain, slapped her in the face she
said, **** is bout to get crazy, i think i maybe, a mix between zany and
AP i came ta see the girl in no clothes to embrace me
to seduce me, all i need is a pen and loose leaf, in two weeks
the bitch will be layin dead in the boo-nies, cause im like an epsiode of the loon-ey
tunes when im fuckin a group-ie, after too many brew-skies, loopedy that beat and slip a roof-ie
in a ya drink ya see, pass the weed, pass the beat, it has to be, the vodka or the henn-esey
magical shrooms and boose is the rem-edey, after i kill ya im belching, ya smell me
from a mile away it's almost as if it is help-ing

I wasn't thinking about that at all when I wrote it I don't think 1 bar is gonna make a difference though

you fuckin with the best on this wedsite
you got us droppin bars but you got stage fright
good life with blue skies
demons from hell will rise
intill your whole family dies
never thought about rapping but my live sparked this
cloudy days and i'll ascend from the darkness
i'm just trying to battle hope you will start to write
i'm a dog and i will bite
i'll end you and turn your life into misery
i'll end your career cause i'm trying to make history
you keep throwin punches but your missin me
people got to be dirty i just keep it clean though
you fuckin with an ill rapper named Bambino
your a wannabe
you should say this kid really inspired me
rap is my alcohol.. i'm never sober
you just sit but and relax cause this battle is over

bring it on darknova

**** was dope..I liked the rhyme schemes it was different but flowed..nice multis...very good story..we all been thru that ****...lol..can't afford it life was worthless..dope..I would like to hear this on a track..**** was hot..especially ur first multi bar on the second verse..salute

Yeah suicide is a pretty touchy subject for me lol dad tried it twice my best friend tried it twice and and my cousin who I never met finished the job so I figured I would try to put the message that suicide isn't the answer into a song

Good stuff..I hear u..kinda tough for me to write songs becuz I don't record and its just a hobby really..but I would like to start..these kind of drops gives me a blueprint...thanx for sharing...peace to ur fam...lata

I call this meeting to order
Now would be the best time to call your nieces and daughters
to hear me in this conference
interview, my insight will reach directly into you
And as I spit a few
I should drill a little hole in through you
Pneumatic, boombastic booth addict still going at it
like a booze alcoholic who's drinking joules of that .....
Oooooh, I can't think of a word that rhymes simply with "-atic"
Never mind, so I'll just say drinking **** in the attic
The rap wascawy wabbit is still back with the habit
of kicking Elmer Fudd with his own ratchet
and making him cry buckets in baskets
Dump his butt in the casket
and bury him six feet deep so the slugs will get at him
Those motherfucking mollusks have a monstrous appetite
They feed on him, McDonald's, chicken nuggets, and MacTonight
The corpse is their Happy Meal buried under the daffodils
It could feed hundreds of maggots, building underground mass appeal
I'm feeding these suckers with good stomachs, they can't complain
Yet they're still intent on throwing stuff away, what a waste!
I bet if I tried to teach them, the fuckers, they'd run away
I guess they can't handle a little knowledge, it's such a shame
I have no idea why they don't want to play proper games
All they'd rather do is touch up all their bubbly babes
And show off their brand new BMW 1 or 8
series coupe, with the word "****" carved on their number plates

"**** me" are the rudest words I've ever heard
And I don't believe that's anything I have ever deserved
I'm offended too
Now I get to pull a defensive move
Deck you with a pencil and etch you through like a sketching tool
Wrecking you with a set of moves that Jet would execute
to wrestle fools and other pretentious dudes he contends with too
Let a few shots penetrate through your head until it severs you
and is ingesting you like wine kept in the vestry room
The experiment that professor uses is reckless too
An eccentric dude who relies on unconventional methods
just to get one of his stupid points across
I'm a boy and boss
destroying mobs quicker than germs washed from the toilet bowl
I'm blocking your flow with a flip-kick to the nostrils
Standing over you, turning big things into fossils
Go against me, that **** is simply impossible
Air you out on MTV just like Biggie and Pac would do
I'm making a mockery out of you and all your posse crew
Chew you up and spit you out like monsters do
Stick you up just like a dinosaur constantly chased through the jungle
by a Tyrannosaurus Rex with big teeth fixing to chomp on you
Stomp on you like a bunch of angry rockers in a mosh pit
in a Slipknot concert, throwing chairs, tables, guitars and stools
Hit you with an archer's tool like Robin Hood
robbing the king and the Sheriff of Nottingham
You just got raped like a prostitute!

Ill, if I knew how to inbox you, I would. I know it is not a professional, but I am in a tight spot and could use your help. Trust me, if there was any other way, I'd not bother you. But I am doing a song called Round the World. It is an angry and fast paced song, but I have hit a snag. I need a chorus. If you would help me develop one, I'd make sure you got a shout-out in my song.

What does your song talk about?

oh i wasnt sayin you were biting or anything... but he says

"tired of workin a dead end job with lame pay, tired of be hired and fired the same day"

battle anyone?

Yeah I know that completely slipped my mind

but all around... those bars were magnificent... great work homie, ya never let me down when ya drop bars