Neverending Rap Battle

your the only one that gets it.. i respect you man

I think you should take out the cerebral-evil-knevil-sequal segment it don't really fit withthe topic but the rest is deep

i actually might just do that. thanks for pointing that out

SERIOUSLY, dude.
Methinks B-Rabbit has come back as an Apple gadget. (Look at your username!)

Why would someone bite a line off of one if the best movies ever written? It's mind boggling.

COOL

My memory is going..I didn't even realize it..I gotta stop wasting bars on such nonsense..smh

Ssup please do rate this. Recoverin from writers block...this freestyles structured to Eminem's Keeping It Raw freestyle...check it

I'm beatin this brawl ,defeat is your call/
Bloodstains on the wall, bedsheets bleed in the hall/
Demons if called, can get your feet on the ground/
So summon them now, they're all u need in this round/
I'm faster than a hound runnin faster than sound/
Plaster cast on your bone, watch your skeleton drown/
Tendons all torn, bent till they burn/
An exorcism of wits is what u get messin with God/
I'm stressing it all, stretching this broad/
Deflectin a sword with psychokinetic force/
B-Rabbit in works, ripe static sick flows, /
my victims are triple of what the statistics show/
magical verse ,its a tragical surge/
raping a nurse, taking her purse/
before tearing her skirt that makes her berserk/
Dick flappin like birds, head whacker than hers/
**** rappin this first, I just crapped on your shirt/
Punch filled in your lungs till your black kidneys burst/
Stay in your lines, get back in the Hearse/
Attack with an urge, I'm just trapped in this curse/
Blow me to bits, let the fragments disperse/
Maniacal minds merged, made me allergic to church/
The Devil said, "your attitude was fucked, but what's with the words ?!"/
I'll turn you back to the dirt, and then batter the rust/...
Your badder than the worst, shatter your lyrics to dust/"...
I said " It doesn't matter ************, cause my spirit is tough/
I'm sicker than most, and when I'm done with you know,/
Nothin will resurrect you, even a miracle won't..."/ ...


Read it and weep ...

yo is that you Frost ? lol

really u guys didnt notice that ????

and he's black guy in this movie line ....... he tried to reformat ems lines....


lol ............ k im finishing up this track tonight

then ima drop some bars .... I want everyone to beat ....

no lol i'm just dfc100

can someone tell me why
i don't seem to cry
when one of my loved ones die
it just doesn't hurt me inside
my heart is dead, covered black, so its hard to find
if your like me, ok that's fine
no could have a life that's close to mine
**** the happy people and show them how it's like being cold
this is the way i am, now that the devil has my soul
my evil side is coming out, almost like it's leakin
no matter what, my anger never seems to weaken
i got wounds from a gun
burns from the sun
rap is my life, i don't take it for fun
cause i'll keep rapping intill you say that i won
this world ain't strong enough to drop me
so powerful that god can't even stop me
post a negative comment and try to act cool
i'll come to your house and drown you in your swimming pool
and steal your car while i'm at it
give you a concussion to make you believe you never had it
twist your neck intill i snap it
put my lyrics on paper and let's see you try to rap it
i feel like a warrior screaming, pounding my chest with my sword
i'll scream my raps out loud intill i break my vocal cord.

dfc100 man, all day... i'm just trying to keep it real

this is to everyone !!!!!!!!!!!!

People whack n over embelish
, so I smack um over the pelvis
, n pass um over to elvis
, to kick there ass old school when there acting overzealous
trying to get hot dogg over relish
,ur vegan why you even beefin ?
got no reason
, my eyes cubased ,
split ya head if ya two faced
,quarter brained
,snort ya cane , my booth is laced , with telephone wire n ya boots is laced
, court ordained aint even gonna dispute this case ,
not in it for the money or the fame
, for the adrenaline rush when I crush ya name
,yellow bellied nothing but mustard stains
concussion came
come bust ya brain with percussion per cuss n frr nothing mane ,
graffiti ya veins have u in the lab huffin paint
, picture that
, radiation poisoned ,scavies patient ,ever here a sicker rap ,
candy rappers snicker at aviation school till they fly the coupe
an forget there parachute ,
taking shots but scared to shoot
, cause u only attack mf who r scared a you
,ud be twice as fucked if there was a pair of you
,don’t care if you have a twin aint something ur prepared to do
,choke artists aint got the air to do these high flying heights,
short sighted
, angel dust ya brains an snort ya eyelids
,if u wanna be a dope emcee…
fork ya eyes kid
u bin served on the fork of Poseidon
off the port im wyling
I sorta decided I wanna put a sword in ya privates recording ya silence
I could rewind it but id rather fast forward the violence
pass your words n those sirens
n the pastors words of your past burned ta ash n ur last words diein
…… to where u admit im the master rhymeing

