Neverending Rap Battle

Another burdened day, certain hurt and strain
Pain in my veins circulates like birds of prey
Im tryna learn a way to reverse the urge
To burst my brain like kurt cobain
Find the perfect place on earth away from the pearly gates
Where the purple rain sprays on my journal page
And im no longer a turtle in a hurdle race
Concerned by the verbal hate that occurs by day

I sit cry, wipe away my tears what a brave child
Its like, my teeth have veneers with the fake smile
Hate piles, *im constantly fighting battles like 8 mile
*I just wanna be following my dream upon a stage while...
*Everybodies finally giving me their respect
*No longer will i sit and be ripping hair from my head
Coz i, know now
*Im developing a love for the game and nothing will stop me till im in the cemetary dead.



GUYS THIS IS THE VERSE IM GOING TO BE SUBMITTING FOR A CHANCE OF MAKING A TRACK WITH ONE OF THE MOST FAMOUS UK RAPPERS, TELL ME WHAT U THINK, ITS ABOUT PAIN AND HATE IN THE GAME RECIEVED NOWDAYS. THE LINES WITH THE "*" SYMBOL MEANS THEY ARE SPEED RAP LINES THEREFORE THE FLOW SWITCHES UP THERE.THANKS.

Do pull a Kurt Cobain after reading your raps
Because M.C.s Serching for you will tell you you're wiggety wiggety wack
You're not a turtle in a hurdle race, you're a one legged-snail in a police chase
Trying to knife fight a rap Jason Bourne in an enclosed space
You fight battles like 8 Mile & still can't get respect
You battle on welfare and still couldn't get a check
You're a bird of prey to a hungry snake waiting to strike
Camoflauged standout, distinctly blending in on the mic
Get emotional over lines & haters, that's not something we do as men
I'd tell you to man up & take it, but you ain't done that since you were 10

Aye charlie, your lyrics were iight real talk.
Just make sure they flow with the rhythm. lol

AB4L !

Yo messing with me is like taking the bull by the horns
messing with you is like taking the in the horn of a unicorn
your a fagit
compare you to magits
my flow, noone can match it
the names Robbie Fraser slit you with a Razor
kill you and your neighbour
with What!? a light sabre
Im like Big Smalls
cause im better than them all
Im the real slim shady
better than Randy Moss with Tom Brady
its Crazy
But just maybe, Baby
I beat people like you daily
i dont do this for fame i do it for fun
when i take my glock out i know you gonna run
when i hit its the ****
you fat eating you ritz
why do you gotta take fits
is it because i dissed you
pfft i ima razor slit you
i said that already
but bitch you better be ready
this is like me being jason and you being freddy
better hold on to your teddy
cause its time for beddy boo
oh yeah i fucked yo bitch too

**** the worst thing happened, i recorded the **** and as soon as i got home i opened the file via windows media and theres no ******* sound! it was fine in the studio, ****! i dunno what wrong with it...

I'll fuckin get up in your psyche
Yeah bitch go ahead, try me
Cause I got you on my guillotine chopping block
Casue I kill this beat off the top
New cuts
I got Emsees talkin at the barbershops
Foamin at the mouth, I didnt get my doggie shots
**** around antagonising never stops
Im a Jet, Hard Knocks
What point dont you get?
This **** is for real Emsees you aint cold enough
This **** is for big boys you aint old enough
Boo!
I just fuckin scared you out of your socks
How sad is it that you cant rap?
I flip **** around cause Im acrobat
You mo'fuckers need to be baby sat
**But I got you on your death bed
**Cant breath, missin half your head
**Tell me why cant I..
**Find the words you said
Oh ****

**Faster flow
This is a freestyle so dont try and battle me off of this freestyle

im droppin **** like birds its hot got them flamin turds
im a sick motha ****** i must have a fever i'll tear you up you'll think i gotta meat cleaver
yeah im sick im ill nigga get me a pill
me, my flos just nasty like pussy on the rag
you dont even like pussy, fuckin fag
yo you probably have had more weiners in yo mouth than kobayashi
i'll murder you, its like youre a jew and im a nazi.

nigga plea u act like **** dont phase u fucked up like slim shady yo u need a head trip ta lisen to actin like dat u ganna get busted up nigga watch yo back cause u might be in trouble soona oh lata it all ganna catch up to u playa

Now why would you post a blocked video?

