Neverending Rap Battle

thanx for the feed back bambino,,,,i guess for me its more of a hobby,,i dont record,,so i never really write to beats,,but im gonna start,,that gives u more of a theme to follow

dudu u doo doo with ur delivery and cadence
dudu u doo doo with ur misery and hating
dudu u doo doo when u apply mental with paper
dudu got a loud mouth like his moms when i raped her
dudu u doo doo everytime you try a new rhyme scheme
ooops he dont know what that means thats a sublime dream
you a pigmy i'm a viking stop fighting what im writing
clash of the titans you aint never invited or exciting
doo doo writing feces excretement,no believement
must be weeded,keep ******* with me hell will receive him
u can bet ur last dollar i dwell in the hood plastic faggot
**** cereal in the morn we just pour milk over maggots
steal cable from neighbors and then rob they asses
you able to call males and proceed to rob they asses
bitch ass clown questioning my background get off mine
just jealous cuz he lives in a town with one ******* stop sign,,holla back

GUESSSSSSSSS WHHHHHAAAATTTTTTTTTTT

SNOOP DOGG CHECKED OUT MBK's TRACKS YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


so sick

Did he really? Any feedback?

lean back, lean back when i have my hand around you waist girl
lean back, think fast, when i have my privates to your ass girl
lean back, yo, lean back, i just want ya ta lean back, yeah, lean back
dont even try to escape the death grip, when my hands are clinched to your hips
just lean back, dont hesitate, no need to wait, just lean back

back in the same boat, hoes, or whores, throw um overboard into the water
cause a chick under water, stays under water, till she drowns down under
and carrie will be under, my wood, no pun intended, cause if there was she would be beheaded
givin me head in, the back of a limo, zine, my voice is so mystique on a beat like this
multiplied by six, thousand electrical watts in my back it stings like this (ahh!)
doctor kevorkian, in the club with, scalpels and knives ready ta tear bras off
knock these broads off, the bar stools, like nas do, in my superman costume
i have the trooper man roster, last name foster, poppin champagne bottles
rippin the pages outta the good lords bible, i have no rival, my flow is tribal
my lyrics are 5-0 to your 5-4, in other words im undeafeted, or never beated
even if ya tried with your last ounce of energy while your rapping, ya still couldnt match me
im just too nasty, just too crafty, flip your words so fastly, it's fastening, im cracking
im done to my last straw like whitney, beat got me actin filthy, im in my own relm, my own empire
conquer every last rapper that tries ta, step ta me, imma monsta, pass the rasta
the ganja, smoke like it's 420, everyday, slaving these rappers like kony, your phony
you'll never be like me, it's nice ta see ya try though, at least your tryin ta be like me

anybody get the last straw-whitney line? lol

Yea he actually did check um out he listened to them on emcee wes B's soundcloud an he listened to a few tracks but the one he listened to six times was the one frost wes an I dropped on no feedback yet , wes is going to snoops upcoming show in calgary and he's gonna try to do his thing .... however Snoop played the song 6 times there must be something about it he liked

Looking for a sign
Blinded by the light ya looking for , rhyme it right , devine cyph , design ignite , minds like plastique between the asscheeks , bout to blow **** up , Git up out that grave, the walking dead , running mouths , get lids bucked , thinking its all bout money, Pay attention Pay respect , hustle nike Pay some check’s , mates chest full pull a chess , pawn for a queen,a kingdom without a crown,singing without a sound,thinking without a doubt , inking this cloud with a fresh lining signing johnny handcock hip hop Alfred Hitchcock , in the hourglass that tick tock ,about to rip off the face of falicy , chaseing space n galaxy’s only the 1st dimension wormholes burn holes into turned souls twist inside out by the time they make it out the slipstream puberty hits sixteen years later that search for creator surface searches an searches ,through urges , nervous , looking for purpose,blind to what the eyes cannot see,minds open to the line wrote a path to follow , hourglass’s never hollow , break the bottle,that sand over time turns to glass that will get smashed scratched away by the winds of nature ,an join a larger hour glass the makers ,paper burns,razors turn dull ,computers crash,humans die but keep the knowledge alive ….so what ever you conclude in class, history repeats itself ,when you say screw the past,speak for ya self , you keep ******* with it…


