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@Bambino,

maybe bambi i try to stay away from rtemakes i like to come fresh...

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@theprofessor,

Yeah I know you do, that's you though, you do your own thing, which is brilliant. I play around with different flows and I would like to try and to a flow like Em did on that verse. I kinda have that flow but not as elequent.

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@Bambino,

This line make sense to u guys I'm still kind of iffy on if I should keep it?

You'll be happy when I spin ur head into the ground
That's why they call me the merry go round

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@WhiteMofoMonkysmugla,

Revised:

1. I had a girlfriend named Merry at once in my life, I could turn her frown upside down
By spinnin' her around, that'd be why they call me the Merry Go Round

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@WhiteMofoMonkysmugla,

if ur not sure then dont use it ,,,, now listen http://soundcloud.com/milkboxkids/society_why_would_u_lie_to_me

listen an give feedback please n thankyou

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I'm stella like Tom Stella. Worst line ever. Some kid from NY told me that on Facebook last night. Haha.

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@theprofessor,

I listened to that. What you mean, 'if your not sure then don't use it?'

That was dope, I like the hook and how you used your voice to instrument your anger.

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@Bambino,

i meant for whitmofo , if he doesnt like his line changed it or dont use it if it doesnt feel right ...

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@theprofessor,

Oh now I see.

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@Bambino,

He was talking to me but I took ills idea of spin a spider one and came up with this
"I'm a spider spittin webs and devouring "fly" rappers"

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@WhiteMofoMonkysmugla,

i like that ....

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@WhiteMofoMonkysmugla,

Yeah dude, there ya go. That's good. Really good actually. Check out Em's Despicable. He mentions somethin' bout that aswell

Anyone get this? Tell me if I should revise it, if you don't
--Just say cut to the Chase, meanwhile I'm rippin' that card

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@Bambino,

Yeah it was something like
"trying to give me the finger is like giving a spider the web
I'm just gonna spin it and try to use it to my advantage!"

I like that line it's good try wording it a few different ways and see which way u like best but that's a good concept

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@WhiteMofoMonkysmugla,

Yeah Em is just a masterpeice though, you're line doesn't need to come in comparison to his, your's was good enough to be legit.

But yeah that Chase line I just thought off the top.

We just start posting metaphors, lines, etc and see if we can comperhend it, ya know?

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@Bambino,

If you haven't already heard it check out his freestyle "syllables" on YouTube it's with a bunch of other artists

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@WhiteMofoMonkysmugla,

Heard it, it's a non-release

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@Bambino,

Yeah I know Thats why I wasn't sure of u heard it

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You could be jerkin in my direction you still wouldn't be coming at me

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@WhiteMofoMonkysmugla,

Nice.

Some could argue I come (cum) clean, well I don't use Downy, I use Tide bleach on the hole

I'm goin' through my metaphors from months back and I found this, speaking of sperm. Lol

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Time to belt up cause these pants of life feel like there hangin' off my butt and I.....

Worked it off of the "belt-up" phrase

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