@charliesforce,
just by typing a rap you can't tell if the rhymes are logical. you got to hear it in person/studio. just because the rhyming is simple doesn't mean nothin. the only reason i was, let's say, not wanted by, fyi prof, quiet storm, was the fact that i slurred my speech when i spit. it wasnt anything to do with my lyrics. there's so many styles of rhyming, listen to freaky tah, 50 cent, big daddy kane, and dmx. there's some mulits in there raps. i have multis, i have songs written on my notepads and books, i can't take a pic and put it on here, i could type, some of my **** on here, if you wanna see? im not a battler, im just learnin. i mostly like to deal with my flows and writing. again, theres sooo many different styles of rappin, not everying needs multis, freaky tah, for example, not a lot at all, 50 cent listen to his first verse of patiently waiting. those guys are who i look up to as lyricist's. eminem, 50, big daddy kane, dmx, and freaky tah, who unfortunatley is now dead because of a bullet. im gonna stick with my lyrics that i write, i use multis, i use compound-syllable sounds. you can write singles but they need to make sence, again what this site is doin, is helpin me battle, as you can see i aint a good battler, not that good, but my strenghts are my lyrics i put together, the computer isnt a place for that, its for notebooks and pads, you keeped stored away for people not to find and take. thanks for the tips though, it's just the way i learn from other old rappers, freaky tah and 50 and that passes on to Em.