Holla

hip hop hero,right here yo , ink-credible do the inevitable
invincible,third eye invisible ,fly n defy physic's principles
ultrasound catapult killa volts through a pulse cannon
Hulk slamming ,Plasma under microscopes pulse examined
the results standing in a particle accelerator
getting shafted drafted to get thrown down elevators
this isn’t what I signed up for
what am I supposed to tell the papers
Give um hell major? , <no Ink u better think about the twelve lazers that will melt you if you felt you’d like to leave > always was a hell raiser !
Outside a thief held a razor to a pregnant ladies throat
Saying give me ur money or your baby’ll choke <ladie screaming-please …no ….Don’t>
Supersonic speed put the assailent on his knees
an picked him up with an atomic wedgie
Dropped that bomb quick ,aren’t you Tom Prisketti
, that bully from st Thomas middleschool who use to pull machete’s
an act a little cruel bitter fool let me be the one to put you in ya place ,
foot in a face , going to central booking looking for a case ,
im sure you’ll cop one , rat an drop one
get smacked by a gat an get off’d some loft slum coffin
scum problem , inks ph balance only got solutions
acid base ya ass n face n find resolution
instead of retribution ya basket case
ur twisted in a straight jacket , at least they masked that face ……

Ink-that lady had her baby an I watch over it daily

the evil seed ….. the day Tom Prisketti turned into Deadly Machete Prisketti

an the birth of baby melody ...

thats great professor,,,just getting someone to listen is so important,,never know where it goes from there,,,post some links if u got em,,would love to hear what he was listening to,,,salute

vinni sane? yeah vinnis great, vinnis game ******* insane
just kidding vinnis lame he should just be lucky i mentioned vinnis name
that might have been a decent flip if i had actually mentioned your bitch
but i didnt cuz i know u dont have one vin
i cant even respect or laugh at your lines cuz half of the time they dont even rhyme
in rap we usually rhyme our writtens
have u noticed im going easy cuz have trouble with english
well **** that im an ambidextrous achidemist aimin at ya apparatus
an aresonal of analogies armed like automatics
on the mic im droppin concotions the fuckin chemisist
**** your entire country im the russian supremissist
i hope you overdose on sedetives then ill send over 11 of your aids infested relatives
the 7th will be filled with so much estrogen youll stick your dick in her crevices till you cant form any sentances
now compare all that to your stupid line about a kids meal
well all that crap is probably a hobby for you so i guess it aint a big deal

yo, when i was born, crazy was labeled on my baby craddle
i was barely able, to breath, i was fatal, stapled paper ova my mouth
grabbed chainsaws and started swingin um around
stabbed women with knives and ate the blood off the blade like it was french fries
war lord of this rap ****, smash your head and get your face split
after your head was off your neck i musta misplaced it
so i ripped your spinal cord outta your back and made you taste it
just face it, no rapper can face me, put fear in the eyes of the emphatical oppenent
when i spit it's a magical potion, threw you in an open ocean while jaws attacks with jaws wide open
flawless lotion when im jackin my dick off when im in a coma
rip the iv outta my arms it's ova, killed three nurses and sprayed the room with magnolia
run down the halls yellin "im killin all a ya", chased down by the security
but they didnt come near me, cause they fear me
escaped from the psych ward unscaved, then one day
i went to the gas station, bout some matches and gasoline went back and blew the bitch ta smitherines
you may think this is a dream, but it's a nightmare, at 3 i was peein on my highchairs
im an american human horror film, pukin out orange milk on lauren hill
bustin a heater on justin bieber, cause i dont agree with selena eitha
a psycopath killa, the first ta tell mac milla to go back to his crack deala
rihanna, lady gaga, or madonna, are all in my lineup
it's time ta, start namin which women are lost product
which one will end up in a shoe box in the middle of swamp uh
i've done enuff ta make ya think im crazy, when me an casey
anthony hang out at the local adoption center lookin to adopt a baby togetha
no one can be betta

Crazie with the a stuff in the middle of the verse...nice drop

**** was hot...first line was crazy...the casey anthony adoption **** was dope...nice!!!!

This aint to no 1 just some quick bars, rate me & i'll rate you and no bad talk ii8!!

check it,

look
I aint new to this rap game, been doing this **** since young age/
young getting bucks, fully paid, something similar to what G-Unit make/
fully paid, aint from harlem but grind out hard like how NY came/
im from a shitty city where its all gritty with rain hittin down with flames/
hustle hard on these streets, something like jeezy gets paid/
keep my enviroment clean like ecologists fade away from snakes/
keep my Arm-strong like im bout to be on the moon in space/
leave me tied to a cage and i'll garantee u'll come out straight/
yeahh, i found a technique that works on gays (ha ha)/
cure u like aids, so come to the DOC "MUR-DOC" will keep u safe/
fixing humans **** technology, come to me i'll fix u up properly/
got tools to do it but depends on yes, maybe or proberbaly/
my rhymes is tight, get into your mind even when ur alive consciously/
look im over with my DOC days now call me MUR representing the 2-1-2/
got you feeling intimidated and shook like its 2 on you/
your running for cover, niggas ducking under like its thunder/
peeing urself on ur bed sheets got u screaming at others/
you thought u was dreaming but u just really discovered/
i'll take ya to the street bitch, now get ready to suck my sweet dick/
wont let u speak kid, got u vomiting quick, call it speed sick/
indeed bitch you still alive, u think u high cause u ate weed bitch/
but it was asprin tablets, overdosed now you can breathe "****"/
oxygen dont want you, he running away from you, keeping it speed quick/
uhhh bruhh i hear u talk bout guns, something u aint played with before/
hoodlum right?, thats why my dawg seen u in the park playing on a seasaw/
bet big amounts of dollars if i gave you five bullets you wont use it/
all hype, i see all five still in the magazine you never used ****/
could never use metal, but claim u brutally abuse it n bruise ****/
but its all bullshit, the way u talk ****, best use my two tips/
i leaved 1 bullet in for you to pop ya own head u better use this/

