Neverending Rap Battle

Post it I wanna see it
what are they doing with the video anyway? YouTube?

This is the overkill, the roto-till, sickness to the ill, the licence to kill
My knife in hand and the gun in my pocket, I pull it back and cock it
Blood stained over-alls and 3 missed phone calls from my victims moms with blood runnin' down the bathroom stalls
I'm mainly mistaken for insane, I'm the game and you're just the player, I'm an ill sprayer
I'm the one with pistol in my hand that's aimed at the town mayer better make a wish on a prayer like a shooting star flyin' through the o-zone layer
Better beware, I'm roamin' the streets at night with a sharp edge blood drippin' razor I'm crazier than Esham
*Better watch your mom cause I'm makin' a quit bit, what's the drill, cause I got the bit*
Get it?
Cause if ya don't I'll demonstate it hands on, grab ya by the throat watch you elote while I choke and you gasp for air and croak
*That's the most damage I'll ever do to a homo in the game cause they always stay the same*
(Pause)
*Ozzie fuckin' Osborn try bite my fuckin' head off cause he thought I was a bird cause I'm fly*
*I'm also the bees knees with the legs and the feet*
*Call me weak cause I eat a pussy with a canine and left the room with a feline*
I'm a diseased answer, under the weather with a slight cough, a headache and a slender bit of cancer
Nothin' is more backwards than your britches pulled up your ass and hung on a hook in the bathroom it hurts, that's me bastards
I'm the type of guy that stabs a needle full of melted steel in shove it in your knee that's me, I'm evil
I'm stilll tryin' to get my fuckin' act together and get my attitude loaned off
*Don't **** around with the sluts cause you'll end up gettin' your head blown off*
This MC **** is second nature, full of pen and paper
Full of rage and labor, I kill human beings with one slight shot of my hand tazer
Make fun of my actions cause this rap game is done this way
So keep talkin' about my thoughts and tell me tomorrow if I'm more of jerk than I was today

Here it is if you were wondering. *=metaphors, similes, wordplay, clever lines.

The video is still under development, should be done by next Wednesday possibly. The video is going up on his website. This guy films other rappers, artists'. He's just getting the website up as well, everything is in the works for this guy. He's 23 and trying to pursue in a filming career, really good, I'd say. Thank god I got this guy and not some bum to film me on there phone. I really hope this opens some eyes to someone in the industry, as he is also posting it on someother sites as well. I'll post it myself on my youtube account.

CONCRETE JUNGLE

[Intro]
It is a silver concrete jungle out there
Nobody’s safe
Not at all
Not even me

[Hook]
I’ve been living on this Earth for over 25 years
And all I can say is that it’s a jungle out there
It’s a jungle out there
All I can say is that it’s a jungle out there
Guerillas and thugs hanging on the town square
All I can say is that it’s a jungle out there
It’s a jungle out there
Nobody is safe in this concrete jungle

[Verse 1]
I used to think living in this planet was awesome
Until I heard the news reports, a man has been slaughtered
Slap bang on the corner, by a bunch of gangster wannabes
who happen to live in the same actual parts of this damn neighbourhood
The law doesn’t take aim like they say they would
Instead they’re making things complicated; some names get took
from all the public residents, but they all just stay in books
It’s unexplainable, too much disdain in this acre wood
This hundred-acre wood in which we stay is decaying through
We suffer a lot of pressure from teenagers and sadists too
Especially the elderly males and ladies of 82
Their life expectancy is debatable, ain’t it true?
This concrete jungle’s full of little apes who just play with you
one minute, and the next, they stick a blade through your anal tube
That’s another bulletin on the 8 o’clock daily news
A lady has been sprayed, maimed and braised with potato juice

[Hook]
(except replace “guerillas and thugs” with “hoodies and hookers” on 5th line)

[Verse 2]
This little concrete jungle is an absolute shambles
A bit like the Spaniards dancing the tango or mambo
The samba or flamingo, when their salsa rags dangle
That best describes the gangstas when their khaki pants hang low
And their snazzy chain swangs slow like a grandfather’s pendulum
when it’s swinging back and forth while it just stands at a statue pose
These inhabitants scattered across the map; as the planet grows
So do the statistics, you do the maths, it’s a fa-sico
Or fi-asco – man, it’s a massive debacle, bro
In actual fact, their bad actions are factual
They’re giving these victims a good thrashing – they’re animals!
Proceed to feed on people like a pack of loose cannibals
I think they’ve all gone nuts like a bag of pistachios
Sniffing on the magic mushrooms; they’ve jacked them from Mario
In this jungle, there’s no escape from this maddening manic show
I wish I’d make it vanish with an abracadabra flow!

