Neverending Rap Battle

remember when it was just pen n pad , sittin in the dark,
lighting the night, kings , as we spit in the park
hittin that spark , marked with scars ,
going as far as mars an quantum leaping stars
quartz crystals teleport epistles
for the fourth dimension , homies u cant snort accension
trying to get higher, try there is no try only sky fly homie n jsst do
gravity is relevant , to the depths ur willing to step towards intelligence
physics n mystics ,tempest tempt this alchemists ,flow n exist
exit is entry so dont tempt me to kill this image an reinvent me
sent me to sentry this century, extrasensory going for sensitivity training
......**** YOU... hear that ????
"BANG" ya Feel That ?
mang thats real rap...

First one was dope....but the second ones last bar was nice!....salute

Hate to sound repetitive...but the last bar was ill!!...salute

repeditive said ta kids deja vu quit eating sedatives
set a shiv , up in ya rib ,jsst jokin
jsst tokin
spliff dopein
liberate ,dont wait till its to late an ur liver aches
question whats infesting ya dinner plate
resting n ingestin some minute maid
intestines wrestling
fight a flu , starve a cold
sick ,of you demons who dont feed the soul
free the soul
flush the toilet an leave ego
dope behind the placebo dont need a needle
in the blood stream , translucent transfusion transylvein ya ,fang ya , angers ,in danger ,lack of common sense in the blood bank bra
bangarang a dang manger of bethlaham an pray u don't pegan
Dope reagan baggin votes, throat dragon , toe taggin foes braggin,
chokes gaggin,smoked bags n both souls bakin,so theres no shakin hope
grab a melody an start taking notes ...


Peace....Prof -Mic Ill Dugas

super man you high enough ?
just past wonderwoman n didn't give a flying ****
or a high whats up! uh sup? u that ****'d up?
he's trippin like he's hittin pipe's of cryptonite
flipping lights n sippin like the green lanterns flickering
an cant find out where to put the liqour in,
six'r gin n a cup to put the mixer in
now b4 u take this ride i need a contact of next a kin
?why? said storm ,,, so i can have sex again
, ugh hmmph , "what?'
I said in case we have to clone ur estrogen,excellent, 1 more test n then
its over , need to test your motor functions when ur not sober
pumpin ,johnny full a blaze till he's gone solar

go talk to yo nigga saviour
acting with yo pedo behaviour
park yo van cuz imma purma ban
yo owe money so you family got owes
well nigga imma break yo bones
ill cut yo trough a butter knife
grow up and beat yo wife
ill put bullets in yo face looking like a krakin
like you blow boogers in a napkin
in my nabour hood yo be stabbed in the front yo best man put you in his trunk
in yo nabour hood you all go cry to yo mums
the worst you done was a knock and run
so chill it son
fo when the moon comes up so do i
bitch

hey guys : ) what do you think I need to work on ?

what can i do to get better ???

i'll be taking requests on topics if anyone wants to challenge me or give me a challenge ???

im all ear's ...

Well its always cool to reflect on improvement...u seem to have a pretty good grasp on how u wanna flow..I woldnt say its something to improve on...just maybe add a lil bit more about u personally...we know ur lyrical prowness..don't be hesitant to pound ur chest about it..u nice with the rhymes..**** it..scream it out..lol..only way to improve to me is write a lot...even when u don't feel like it...I basically try and make a rhyme out of everything..lol...I will think up some topics..maybe we can start one and everyone has to write something to it until we switch up..good exercise....peace

check it.

when i was free, when i used to do what i want and go and be me, i was reluctant, now i just say **** it
i could snap with a gage, when i release all of this rage, by the turn of a page, cause when it's all on this page, it leads to me bein an insane
maniac, or a psycopath, but im not here to do that
on this verse, it could get worse if i dont though
and if you dont know? you better ask someone
you better BASH their fuckin BACK with a BAT when you HAVE someone
when you BAG someone, ACT somewhat, of an mc when ya CRACK their BACK
shake hands like a man, dont back down when you've had enuff
cause nothin IS enuff, dont tone down, you fuckin tone, deff ****
ink better BUST from your pen, when you RUSH from the rest, cause the FUSS is the best, get TOSSED down the steps
and if that happens just walk back up them, act like nothin happen, hold your finger up and just say **** um
that's the REAL motto, im pumped, here comes your chance, dont **** up
keep dreamin even if the dream your dreamin is too big too be dreamin



http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Y3-gT48_kYQ&feature=player_detailpage

pull the lever, im more than better, i worship the devil
so grab the candles, the holy water, and the crucifix, begin your experiment, who ever thought id stoop to this?
who thought id ever be stupid enuff to fall in love with blood lust?
im arsenal, my lyrics paint a picture, many just call it vivid
so this time when i burn your house down, you're goin with it
im sick of all of this, walk up on ya with a Jason Mask, snap your spinal cord with a baseball bat
dont get me started, im mad for a knife, to slit my own throat and come back meaner in my afterlife
man for life, dont cry when i kill you this time, FYI twitchin your legs aint gonna get me stop
im not a dick, well technically i am, cause im also nuts, im the full package, and extended warranty
i dont chose to write this **** myself, the devil is forcin me
im more than mean, im crossin boundaries, crossin lines that shouldnt be crossed
dont mind me im just drownin hannah montana in her own lip gloss
gettin pissed off, im risky business, bronson pichot dont have a chance at livin
a nerve has been strikin i can tell (how?)
cause your pants fell down, you're exposed, your dick is smaller than your nose

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mpEK0KsF_yc&feature=fvwrel

rhymekilla...... tell me i dont know what multis are now....

