Neverending Rap Battle

i finally arrived.......
starve to death, eat the meat, but choke when it's raw
i'll punch you in the face intill you choke on your jaw
the hate you have to embrace
my shoes i have to re-lace
god just gets my angry from the people he creates
everyone ow's me
noboby knows me
they cant see even if they looked closely
this **** has damaged me, internally,
when i cant even trust the people that are close to me
i'm the leader of this earth and that's how its suppose to be

this is my first... i'm really tired its like 4:49 when i put this up. but this is my first and believe me i'm up for a battle cause i know that i could be good just wait till i get to my state of mind you will be blown away. so if you want to battle we come to this wedsite and if you want to battle inbox me a message cause i might check later if i'm not on

I'll punch you in ya face until u choke on ur jaw..nice line...okay we shall see my dude..we shall see...holla

I'll punch you in the face till you choke on your jaw...

Similar to Ems line on BET "keeping raw" verse

Didn't hear that one bam...hope homie ain't a rhyme lifter....no good

1:02

how wants to battle ?
You go first

maybe im morphing or something..... but i just downloaded "headlines" and "the motto" onto my computer. but im just extending my ears and tryin to get ideas.

I've listened to this song at least 50 times in the past 12 hours aha

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uHAf39N0VdA

check it out true hip hop at it's best

The Saurus posted that on Facebook.... that's real **** for sure.


I've probably have listened to Hammer Dance by Slaughterhouse 50 times aswell in the past 12 ahaha

The best part is that he's not exaggerating that's exactly how it happened

And I gotta look that up then lol

Right? not tooo many rappers nowadays tell it how it actually is.

I'm in love with Crooked's verse.

Werd like there's mad people who brag about that stuff but then you look at hollohan and u know what it's actually like "showed up to ur funeral on the same thing that took your life from you" that's how bad addiction can be which makes these wannabe gangsters look like pathetic liars he did a battle with Cortez and said this which explains it perfectly "you have all these stories bout how u ride and you steal and the nine you conceal but I'm a cokehead so I can always tell when a line isn't real"

Yeah...some of those tracks that tell the truth about yourself are some of the best tracks to ever be recorded. sure sometimes you can brag and boast about yourself but you got to have some tracks about how your life ACTUALLY is. and it's the first time i heard this guy but i that may just be the realeast thing i've heard EVER.

he used to be the KOTD champion until he lost it to thesaurus

"I guess your father blamed me and the people at the bar I didn't see it directly it's like I seen it from afar I told X there's something I needed from his car I cried for you bruce and stuck another needle in my arm" wow

Eminem's "keepin it raw" line was somethin like "sink your teeth in the jaws"... That's pretty alright considering the fact that most tend to bite small bits of end line rhymes just to keep the flow goin...

If I'm not wrong, another verse from a rapper (not mentionin names) few posts back on this page, had a rhyme scheme of "human horror film" and "Lauryn Hill"...a direct lift off from Em's Bad Influence and a few others before that too though I ignored his minor lifts... I wouldn't call that coincidence at all...though the rapper probably would call it "inspiration". Lol

Look up 100 bars no pen no pad by him ******* insane "I'm no joke like comedians with the volume off u wanna get the cops involved your softer than a cotton ball"
"your only hot in the booth when your tanning" lol

subliminal? you coulda just said my name on that horror film one...

and if ya wanta know what Em said in "keeping it raw" i posted it on the last page... LOOK at it. 1:02... close enuff to be called biting.

and if ya wanta debate on that horror film linee, hit me up, i knew i heard that line somewhere before i wrote it... and those lyrics are trash now cause i realized it.

dont be subliminal if your gonna call someone out. outtie

You shouldn't have posted them cause I find it funny they weren't posted a long while ago yet just now you call them "trash"...kinda beats the whole spirit of lyrical freestyling , don't u think...

And there's nothing to debate on that line either homie.

And I pretty much am as big a fan of Em as u are, so just the first part of that verse by dfc seemed bitten though he altered the second part(choke on your jaws to Em's sink teeth in your jaws)...

And I'm not callin anyone out lol... I'm just makin a statement to Shutdownpow and that DOES NOT require mentioning anyones names. If I wanted to call u out, wouldn't I think of a direct way like I've done before. Its all in good terms. Peace.

So being subliminal or not is out of the question !

lol. i call them trash now, cause i figured out it was from an em verse. I SAID i knew i heard it somewhere, i found the verse it was from, and those lyrics are no where in my computers memory anymore, ahaha. **** happens. you werent calling anyone out? oh well i was. lol.