Neverending Rap Battle

Yo, you should write the second verse from 1:36- whenever.

Me?

Sure why not?

Does this make sense to u? Droppin nuclear bombs on the airways other words I'm radio active

ya'll think ur nutz?
I'll grown an acorn tree AND feed all the squirrels.
You Come on here, spilling your gutz
you Cheesy fucks got cum on your mouse
from jacking your tiny dick to gay URL's alone at ur house
Only time you pack heat is when you eat hot pockets.
I'm slick like snot rockets
Why don't you Hop off the prof's crotch, bitches?
Listen **** for brains, you think poo!
you couldn't keep your mouth shut, if you ain't glue!
I can't small ball with you taints and assholes
put candy paint on these skank's and hoes just like the axles.
I don't even read the topics before I reply!
That's how much respect I got for these guys
The only reason this dudes sick is because he spits dudes dicks
I seen him Oozin jizz out his snoz an shish!
it looks like that faggot just ate two pricks
then cleaned out his teeth with em' like toothpicks
I'm about to OD sniffing this old pussy like glue sticks
If a plumber installed a toilet for you, it still wouldn't be new ****

plant you in a garden but for a purpose
since im bullet starvin i got you doin service
im americas next top hostile,i kill liars
you know your in denial,cuz i spit fires
dont hesitate to penitrate your southern state
dont act late,to meditate on this degenerate
seal ya doom,im hell with a sharp fang
like a cartoon with a gun that says bang

just thinkin

You weren't here so u missed it but we've been focusing alot on metaphors and wordplay I was tellin my friend yesterday that just because u use alot of complicated rhymes doesn't mean it's great unless you have something clever behind it

im just happy to know you guys listen'd an stepped ur games up

thanks for listening an sharing your talents an feedback , bambi , anything u want me on homie , Michael dugas -facebook
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and any of you other gys sammy whity , ills charlie , get at me just send me the beat , topic n what time u want me to fill ,

ps Sammy i really wanna help work on that website forreal !!!! send me another invite so i can help on it PLEASE AN THANK YOU = ) cant wait to show u guys what we are working on up here in calgary at the moment a collective of about 12 rappers 2 dj's 4 breakdancers , singers freerunners beatboxers an just supporters are all doing a shoot this saturday coming up .... u guys ima link everyone up together , everyone get a mic an an audio program lets work together an make another golden era of HIP HOP = )

I owe everything I know about rap to this site if it weren't for this site I'd still be rapping like this

Yo hoe get up and go to the sto get me some food cuz it's so good

http://soundcloud.com/milkboxkids/policebrutalitywithdrums


hey guys im working on some beats you guys wanna give me some feedback on this work in progress ?

any other sounds u can think of might flow well ? any fav instruments ?

sup playa's whats poppin poppin , magnitude , servin these feens baggin food
theres the check out , get the F out , never out a Breath , all these blow hards puffin out the chest , these cops aint nothin without a vest , or the power for something to arrest , i do attest to such atrocity's animosity growing an possibly , these lost citys will find absolution, instead choose to add to polution , an strippers pole using there holes as lost an found , I once was lost an drowned , out the noise , now im found spittin emittin sound till i lost my voice ......

ohh ..lolo

like...my nine be bustin leavin a concussion
put 5 bullets in yo ass like if you were a russian

think ur stuff sweet go get your tooth checked
if your playin with guns then play russian roullete
kids be dyin and tryin to just get a flu check
threads about battlin don't be tacklin loose ends

stop your gun talk
http://www.myspace.com/deltachangeinmusic/music/songs/one-less-gun-featuring-skinnyman-48914880

The way I kill wit raps,
I could pass in Slaughterhouse, takin naps,
Cuz I got mo' cred than you while takin a crap,
So I just keep up wit the beat, while you cant' drop a rap.
Slant rhyme **** aint my style, but I can kill it anyway,
And so many mafuckas got beef, I killem anyday.
Tryna keep up wit the Tech, he got away.
But he'll slow to listen, what you got say?

I was raised in da ghetto, da concrete jungle,
Everyday boys get shot, and tha jugular rumble.
Learned to dead 'em quick, my heart in a bundle,
I was dodgin' slugs age I was up an watchin Gundam.
Cops chasin, my life is get shot or get tazed,
night fell, shadows came out and slugs played.
Either ya got iron, or take a rock salt to the face,
So I survive livin on the edge of the world dese days.
All my life runnin from FEDS blue boys is scary men.
Everynight spent dreaming of the coffin i get carried in,
you don't want no beef cuz you a vegetarian.

Sort of try to stay away from the word like because similies are easier than metaphors like a good one I can remember by Tyler the creator is
"it's the revenge of the dicks that's nine cocks that cock nines"
or eminem
"so if you don't remember me I'll run your brain around the block to jog ya fuckin memory"

It seems hard but it's actually decently simple once you've got a good idea goin it takes time though so don't get discouraged

Be aware cause I'm over there, in the corner
Sneakin' up on ya, with a bottle of Coke and a plate of lasagna
Blow my fuckin' brains in your face, now I'm actually on ya
Yo, I met this girl named Tanya

Accent part of my "Any Man" Freestyle

Yo I'm startin to get into battle rappin if anybody is gonna start to get into it check out dizaster vs DNA
sickest battle ever fuckin 1 hour of punches metaphors and personal **** that will blow your mind

Real talk my man where u been