kid messaged me and mentioned that "i dont know what multis are" cause i said he needed more..... woops.

break your spinal cord and end up in the hospital
i'm climbing to the top and you ain't no ******* obstacle
your not even real, your an illusion
me against you, your definitely lossin
say your best, there must be a confusion
sleeper hold, intill your out cold, snoozin
my family member, yeah i miss her
you shouldn't have brought up my sister
i'll eat at your body intill i say that i'm full
**** what you said before you now made it personal
you want to be good, here's a secret i'll show you
you want to be deep, live the **** that i go through
i lock myself in my room to escape my own crap
i don't understand why you even made the first rap
i hope you write back
so you could fall into my trap.
listen........
i'm the last person you ever want to doubt
you say respect...... so what the **** was that last line about
your blind, your ******* delirious
you think that this is fun... now this **** is serious
rap is an alcohol, i drink it by the gallons
you want to battle, i'm up for the challenge
hope my career blows me up into somethin
i'm there with a shotgun to blow you up into nothin
shutdownpow:" a 14 year old boy beat me, hope people don't laugh at me"
thats what happens when you bring up someones family
that last line broke respect like it was never said
you calling me fake yet my sister really is dead
i'm drunk on rap, there's not a time when my sober
just sit back and relax cause this battle is over.

Just found out that Adam Yauch, original Beastie Boy, died of cancer on Friday. RIP ADAM!

Whoa whoa..take it easy young fella...u can't come on a battle or rap site and catch feelings...this is an open forum where noone knows anyone personally..and u should understand that..ur showing ur inexperience in fun battle rapping..I am sorry for ur loss..but how would I know that?...everything is fair game when u battling buddy...that's just what it is..if ur gonna get butthurt everytime someone says something u deem a personal attack...u need to write for songs only..battle raps are not for you..and yes the battle was over when u caught feelings.....u didn't have to state ur age...u showing it...that's a no no...u loss

WELL ANYWAYS
rough rugged reckless got em crying stop
i wrecks **** like bulls run thru china shops
have you beleiving pink elephants in the corner
after life receiver,thats black and white like zebras
like jesus the masses need us,you're MIA,like malcom jamal warner
kill overseas i'm familiar to foreign coroners
smorgasbord of morgue corridors,bullets warmed ya corneas
pitchfork joins ya groin no beef kid i just porkloined ya
vexed man so you get X'd man but u bitch so i STORM ya
thank god he made me NICE like SAN DIEGO CALIFORNIA
ego destroyer bout to clean this house like a eco porter
these fuckers scream doubt when i scout performances
i get paid like mortgages the more i live i'm born again
on the audobon crossed off course forced into cribs
**** your porn my friend smoke some of this scorching pen
imploring cringes in ya membranes **** lord i'm sick
explicit quips that rips **** still rocks out like portishead
no fan of pop so **** MADONNA and that lil LOURDES bitch
dont crowd me like hording kids or cortisone will sauce ur ribs
they gonna have to sort ya kids with mad family members
but sadly i remember ur only 14 still shooting puppy water
i'm a stay black like grambling members u oughtta stop rambling nigga
with ur life u gambling nigga i be stampeding and trampling niggaz
CRIPPLED brain lame dead man WALKING i cant STAND this nigga
only magic mentals interpret this **** like sorcerors wit
thesaurus thesis exploring this warriors spit,often make coroners sick
when i hit it from behind you can say i'm dogging ya bitch
but then again ur only 14,ur hands be mauling ya dick
i'm a send you a pic of my bitch tho you cant afford this bitch
she understands ya hideous hate while she holding this dude
14?,,,i got motherfucking video tapes older than you!!!,,,son,,,,lol,,,gone

yeah i know that now i just got ahead of myself

No problem I understand y it would touch a nerve...I just have a no holds barred everyones game when I write..its NEVER EVER personal..can't be..we don't know each other...keep up the good writing...no hard feelings

rippin scripts, tearing space n time stareing at the baron aware then, the truths not always apparent a parent scared to pay there rent kids praying they can save there rents , makin sense , trying to turn it to billions take some brilliants bright lights resiallant not letting the ceiling win , flow higher then helium , really feel the fun of it when ya real n ya love it , spillin ill n chillin n public ,dub it,spark it in the darkness , artists paint a picture,breatheing cyphs , weaving life , freeing light , fight demons , steaming ,screaming ,we all have the right to dream n left to our own ambitions, open minds an listen to souls an Live it , get it , got it ? , good , great , fantastic ,Ink-credible its inevitable
making it or taking it , never faking it , for the ancients ,quit was never put in the dna , mdma ,in a C.I.A agent M.I.A ,a quarter dozen quarts a forth dimension to pour ,knife n fork , spork , but don’t eat that pork , no remorse still have a 7 course meal with the four horseman , thor chuck norse hands,morphin blood coursin endorphins a fortune of feelings,real kings never felt so rich,can’t buy it ,steal it or kill it , this the real ****,ill sick ,will it, feel it in the helix,take a picture look back 20 years from now still it ………enjoy the show , exploit the flows , leaving smoken toilet bowls broken if u think u the bomb ****…. Cherry bomb you pussies ….still in ya moms clit …….if ya listen n ya honest , then mission accomplished , homie only accomplice a pen n vision ,adrenaline prison patient is’nt sittin n waiting to start breaking out ,whoever guarding this industry take um out ,dig underground, to make it out, n feeling free …………get rid a the bloodsuckers ,leeches n parasites , aint killin me …….

Look up pat stay vs thesaurus that battle is personal as ****!

"now your just puttin yourself in a bigger ditch than the one your fathers sitting in"

yeah man. im sorry maybe next time i'll just have fun