Neverending Rap Battle

I just slaughtered a guy on letsbeef.com, like literally obviously bea him i cozi had methaphors, multis, wordplay and similies, he dropped some wack **** and some guy rated his better? wtf

http://www.letsbeef.com/battle_details.php?section=tb&id=413952

ima hit um right off the cut
they have a shot a getting slapped like a hockey puck
cock'y ****'s
there's a valcano in the brain yo , when hip hop erupts

slash ya vitals , scratch the vinyls ,n snatch ya spinal

to high for this , in a high fortress, with the jedi forces

wreak havoc , speak magic ,a beat addict

in a padded room , with a bag a shrooms, something he just had to do

in the pych ward , with a mic cord an something to fight for

in the lab a chemist , pad n pen is , the doctors mad apprentice

turn a rant in to a rembrant , a damn flow to a van gouh ,

the impossible to a picasso , a pimp beat to a da vinci

einstein a rhyme allign the mind with time an shatter the theory

speaking hot as a fleeting flock of phoniex during equinox , ya hear me ?



peace yo prof

it should go to a problem sorta page an theres a button u click on to sign up ....

im sleeping cause ya'll niggas aint spitten an that aint fitten witin my cirriculum , sounding ridiculdumb ,ya'll wanna lick my cum , go lick ya mom , u know your mouth is the only place to stick the gun ,ya'll wanna get kickd for fun ,rip your tounge
,ima be nice i wont kick your ASS
, i'll hit ya bum with a branding iron an script ya buns,
it'll say IM AN ASSHOLE,laugh yo cause i do this kinda **** for fun

This is giving me abit of nostalga (if thats how u spell it) its been soo long since i dropped a freestyle, i wrote this is 10 mins, makes me think back to when i first joined here.

Biased Opinions left my Alias Hindered,
This Fighter Lingers in Silence Witha Mic to Fire Lyrics at Spitters,
Escape my Presence Via Prison Tactics,
Flip the Matress and Dig a Passage,
The Sickest Rap-Smith will Spit Rapid
Without the Trigger Action,
Pull it Back n' Rip the Gatlin,
There a Simple Equation Bitch,
Which Gathers Plenty opinions like Interacial Relationships,
EMBA-C x a Shameful prick (charliesforce/its my other name)
Is a Fatal Mix, Facial Skin Flakes to Bits,
Nasal Bridge Caves in and Lips
Open Like an Anal Fist in Amazment on How the Tables Flipped.

I'm a rap line backer, lighting fuckers up with firecrackers
Puncture your Hummer until it suffers a tire fracture
Hit you with ruptures in your stomach, watch the tummy stumble
Count the numbers in your guts just like a summer sum book
Touching the wood like a cutter or a lumberjack
Leave you thumb-tacked and stumped just like part of a stamp
Sock you like punchbags, topple you like tall gymnasts
Thump you down like rugby pads, sucker, can you ball with that?
Snipe you like cop agents standing on a skyscraper
Fight you like Rocky, then I flatten you with Nike Gators
I sting like a bee, man, you're just a fly chaser
Break into your house and dash off with your prize paper
Illustraight puts you in your place like GPS's
Cut you from the waist down just like seedy dresses
This master of ceremonies, he really seems relentless
He's an emcee with finesse just like the Queen's messengers

Hmmmm, and I can rhyme Belgium with welcome.

wtf happened when i was gone.........

i heard shrecords was bombscare????????????
confusing.....

you are the ****..........
the top dog around here
im not as good as nobody on here
but 1 day ill catch up
your my motivation to do better
i sed that on another discussion like a week ago.....
dont know if ya red it but.........you a sick lyrical beast....

Thanks allot man, it means allot really especially when im low on confidence, its all about building your vocabulary and then learning how to rap, which can be learnt pretty easily as long as you do everything correctly, its not only about lyrics (on here it is) but in real life you need to have delivary, passionate voice etc, id say on a good day at the office i am up there as one of the best on here lyrically, but Proff is great lyrically i learnt allot from him, so is Illustaright he raps about the craziest stuff, and i admire bambino and whitemonkey......'s dedication and consistantsey with writing. But shout out to proff he was here way before i joined back in 2009, so in a way he has been my Tutor

prof **** was dope! check this...when hip hop erupts...

--I'll be...
surfing on a fiery ride
I'm rarely this high that I'm barely alive
Meteoroid flowing with flames on the side
Annoyed knowing it's the same old names on this site
I'll slang my name till my dough's hyped, and bang till it goes tight
Stroke my dick in ya wife like the hoe's typed!