Step in the ring I'll send fatal blows to this homosexual 
Knock the king of able 2 know off his pedistal
Turn him to a vegtable leave him with an open wound they'll throw him out at whole foods 
Cuz ya shelf life expired
Here's a tip from mic messiah 
Just RETIRE 
Nobody listens to your music or your songs  
When snoop dogg listened he was probably hitting the bong
Your writtens are wrong 
Slit your dads throat and piss on your mom 
I hope you give head to a chainsaw that rips your brains off 

Ehh idk can't think of anything else lol all in love homie nothing personal congrats on the listen by snoop MBK 
 

Not gonna lie thats pretty dope haha. and i dont mean to rap the same **** i just cant think of **** sometimes. im practising

should never talk about my family
even if i was pussy youd still never handle me
trying put ya hands on me ,calamity jane smoking ya sanity
youd attempt to date me, when that failed you attempt ta rape me
pull a billy ray cyrus achey breakey ya heart
ur feening screaming you got the indiana jones
hands a stones split ya bannana dome
ur bitch screaming leave my man alone
unzip pull out my dick seamen breathing underwater she's drowning
in more flows then pediatric assholes , get that old **** outta here
pull that dick out ya ear
you can hear it coming, get the **** outta hearing distance
Acoustic bombs,blow ya brain up worse then cocaine , listen
b4 u go cobaine kissin ,i dope brains with propane hit the ignition
well ya'll bitchin n wishin
u had the right intuition an ambitions
shooting ya mouths off with no ammuntion
Prof's universe gave ya girl the big bang , so keep clique clickin
im done with these chickens
those breasts are nice n those legs finger lickin

I come in this lobby with my fists clenched and knees wobbly.
im knew to this rap **** but is a hobby.
you can stop me im gettin up like caps lock
your **** is old like father times old clock.
so gimme a rock, or better a glock, cuz i plan on fightin for this, wont ever stop.
this **** is a rush and got my face blushed and has my weight increasin till everybody's crushed.
i got that mean flow sittin at home and takin notes
i work with my pen and rap random like goats.
sometimes it seems like a hoax or like my words shouldnt boast.
but my game is getting heated like a sunday's roast.
ur all toast cuz im the mac that has a mind thats on crack
and pretty dam soon ill me the number one target. priced to get wacked.
but i dont give a **** and you wont ever get in my mind set.
im in an armored truck and havent arrived to the destination yet.
so write me a check for all the time i put in work.
im robbin the bank and killing everybody but the clerk
im a jerk. but i guess thats easy to see.
ill fry anybody's mind to tries to **** with me.
i rap random and about everything that i see.
like the sea, sometimes its weird listnin to me.
my self, sometimes its like hell.
im lost in my thoughts til i hear that ringin bell.
at that point i start rappin my worlds well.
its swell. now that i think. thats kind of a funny word.
i feel like a fifty's supender wearing nerd. getiing picked on all called **** like turd.
favorite show is family guy, i guess the bird is the word
im obsured and insane theres something wrong up in my brain.
i dont even know sometimes what the hell that im saying.
but i guess its all practice like having sex with a slut
my hands swift on the keyboard keep accidently speling nut.
what? man i dont know im talking to myself.
sometimes i feel like life's too big and im standing short like santa's elf
i bet all you laugh at my words.
i bett its all stuff you've never herd.
its original so i guess thats the best.
im stressing to rap worse than a school test.
so i guess im done now, ill leave it to the rest.
just member im invincible,bullet proof vest.

ok i just wanted to give you an example of what you guys are doing ....


Hi im a rapper
a factor
a cracker jacker more pissed then his bladder
an step father
my house full a royce ,ortiz ,nino , budden , come get slaughter
im actually trying to dumb it down
but im to cocky so it keeps cumming out
something something bout something
running running mouths running
away from yo problems n troubles
dogs need a muzzle not a rebuttle
BITCH
walk around trying to be the best around
acting gangsta when i shank ya , ya blood dont make a f'n sound
this is retarded i started trying to get sloppy
wake up the next morning tell ya mom to get coffee
name aint door mat you aint welcome get the f off me
UCKING AGGETS ORGET IT UCCCCCCCKKKK
You SUCK


no hate i was really attempting to dumb it down just didnt happen though lol...