Neverending Rap Battle

i slap bitches and kill snitches
get riches and meet quotas
comes like a basket of peaches
all hits no misses
dont matter if you a mr or mrs
dead in a ditch and dont leave messes
remember when your readin my rap there aint no pauses
no flaws or clawbacks
my brigade brings heat but not the pussy glock ****
we use grenades switchblades and axes shapened spoons and pen guns
**** you up with the press of one button
a group full of phsyco felons

I WANT EVERYBODY ON THIS SITE TO JUDGE THIS ONE ROUND OF BATTLE ME AND PRASHANT SHADY HAVE JUST HAD-JUDGING BY ALL THE ASPECTS THAT MAKE A BATTLE VERSE GOOD!!! THANKS!!!

YO
Feel the power of the Charliesforce
Find more bullets left in you then a Somali Corpse
Im Partially Raw
But ill still Smackdown a Retard who can Hardly Talk
A Starving Poor, Laughing stock who should Calmly walk
And lay back down inside his White Chalk
This guys got more money than a Tight Whore (in 2 ways lol)
He cant Fight Nor'
Back his Rhymes with a Punch-Line Or....
He cant time right, He needs to Receit More
Hes wired by the Po, Like a Cyborg
ON THE MIC TALK!

lemme switch the flows to show my versatility

Pussy, you choke more than lisa anne
I know your secret man, but ill never tell on a pizza man
OOPS,
Do you really wanna piece of man?
If the heater bangs ill make you Fly like Peter Pan
What a feble man
Beavis wouldnt beleive this Butthead if he seen this man
This geek has seen less vagina than that old jesus hand'
But respect me man, ive got more CHIN that a Korean Gang
Im a Evil Man, Now get off this site
Im the lord in the ring, Ill just call you Smiegel Fam

So now im done, ive definantly finished you
Time to kickback, relax-Maybe spark a spliff or two
You can Sniff your glue
And work out how to improve you Image Dude

HAHAHA MY BATTLE HAD EVERYTHING IN IT
PUNCHLINES
SIMILIES
METHAPHORS
AND I NEVER EVER BATTLE
LETS LET THE PEOPLE DECIDE............

Im going to post my rating on this one !

first off multi's -Charlieforce -8 consistent use of multi's
punchlines- charlieforce-8 almost everyline or more then 1 in a line an the jesus joke , is funny
structure-Charlie force- 7 u can read his stuff easier the lines match up , start counting syllables in ur lines u'll notice what im talking about !
metaphors- 7 you both used metaphors , but i like charlies better
topics - 9 well hmm this is hard not even charlie force stuck to topics an illustrated his point further
pranshant shady , when you were talking about I. C.U. was probally ur best thing u said



so really don't know how you guys rate things but I put this one to charlie force

EVERYONE RATE MY BATTLE WITH PRASHANT SHADY!!!!!!!!!

Well, it looks like I was right Charlie, you are good at rap battling. =)

u don't even get me pissed off , slit ur wrists off, nip twist ya tits off ,
labotomy wannabe emcee's an you think you could probally battle this proff ?
u can't grab life by the ball's ,
ya Dick represents ur Will no wonder ur this soft
u could'nt **** with this if you wore a strap on
**** what you wrote a throat is what i leave the mic cord wrapped on
a stage or life you get crapped on , ur getting played like Capcom
i develop an sell it, live it , an teach you how to spell it ,H-I-P_H-O-P
ya'll wanna be kings of the rock like elvis , crackheads aint nobody jealous
you ain't bringing the flocks
have chicken heads drinkin are cocks,
you ain't king a the block
for a cat who talk so much u ain't thinking alot , im inkin the blots
an giving psychiatric evaluations , double up the patience , medication
ur half hearted allegations,will amount to waiten ,
for saten in purgatory's basement , well im adjacent in a space station
u don't understand the gravity of the situation
any altercations i'll assault ya location , you a cult with saten at fault ,
ima hulk cultivatin my anger
leaving no ultimatum, but to open heavens gates n
release the ancient ArchAngel'r

SCRAP MATERIAL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Never been a fan of the fake rappers who be chatting bout their money and cars
Yh Its funny i laugh
They Will never be my level got my foot on the pedal im fed up and mental and ready to blast
Flows outta this world and its shooting for mars


Wanna temp me, when the pen meets the sheet the bentley wont correct defeat
Rest in peace the emcees that dared the test and stepped to me
Or expressed their interest in sex, a rolex

haha thanks man, be careful though, you might be accused of being a dickrider...

im a rookie at the fame, but im pro at the game
got people lookin like dayum when im sayin what im layin
spittin n sprayin
my rhymes aint payin but ill hit you with an overnight crime
you know its the right time when chills run straight down your back
you spine
im tellin you now this world is mine
dub me now n gimme that crown
my head is the sun and my core is the ground

Thank you for pointing out my mistakes! If one fallows me long enough they will see many mistakes. LOL

Keep in mind that I am just a student! There may be one thing that you missed about me and that is that I said that I am a student of the sciences! I did not mean some sciences, "I meant all of the sciences, In other words my greatest interest are not in religion and creationism but in molecular biology and organic chemistry.

