Neverending Rap Battle

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=79_axJZ2plk&feature=related

with that said though he's no eminem , he couldn't beat him in a battle ....

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IMNQH2D98wE&feature=related

African Man
*From an African man’s perspective*

[Intro]
(*African accent*)
Hello
I am a man from AFRICA
Home of the brave
And I am no more a slave
Anybody test the black man will get a lesson from ME
This one is for my people

[Verse 1]
Check it
Things just isn’t the same for Africans
Not since our fathers became slaves in Babylon
And now we have our own countries, we are THAT independent
Plus we have all the time had a black president
But the strangest things can happen in Africa
When a person can say things that can make people laugh at them
Trying to be superior
When we are just inferior to a nation of outsiders
Who don’t have the same skin as us
I see them come, as I come and go
Half of us is laid in the hospital
Some of us are ministers and doctors
And one of us is an archbishop, Desmond Tutu
I am proud to be an African, proud to be black
But it’s hard to be a poor man living on the sand
Whether I’m from Nigeria, Rwanda, Madagascar
Even my woman feels it too, just ask her

[Hook]
I’m an African man
And I’m proud to be black
If you dare misjudge me
Then I will misjudge you back
‘Cause I’m an African man
Coming straight from the sands
I’m just as human as you
So won’t you please hold my hand?
Ye-es

[Verse 2]
We’ve had visitors from all across the whole wide globe
Boys wearing trainers, girls wearing designer robes
It makes us have a range of mixed emotions
Then again, we Africans always had different notions
Some of us live in the jungle
Some of us walk in bundles
And some of us walk in big puddles
The environments are hot, but we have melatonin
How many of us survive the heat, there is no knowing
We are considered to be preachers who preach
The Good Word of the Bible to people on TV
We’ve rapidly increased over 40 years
Which is amazing for a people who wear strange things in their ears
Every time you hear a jazz record, you hear an African
Every time you hear hip-hop, you hear an African
Our culture is diverse as well
So many different species in Africa we practically beat everyone else

[Hook]

Does anyone read others raps?

Cause I do.

I was watching a 9/11 show last night call "Where were you?" I jotted some of it down and I got this. The stories are crazy scary but it happened.

A menace fillin', and killin'
No room for nothin', the ****'s laid on the table
Barbarian, it's so overated it's enabaly, disable
Men movin', migratin' runnin' from the storm
Runnin' from themselves we can't run, no more
Take a look at yourself, furthermore, take a look the nonsence
It's just like an apocalypse, no one's tryin' to stop it
The fellowships, dictatorships
When will we come to an agreement, when will we come to grips
All of it is at his fingertips
Losin' adrenaline, bite your tongue and your lips
It's gettin' closer, the train bells are whistlin'
Nothin's more scarier than the thought of your kids, isn't it?
When your kickin' a dead horse, there's no benifit
Look me in the eyes, despised by the lies
There's no one near by
The Whitehouse is under seiged
Not everyone can find the key
Dead bodies, eroding in front of me
Everyone is cryin'
I look up there's another plane flyin'

I did it over a remix of "Loud Noises"
What you think?

Dude your retarded

Your The Menace go play tennace bitch you
suck so now your fucked and just **** out of
luck cause the kings back so now its time for
you to pack cause i got racks on racks on racks

you can't rap worth a **** not even
1 single bit i kill not steal ill thow you
away like a banana peel why you wearin
your high heels now you just got stung by
bees but stay away cause yo mamma
got FLEAS!!!!

i dont think so...

Haha.!!

Holy **** those were the two greatest raps I've ever heard, bambs u might as well just go home and kill urself there's obviously no way you'll be able to come back from that (does everyone sense my sarcasm?)

I do. I might aswell.

Better check the head
Blow your intergrity all over the white sheets and beadspread
There will be blooshed between us
I'm itchin' just to finish you, must be the fleas
Your rap isn't long enough and has no meanin', must be his insecurities
Cause I'm a rare species from the unknown land
The Mid West, you guessed right
I put the fear in the eyes of the competitor
Punches to the chest you'll see the knuckle marks on your spine, cardiovascular
I don't think you see the problem here
I don't know what's gonna' happen here
But in the longrun, the one who makes it to the finish line
Is the strong one

Here Charlie, this a Freestyle I have written on a pad

(Freestyle 1)
forget about the life, leave it without a trace
like a, killer bee go ahead corner me
stingin anything i see, everyone is running
and i think its funny the way ya'll have treated me
now all of a sudden you all dramatically leave
its like an automatic gun lettin lose
accuarcy is the key
you gotta switch up the thoughts, that's what makes you deadly
pass it over to my man, Caddy