Does this one work? Be careful because this video is know to hurt peoples feelings!

your rhyme is junk
mines a slam dunk
so take a seat young punk
and lemme show you how its done
this site aint for fun
its for hardcore rappers like me
the only one that are true mcs
you say i have nightmares
i have dreams
of crushing you
and your laughable schemes
i look like dinner
you look like lunch
im a winner
your a suckerpunch
if you think you can stop me try it
just a warning
hope you can take a hit

Bro, you ain't got no flow
I'm like a flurry, yer soft as snow
I'm gana beat yer ass, I'll let you know
Leave you paralyzed still, like a scarecrow
My rhymes are a stampede
Your's are 3g speed incomplete
I'm like the 4g android
Your like spearmint Altoids
You couldn't keep a clean breath, if you where on steroids
I'm the shark attack, like a counter attack
I'll smack, pack, hack, snack, and cap you
Little girl, you think you rule
You be sucking more head then you get shampoo
Little kid ****, call you whinny the poo
I around the back dunk on you, Manu
I'm a turkey thanks giving feast overdone
Your an anorexic dinner for one
I'll have you crushed in my hod dog buns
You'll have me pickin' at your little bread crumbs
I'll have you smacked around like a hockey puck
My flows tighter then a dick in the butt!

People like you is why black people are still called NIGGERS. And Im white. You dont want anyone else saying it, then stop saying it yourself. You cant have a ******* english word for your own race and not allow anyone else to say it all because your great great grandparents were slaves. Get over it. Your lazy ass prolly needs to be taught a lesson with a ball and chain

that would be censorship then...
whoa! racial censorship! double negatives!

Callin' out some competiton
People scared for some reason to battle
Let's see what you got boy
I'm callin' you out Bambino

I'm the one with the gun
Your the kid with the knife
Try me one time and I end yer life
Hell will see you in the afterlife
I'm the beast from the southeast
It's my game that has increased
Bambino, you ain't nothin'
It's a new fight breaking loose
I'll make you loose more then a tooth
Your a meth you can't prove
You think yer rhymes are real smooth
Well I'm calling you out alright
My flow shoots you with pin point sight
My verses brighten you in the night
They light you up like a candle light
Just to let you know.... I'm a hit you like a meteorite

Callin people out like u the hottest **** around 
I'm sure when u six feet under u won't be makin a sound
So quit callin out names
Cuz ur just a bitch who can't keep up with the **** he proclaims 
While I'm goin for the gold... X games
I shine on verses
I just get these urges 
with this pen in hand
I'm trespassing like the devil steppin on holy land
I control ur activity like a fuckin thyroid gland
I spit sick like a sneezing kid with swine
When I'm done and I relize that I'm waistin my time 
U won't even know what day it is like u crisscrossin over the international date line
I'm so divine you'll hear it though the grapevine 
He's Destine for greatness
U don't like my words then ur fuckin tasteless
I win no losses in the loss column
I ruin ur chicks life like I forgot the condom
I set off a lyrical bomb u can call ne saddam 
The whole universe sits in my palm 
I started out as a kid wit shitty rhymes but now Im a legend its evolutionary 
Cuz my lyrics have become revolutionary 
It's absoulutly scary to the point where you'll have head trauma 
I'm done I'll let u burn in my lyrical lava 
Wait one more line for this onslaught of an attack 
Whitmofomonkysmugla2 is fuckin back! 

According all rappers on this thread. We have a redneck on the loose. LOL
Racist ass. I can say nigga all I want nigga.

Since we open our eyes after nine months in the dark
this world will come and try to steal that spark
that God put in us to beat the trials of life
because fighting these demons ain't a walk in the park
That's why we need to keep our heads up, no mater how messed up
your perception of the situation, Christ already paid up
for your forgiveness, salvation, we shed his blood
Don't let this be in vain, never give in or give up

A.B.4.L!

You seem to be getting all religious on us! I like the story about Jesus myself but how can we know for sure that Jesus was not a very smart person and we put him to death because he did not believe as the church teaches?

Is it possible that we have been lied to or do you know that the bible and the church to be absolutely true?