I'm so ripe that I'm rotten,
I'm so hyped it's forgotten
that I was the one rocking the prof when he was dropping them coughs
....now... Watch me cut and slice ya verse when the golfing balls drop

Leave it to me to school ya, You need some Ricola!
You think you 'wreak havoc', but you just gotta Reak Habit!
I'm not talking Hockey, but you'll still get slapped quick
You couldn't 'speak magic' off the dome if David Lane showed you a 'hat trick'

You're just an addict in the attic tripping acid, asking Adam for help flipping the mattress, because your ass-less chaps, went to CRAP when you started laughing. haha!

I think proff flew over the kookoo's nest, cut his chest and ripped his sack then grew a vag!
I'm tellin you...this pussy needs a pad, He bleeds a rag that even a leech will gag!
An English teacher couldn't teach me to speak this bad
Kill and stab, Kidnap your mom and dad!

You couldn't Einstein with ya 'theory of a deadman'
You couldn't Picasso with a pencil full of lead man
You couldn't make a Van Gogh, if the pedal was to the medal, damn, woah!
You couldn't crack the code with Da Vinci on a pedestal, man yooo!

Eh, NO BEEF, just wanted to try and be creative on some legit ****!..what do you think?

I think its good ur back on the site working on your scripts

iunno if im ur best target though ... hahaha

Thanks Charlieforce that means alot to me homie ... anyway i can help holla ...

LOL! heard that but I know u legit so I'm down to compete! I been working on real tracks I got a mic...been doin my thang I might post sum.

yo if you got a mic go to freestylemadness.com an sign up we can do audio battles an cyphers there and we can do writtens on here ....

an for sure u know everyones always down to check out the hip hop ...

So you think you can Rap?

you wouldnt go to compton an rep the kkk
so why would u step in my way , u seen profs weapon array
i'll take the cash or make the cash , brake a basterd , leave his face in plaster , leaven these heathen faith faster then accension attention deficit like the rest of the class, course prof got the def'r spit , leave ya dreams shatterd , u got a chest a glass, its jsst a smash , away from tearing ya heart out ,ima star ,sun you wanna spark now ? my organs pumpin endorphins, got the feel gotta do something important ,

step to close ta me, snatch ya rosarie , ba dap ya overies , thats the way its suppose ta be , ghost emcee's , casper the soul snatcher,emcee means Master the flow an go capture goals cause im a rapper not n actor im a factor that'll fracture ur skull , opening ya mind up, how to put dope in ya rhyme cup , prof fillin out prescriptions, an your's is non fiction ....


dudu C he's got a secret ,real names Weak ****
aka anal leakage ,
inflamed from frequent seapege
be decent an keep it closed like ur mom should a
nugga
who u think u beefing with got a slaughterhouse in the back hard
in your daughters mouth feelin like i outta act hard
raptard
don't give a crap who u are
u wanna talk **** ? vocal chords or shotti
flip u over inside a portipotty
till there's no evidence or a body
i do hip hop for life but feelin true n killin you is more a hobby

The prof is a hobbyist that's obvious, he's gotta puss, it's not just...probably
I seen him at the hobby lobby with bobby, honestly!
You think you on to me? That's Blasphemy!
I trash EMCEE'S like glass and tree's
crash the scene, last to leave
first to cum
burst the gums
got this thirst that runs
and a hot surge that puns
who's the surgeon? None!
Say Hi to um...mister perfect one! HIII!

I'd never go to Compton in the first place!
You never left ya comp son, nerd face!
Who are you telling me what's ill?
Oh..I get it, the prof must have took a smart pill!
You couldn't flip **** if you stepped on a turd and did a cart wheel!
Is your art real? I'll ask the cartel if that was a hard shell when your heart fell!
Pumping bullets in you like a barbell!
Raptard with a tardsmell!
You couldn't cut a deal at a yard sell!
Listen kitten, this is My bark yell!
whoof whoof!
Lone wolf, in the booth, spit a tooth till it's the truth!
KKK like Harold and Kumar on the noose
Kickin' it at the bar sippin sum goose
got me feelin' goofier than a goof obtuse

Cheque me out when I sign mine
I aint a professor
But she's givin' me Einstein
I Fight Klub and Grindtime
Still walk on a fine line
If **** gets sticky-icky
I take shots,nine time
Just call it Fifty
Bang bang like the nine mine
Sit back and watch me like prime time
Yea I got fine rhyme bout sippin' fine wine
I be diggin' my pockets
It aint trickin' if you got it
I walk the talk
Ya'll gassed up,take a fart
Kilo flow
I give 'em whole for taking part
I got the word of a verbalist
**** that gun talk and murder ****
Im givin' bars to prisoners
The art of my finesses