(Freestyle 2)
a mountain is higher than a tower
where does that leave me on this rap **** coward?
the game is turnin slowly and now it's sour
how can one man go head over heels and over power
bouncin like a lightweight boxer
Get in the ring and everyone yells your name cause your popular?
**** that, no one knows the feelin i get
no one knows the how to make life appropriate
for young kids, it's your job to parent
just because i say what i think and do what i want
it ain't like i kill my kid and bury him in a swamp
casey, you hear me, tell me
but its a never endin cyle that goes full circle
its forgetful and unforgivable,

(Freestyle 3)
many more stars to add up in a list
many more starts i have to behind the beat to achlemist
the stars go in list kinda like this
pitbull, wacka flocka flame, jakewolf
**** this ****, know one cares
know one wants to hear the uselss ****
i dont want that **** to fill my ears
we all put blood sweat and tears and the game gets this?
talkin bout emotions on your sleeve, i go sleeveless
cause the mainstream feedin us all about the business
when know one gets **** to witness
everyone stays behind closed doors it rediculous
but a positive side is the fact that i never heard them live
its probably a good time but cant keep a flow for nothin
look up crooked I, yelawolf, and mothafuckin joe budden
they're on the right **** and know everythin and can back up the talkin
but im done talkin its time for me to leave
stealin the beat just like a thief



that last one i recorded over an achlemist beat

Neither!

…..Express the fate?
****, it’s a fate worser than death
Like fangs of a vampire when he inserts them in necks
Or someone hits you at full speed on the curb in a Lex
Wind up in the clinic with the surgeon researching the best
Rappers can’t pull themselves together, so it’s curtains for them
They drop to the floor like trousers measured to the hem
Put a curse up on them
Like a wizard with sticks
A magician with swift tricks that he brings with his fists
Get them with this, Illustraight will hit them with bricks
Slit them to bits, dump them and let them swim in the ditch
Like a couple of small fish in large ponds
That’s what you get when you try to mess with Stretch Armstrong
‘Cause my arms are like rubber bands that contort to the walls
Slap them with flexibility and assault them with force
I defend daily with a bunch of responses to course
‘Cause standing my ground more often is the prominent clause
I got autism, a problem impossible to avoid
And there is no cure, I was diagnosed as a boy
Grown up to an adult, now I’m stuck with this arduous burden
And that I can’t solve logic is constantly hurting

Commandor

Verse-
I know people have had problems before
Nothin' what we're dealin; with here
We got a stuburn bitch on our hand, but have no fear
She ain't got a job, no life AND no career
Doesn't look like shes goin' anywhere in life that's for sure
But the thing that bothers me most of all is the bitch doesn't got nothin', no motherfuckin' core
No mothafuckin' dreams, how do you live with that? How do you go on livin' with the fact that
Nothin' comes hand to hand, takes a seat but never takes a stand
That's whats wrong here in this fucked up situation, take a second listen
I gear up my notes, my pads and my pens
Sit down in an empty room, mad at everything? That only depends
It only depends on, what this bitch is on. What this bitch has caused
Mass confusion, flyin' in every direction, spewin' over the world, bitch will you listen a second?
I'm talkin' straight to you now, put your fuckin' beer down, and read my lips, its like...

Hook-
Mah, mah, mah, mah, mah, mah, mah
Lick, my dick dumb fuckin bitch
This is your song, the only one, you'll get
Cause no one cares or even tries
To satisfy your needs in this life

Verse-
Now now, I ain't tryin' to stear anyone towards hatin' no body
Honestly the way I feel, that's the largest controversey everyone steers to
But in the position I'm in, between me and pops
My little bro has to live with this bitch, she causin' complete nonsence a lot
Her boyfriend smokes an awful lot of pot, its fuckin' crazy
The way I see this **** it ain't a responsibilty problem is fuckin' worthless drama
Picture this for a minute, a scrubby bitch sittin' on her chair
With smoke swirlin' around in her hair, a PBR in her hand
While her kid is at school, learnin' more than this fool
He's got a better education, sit with me a minute
I know I'm puttin' you through hell, bitch just shut up and bare it!
I know I'm makin' you embarassed! That's my point now I'm gonna' get goin
I got a class to get to, the one that you shoulda' been takin' when you were in school!

About my little brothers bitch mom!

No offence but isn't ur little brothers mom also ur mom? Unless ur refering to a stepmom or if he's a half brother but I thought u said u didn't really have any family issues?

It's my half brother. He's 6.