I have studied many different religions and their prophets but I do find a greater value in the profits that can be received from those who take time and show a interest in their fellow man. "whether it be threw their rap or what ever they have to offer. Not every thing that is profitable has to have a monetary gain.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=H3m5lq9FHDo&feature=channel

Everyday we're preaching peace,
enacting violence on foreign streets,
pretending we're world police,
blood for oil on enemy soil,
more backlash than gun recoil,
here to foil plans of energy conservation,
no conversations, lives are worthless to politicians,
of our nation, so here's what we're facing an uprising from the current generation,
not assassination but to revive the population,
racial slur on the streets against the Asian persuasion,
at school at work even at the train station,
What do you expect? no retaliation?
nah.. ur wrong.. we jus patiently waiting...
retaliation neccesary, leave em buried
in a ditch **** the cemetary,
Problem solved im the mothafuckin answer
smoke u niggas up like im tryna catch cancer
getta bitch in the club go home n smash her
u get slow dough and i get it so much faster
What dya want from me? We're all doomd in tha end,
the verses fm ma **** make you kill yo friends,
I descend from tha shadows, Im equipped for tha battle,
I have many sleepless nights but I dont live in seattle...
this is not the time, or the place, you see it in my face,
i aint never gna trust you, all you do is hate, ur a fake,
Not a risk im a take, If its **** with Shifty, then its **** your life,
dum **** bring a knife to a gun fight,
I'll sneak into ur house and kill all yo kids,
rape ur wife and throw her in the ditch, wipe the blood on ur baby'z bib.
what do you get when my names next to death, homie catch you breath,
i penetrate your chest cardiac arrest,
cops on da way, you ain't catch me yet and i know where u rest
ill kidnap your girl to get ur interest
ill make you wear a vest everywhere you go
2 days later your buried in the snow
ill eat your body whole darkness then a glow
they call me the reaper ima take your soul

people are just being themselves , don't over complicate , trying to compinsate
for the fact u unable to contimplate,drugs make ur mind shift tectonic plate lift
take hits , bake spliffs , the dope behind the placebo the needle soak ya cerebral cortex , chemicals dwellin cerebelum swellin , adreniline n mescaline low dose of estrogen to counter the testosterone ,have a certain amount of dmt thc to be MC , the big picture , rich get richer poor get poorer , if u rich u have power to do more for ur PPL for the GooD thwart the EviL , that's why a king an a fortune aren't equal

u a bitch SHIFTY I'll Battle u nigga

what u preaching beakin beatin deacons ,
**** u weak n beefin preteens,
rape children, killin an everything thats not decent ,
Fake Bitch , act like a rapist ,
get smacked like a rapist ,
just cause ur child porn is 3 feet high doesn't mean u stack papers,
u hack like u vaping crack u whack n u recorded it ,
ur the sorta dick who aint got vocal chords ta slit,
dog ima vet ur moms like abort the bitch,
"aight" i got the sorta kicks with a sword
I ask'd "u wanna kick-it?" " she's like sure!"
so baby might slurr , when u try to mic words, Cyppphhhheeerrrrr
thems sounding like fight words, strike first , with the right words , tight verse , soak the flow in jet juel , smoking dro n uh oh mic's burst
cause astral projection, kiddin asshole astro projection
Let everyone judge this battle kickin ya ass no objection

**** that dickrider ****... By the way, you put my name IN A VERSE. Not in the REPLY. you replied to Proff (asking him to rate your first take)...it was obvious I was battlin Proff and wasn't goin to read what YOU had to reply to HIM.
So in other words, that was a cheap shot at me.

I don't give a **** what Proff rated that **** as. Just a few posts back you were directly challengin me, then indirectly challengin me, now you sayin you got other things to do ?? WTF?!

If you do not carry this on after, its obvious that was the only "dope" **** you could say, you tried really hard on it and now youre broke out of rhymes. Since earlier when I was battlin Proff, you were so eager to take me, how can you say that you FINISHED me off in one ?! hahahaha..THATS ridiculous !

I want this battle to continue like a perfect one like mine and Tic Tac Nic's went...Do not give excuses now. Lets see if ya consistent.