my victims are triple with what the statistics show,,,nice line,,,salute the whole piece

i sorta decided i wanted to put a sword in your privates recording ya silence
i could rewind it but i'd rather fast foward the violence!!!....dope bar,,salute

like school crossing guards dude stop it or its verbal rockets
burning you with my tongue like i just popped a hot pocket
i'll leave you hobblin with my pen ya rhymes come up shorter
than goblins i know u ogelin my lines tryin to be a better author
thats sort of a wild dream ur rhymes schemes cant find me
i'm elusive and truthfully this is ruthlessly child abusive
check the rhyme scheme its not ur basic layout funny boy
stop laughing bitch ur impending demise is not funny boy
shut me down well you left open the window of oppurtunity
u still aint accomplished promises on what ya gonna do to me
i stay with heat from the street straight stay beating his meat
notebook laptop you see ILL be keying between quilted sheets
even tho i'm constipated i'm never stressing mr.doo doo
hear that sound?now illustraight undergound like sewage do
bought the smith and wessons to you,resurrection of desmond tutu
think horse racing saddles stay still as i insert the lead into you
get ur weight up son cause right now you at a major handicap
truthfully i coulda wrote this at WOODBINE,i always keep a handy rap
i gots my back noone else i flow for self dont need no help
u an animal?,good ur head fits right in on my trophy shelf,,lol,,out

I am an animal, so you should probably make a run for it
Because if I catch you, I’ll devour your body and take a chunk from it
I just read your page, but none of it had any phase of logic in it
Am I reading a rap, or reading an essay in JavaScript?
I could stoop to your level, but I’m not petty like you
A “Woodbine” is a plant, that’s got berry-like “fruit”
So what you’re trying to say is, you’re a lesbian-like dude
A closet homo who likes being dressed in thigh boots
I’ve just looked up “Woodbine”, there are lots in Wikipedia
So which one do you live in? The one in West Virginia?
The one in New Albany, or the one in Indiana?
Or maybe the one in the state of Calgary, Canada?
I’d tell you where I live, but giving away’s not my forté
You wanna **** around with me? That’s some awful foreplay
While you’re between ‘quilted sheets’, I’m scoring with your babe
I shoot hoops round the ring, she calls me LeBron James
I slam-dunk her the basketball way
While you work as an usher selling popcorn and lemonade
I would act like a “gangsta” and let the calibre spray
But I play with letters, so let’s see what my alphabet says

I'm on my A-game, you don't **** with me, B
C? Maybe I should call you a D
Because you're a cop that's on E
So F your style, and you say they call you a G?
I H you, I should sit back and smoke a J
Once I bodybag pow, I’ll go home o-K
I take an L, and leave M terrified
I respect blacks, so I’ll say I’ll leave this “N” jeopardised
O, so now you say your Mobb’s Deep like P
(scoffs) Not likely!
Get in the Q, pow, because you R full of S (****)
I’d bust shots through your T, but U are not even worthy of death
So I’ll just snap you like a V
Throw up a W at that, X him out, and Y, he’ll catching lots of Z’s!

@illustraight...chill b..its just rhymes,lol...woodbine is a racetrack in canada..look it up..henceforth the lead inserted in saddle,weights..bullets?..they do that to equal the playing field if u have less weight ur at an advantage if not they call it a handicap....it all ties in..I just figured the international types know horseracing..pardon me for being partially obscure..out

ur actin so dumless
man wat are u rappin about this guy is wordless
so he tries to be cool with a couple of diss
man f--- that ur gettin to ma stress
1 thing u should know biatch everyone is the best

Hey, it's all good. It's part of creativity. What did you think about the alphabet play?