Neverending Rap Battle

Nice. I don't usually like reading raps that are like the same scheme as other songs but when you do it, my man, it's awesome. Good work.

It's sarcasm lol

I know. I was being counter-sarcastic.

Does anybody know any small record labels I can send my friends stuff too you know some starter labels he's got alot of promise he sounds like a young version of drake and I've been hired as his unofficial manager

Raping at at Foley Square NYC !

Yo check out Eminem and Yelawolf's collab. Throw it up.

Whoever that was on YAHOO ANSWERS yh that is me, and i think that question lacks any importance now as i am so pleased with myself as a emcee, you guys who been rapping for atleast 5 months will understand me, you know when your trying to up your game in a particular area? well i was trying to up my punches and methaphors to the level of master, like i believe i may have with multis, and usually your just missing something inside that allows you to do it, well all of a sudden i have been able to write the sickest punches so ive been writing em down like Em does, all over paper, and im gonna write a verse and post it on here when im done, dunno how long though

That was me charlie and as for copyrights just make sure you give credit for the instrumental and you'll be all good

This has got to be the best ive ever wrote, i mean ever, that break i took was well worth it because my heads clear and ive improved by miles, i got multi after multi with clever punches/methaphors/similies, i feel like im the ish lol thank you too every1 who supported me when i was struggling, im going to continue this tommorow as i dont want to start falling off, thanks Bambs, White, Proffesor, Illustraight...you helped me recover.

Read Between the Lines, Seek the Deeper meaning that Hides
The Spirit In Me Isnt Really the Inner City's Teaching of Life
G's got P's inside their I's like MississiPPi
To hit a Milli their deceasing a guy, Leave em' to Die
Score a Head: 3 point(.), 1 For (4) a Leg, its Easy as Pi (pie)
More or Less, just Reach for the Sky
As High as your Fever When Beiber is Live
This Time you wont need Peter ta Teach ya ta Fly
I aint Jesus Christ Preaching right its a Piece of my Mind
Im not About That!
Im About Rap!
Wanna House, Flat, Couch, Mat-
Live in Peace with Something Ive Earned
People Doubt that
So I Grit my Teeth they **** With My Nerves


TBC tommorow

-and btw i got a mean punch coming on this last line im just trying to set it up right, see if you can make it out your self...Teeth and nerves, what do they relate to lol

The pi/pie line was sick but I can't figure out the last line anyone care to explain?

lol i never finished it incase u never noticed, i was just letting u know, what i have in store, ill just tell you, i mentioned "i grit my TEETH" and "they **** with MY NERVES" when do your nerves in your teeth get fucked with lol? during root canal treatment , so im gonna play on those words

What kind of music do you call this? It starts off a little strange then it seems to have rap then it goes into a different type.

Oh so like dentist and stuff that reminds me of ems verse on shake that lol
"imma dentist a menice an oral hygenist
open your mouth for bout 4 or 5 minutes
take a little bit of this floride rininse
swish but don't spit it swallow and I'll finish"

lol yh i never noticed that kool right? lol and btw i picked up on a line many americans would not have caught up on, obv im from london so i speak london slang and use our terminoligy, lemme explain this line...

" G's got P's inside their I's like MississiPPi"

Basically you know what a "G" is dont you..a Gangter

"P's" or "Peas" means Money in London, money being an obsession for gangsters

And "i's" Meaning "Eyes"

So the line is basically saying gangsters have p's (money) inside their eyes (i's) obviously that mean they have set their sights on money.

and coincidentally...the state Mississippi in america, has two "p's" inside the "i's" - iPPi

kinda simple lol

I understood it I just didn't know what p's were lol

ahh kool lol man where is everybody?

Well bambs is probably away for his cypher thing Ill and prof just seem to pop up randomly now and idk where sammy went

Did u figure out how to link it yet?

waddup check this out guys tell me what you think ???

http://soundcloud.com/milkboxkids/alwaysonmygrind98bpm-1st-take

Great sound track I was able to hear that one clearly!

I like this one better!

http://soundcloud.com/milkboxkids/publicennemies-1st-take