YO AIIGHT LOOK
I SPIT **** REALISTIC/ BOUNCE YA ASS OFF LIKE ELASTIC/
DISSES SO DRASTIC/ READIN ‘EM YA FEEL THE STATIC/
CREEPIN UP BEHIND YA WITH A HATCHET/
MURDER IN MY MIND, I HACK IT/
YA HEAD IN MY BAG, THEN PACK IT/
DISSES WITH A VENGEANCE DREADED BY ALL/
SPITTIN IN REVENGE, BRING DOWN THE WALL WITH MY FINAL CALL/
BURN UP THE MIC AND BLAST ‘EM SPEAKERS/
REV UP THE BEAT THEN SHOVE THOSE SNEAKERS/
UP YA ASS, THEN JEEPERS CREEPERS/
CREEPIN IN YA PANTS, BLASTIN YA ASS OFF TO VENUS/
JUST GETTING STARTED, WARMIN UP QUICK/
****’S SLICK/ UNEXPECTEDLY DEADLY LIKE A BRICK/
CRUSHIN YA HEAD IN A SEC/
MAKIN YA SICK THEN UNLEASH THE DECK/
OF INSULTS AND FLAUNT ‘EM/
ALL OVER YA FAGGOT CREW THEN TAUNT ‘EM/
TRIED TO MESS, NOW YOU LIVIN WITH THE FEAR/
GETTING MASSACRED IN THIS SACRED DREAD, BITCH WIPE OFF THAT TEAR/
TAKE YA ALL THE WAY UP, GIVIN YOU A GLIMPSE OF MY TIER/
THEN KICK YA ASS ALL THE WAY DOWN AND YOU ENDED IN HERE/
TIME’S UP HOMIE/
YOU CAN SLOWLY/ GROW FEET/ ON KNEES/ BLOW ME/
AFTER THIS BATTLE, YA LOOKIN GLOOMY AND LOWLY/
I KICKSTARTED THIS LYRICAL STORM/
LIKE A FUCKIN DRONE BLASTIN OUT THE CATACOMB/
BLASTIN YA SORRY ASS BACK TO THE DORM/
REFORMED ****/
YA DEFORMED BITCH/
**** YA LIKE A WICKED SNITCH/
LEAVE YA BLEEDIN AND PLEADIN IN THIS DITCH/
YA DAD GOT SNUBBED QUICK/
‘CAUSE HE BROKE AS ****, THAT FAT HOOKER WAS RICH/
I STARTED THIS AND I’MMA END THIS/
WITH BLISS/
EXCUSE ME MISS/ CHARLIE AIN’T GETTING AWAY WITH THAT ****/
YOU GETTING HIT BY A ROOKIE/ BEGGIN ME FOR MERCY/
BATTLE MY BABY SIS, CAUSE HER 'A-Z’s' MEANER THAN YA VERSE, SEE…/…

CHARLIE I WOULDNT BE SURPRISED IF YOU LIFTED THAT **** OFF SOME SITE OR SOMETHIN BECAUSE YOUR FIRST DISS (24TH FEB) WAS STUPID AS ****.

Which one is true...
1. You have battled Proff more times than anyone on this site ?
2. You tryin to be modest when you say, you never ever battle ??

Cause you mentioned BOTH.

Maybe you should read what i said properly " i said i hardly battle ANYMORE" STOP MAKING EXCUSES BECAUSE YOU GOT BEAT, AND FINE ILL BATTLE YOU AGAIN.

DONT BE ******* RIDICULOUS, TYPE MY LYRICS IN GOOGLE AND SEE IF YOU FIND THEM ON ANOTHER SITE- IVE BEEN RAPPING WAY TO LONG TO STEAL LYRICS FROM PEOPLE.

SO JUST SHUT UP AND BATTLE

AND YOUR RIGHT MY FIRST DISS WAS WACK, AND I ADMITTED IT STRAIGHT AFTER

I KILLED YOU BECAUSE YOUR ALSO RIGHT, I DID TRY HARD ON THAT LAST DISS.

Ans i never said i was eager to take you ive told you countless amount of times I AM NOT A RAP BATTLER but you failed to understand with your peanut brain

Well regardless my rhymes will put you in the daily times
I come with power to “defeat”, you gon need a myk 2 stop it
I’ll probably stomp on you unintentionally cuz you microscopic
Your Jokes lame let me guess, you couldn’t find the scope?
I’ll have you left just like your jokes, cause your timing is slow
Imma Design your face just like a Kaleidoscope
If you anger me, my daggers gonna colide with ur throat
You act famous, maybe on your corner where you buy dat dope
But round here? I couldn’t even find you with a microscope
Sorry Kid, I really wish I could say i see you
But only time I do is when you in the I.C.U(Intensive Care Unit)
Suffering frm that hurt i just put on you
When It comes 2 jokes, i spit okey dokes and I don’t care if u Catholic Or Anglican
I’ll have u stunned so bad you’ll stand just like a manican
Only time u coulnd’t feel me’s under anaesthasia
When I talk I won’t take it back, cause what I say, i meant it
You better believe Im from Slangville that makes me so authentic
SO baiscally I don' understand why u wanna b facing me,
i m posed 2 b ur non-biological fada,dnt think u impressing me
Im worth about 10 times more then your ACV
So tell me is it really me that your tryna battle?
10 cents your ACV, which is your ACTUAL CASH VALUE (Check the Dictionary)
I come in storming boy this is me, Im like a global warming
SO Beware brainiac cos this IS your only warning!