[Hook]

[Verse 3]
It’s winter season, it’s cold; temperature’s freezing with snow
All the streets are all closed, two hundred degrees and below
And the weatherman is predicting a new breeze from the Pole
The Sun will be at its low setting, complete with easterly blows
Coming from the Himalaya mountains or the highest hill plains
Ready to overcome the summer and blow the fire away
Right through the day; there is no shelter for hiding away
Look the bus station that’s built, right by our way
You mean to tell me there’s no protection from whatever is drawing
soon as the leaves have all dropped down at the end of the autumn
and the winter has started setting in with inches of frost
covering every single pavement making us trip and just fall?
Then again, what do we expect living in such a district?
It’s as fucked up as Janet exposing bits of a titty
Sitting Timberlake pretty, his eyes fixed to her nippies
What the **** has THAT got to do with settling in this Sin City?

[Hook]

Idk how u spit it but it had a wierd flow when I was reading it nut the lyrics were sick
how many other guys were rapping?

The flow is similar to Eminems' freestyle in 2010 on Tim Westwood. But then again I didn't just steal his flow, I mixed it in with my new flow I just developed but thanks bro. Yeah he filmed me and 2 other young rappers. It was kinda' like a cypher, I should say. We didn't accapella we had mics. It was a good time but the other two had the style of Jiz Khalifa which is fine I guess but I would like to rap with styles similar to mine.

At least that means u probably stood out the most As far as lyrics go

Yeah, not to be selfish or anything but I think so too. They're flow was pretty good any how.

Is the second one u said u were doing with all the same people ?

On December 2, I'm doin' it with a whole different people

U gonna spit the same style verse?

Most likely, been studying Em's new style lately and finding out how I could mix mine in with it. Kind of cliche but I'm trying something other rappers don't usually do. Usually rappers just steal his whole flow.

To be honest I don't like his new style a few of his songs are preety good but he's just gotten too touchy feely in my opinion he lost that anger

Possibly true. His new collab with Yelawolf, is pretty sick. Throw it up.

He's lost that sinister phycotic side of him like I can't see him making any songs Like Kim, criminal, kill you, or 97' bonnie and Clyde ever again

There's no debate and no questions 
That I'll carve a hole in ur stomach and harvest ur intestines  
DO YOU UNDERSTAND ME WORLD 
CAN U HEAR MY LESSON
Don't **** with me or you'll end up in a dumpster 
Under my last 3 victims so technically ur 6 feet under
You dare touch the throne I'll stab ya dome, snap ya bones, rip ur chromosomes give you down syndrome and **** up ur genomes 

How's it sounding so far? Trying to get out of this writers block

Do any of you have the ability to put together a rap video like this one?

I think some of you do!

No one is more of a slave than he who thinks himself free without being so!

Nice. nice. Seems like your breakin' out of the block possibly. Just keep writing.

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The Prof and the Bam, this is gonna' be a clam
Ity,

(melody)--->I'm sittin' with my legs on the coffee table
Makin' it jelous cause I just put a mug of cappachino
On it,

(start rapping)--->demonic, as I go microphonic
Me and, Casey Anthony are gonna' be happy when the health care goes rotten then killing babies will be legal then
We'll see how far your back can bend, I give that slut a ten
You just put a crack in my
Tranz, with your brand new Mercedes Benz
Your a benz, I'm a tranz, call me Chez
Shoulda' jsut called her a lez, no need to get a gender tranz
And as I'm doin' this I'm makin' fun Jodi Foster
Tell her to start makin' movies again, if she has no money to cook at home, why is she spendin' it eating out then? (pause)

(melody)--->I'm just so out, outta', line but I send off a beat just in time
To reach the countdown, time to munch down, it's lunch time now on the, carpet
Aimin' right at my next target, let's go after, Lady, Gaga
I'm turnin' this around like I'm slipshod, as deadly as a sling shot
She's the only one who knows what a kick in the balls and period's feel like
So

(rapping)--->Damn right I'm about to make fun of a dead man, I state the facts and
Michael Jackson, let's call him a faggot, oops I can't say that
But I just did, tell me if I'm goin' to extremes
Excuse me as I was about to once again raise my voice up at you and your preppy sluts and SCREAM!!!(pause)
I'm just a one man team, hot with a capital H and a stove on it
What you want me to take out my brain and put new clothes on it
Cause there ain't no way I'm chaingin' my mind, cause this aint sugar coatin'
I'm cold so I'm suitin' up and puttin' the whole jacket over and now I'm MC roastin'



Ohh this was a fun writing session! A lot of metaphors, punchlines, and wordplay. Tell me how many you can find that make sence to you please. Or tell me what doesn't make sence so I can revise it. Thanks!

Would you consider this a semi clever line?
Your a homo so let ke set the record straight