Neverending Rap Battle

(Aight nigga wants creative...)

My lyrics are not lyrics, they are pure ecstasy,
Powers up my soul, bringin out da best in me.
Close ya fuckin eyes,,, take my words in,
Listen to me breathin, take all of me in.
Going in and out ya body, feel ya temperature rise,
Breathing hard against ya lips,,, open ya eyes....
You don't see me there, but you can still hear my words,
Swirling all around you,,,, flying high with the birds.
Close ya eyes again, and feel my breath thrustin hard.
You makin love to my flow,,without any regard.
Feel your body tense up, and ya muscles start to spasm,
You've never felt this feelin, its a neverending orgasm.
You can still hear me breathing and feel my body drawback,
You shiver in convulsions as my flow makes you climax.
Now you feelin my ecstasy, and neverending bliss,
This flow is now over, I'll seal it with a kiss.

alright i see ive evoked a little emotion
well lets see if you can keep up


the sweet serendipity of subtle sensous serenity
a quantum shakra leaping bounds of subconcious singularity's
awakened entities
drawn together by forever of elemental polarities
sleeping souls weaping souls tears of joy
the feeling a mother welcomes echoed for the first time heres ya boy
an emotion so eternal
the internal inferno burns with passion unable to let years destroy
fears destroy
ageless as reflected by the mirrors decoy
you know you love him don't be coy
tear drop shaped pools which we view our lives in
matched only but the ominous view with you along the horizon
and the sky which passion disappear's for another day ta risen
without out the carnal carnivoures lust
eyes flash the combination to the doors of trust
this world ,walls ,windows, roof an floors of us
cause all this world needs is more of us
we built this home in each others hearts , each and every board of us
so baby if you ever get bored of us ,
u grab the hammer an i'll nail your orifice


thats to you chickster !!! but anyone can write a reply !

haaah ****! they both come onto me!
if i spit back i will look stupid , i dont think my rhymes r tth great.
haha . chickster2003 , ktownhustler , respect
professor , u be spitting some WEIRD ASS ****

if u dont mine me asking
do u battle in real life?
peace ....mystik...

Anyone can do what you do. Watch.


I can no longer contain this overpowering exaltation.
Mental transport turned to rapture, sexual contemplation.
Touching and caressing,,,introducing sexual stimulation.
Preoccupying myself with my own sexual gratification.
My thoughts are extravagant, unrestrained imagination.
Sensual thoughts, seductive ideas, this is my conceptualization.
Breathing hard, grinding fast, reaching my final explosive sensation.
My flow is Flowetry,,,,, poetic inspiration.

Yes sir!!! Every tues at 10pm
This site just keeps my mind buzzin lol

ye i thought so , cause ur busting some really nice rhymes
good luck
ahaha i could reply back to ur rap , but i will look STUPID

haven't been here for a long time
Looks like there's a new expert spitting his lines
Dr professor u leave me confused
All u other dudes leave me amused
Mystics y u scared to battle
If u not gonna rap,go home, go shake ur baby rattle
Chicktrz switched her style up
It's good but I liked wen u wuz dissin
Where's ktown and joke,can't see them or maybe i'm missin
If they still here then they better start to listen
Dr pro got some real skill
His rhymes just make u chill
His rhymes are so intricate
Usin fancy words like inquisate
I ain't sayin u ain't bad I just like his way
I'm gona end this with gotta go have a nice day

pro fessa y u writin poetry u started off bad but got better
I'm gonna tell u this chicktrz can do poetry too it snot that hard u good but stop
Tryin to be peaceFul
I wanna c some battlin

WTF I'm having ******* mood swings
It's like I'm having man pms

yeh im new to the rap game
ima introduce ma self , mystik be ma name
i aint got no father , aint got no mother
sent here from space
to destroy the human race
with ma outa-this world rhymes
to destroy these pathetic homsapians
was soul reason for my creation

im slpit second on the draw
u the brick -im c4
im crazy , and i be hardcore
im dopest ass rapper tht u eva saw
stray bullet hits ya jaw
so you drop the mic
thats when i strike
when u defences rnt up
then the next rapper comes "sup"
then again the battle must beGIN
spitting mystik rhymes like merLIN
expell my exteme rap MAGIC
the outcome = tragic
then my rhymes LENGTHEN & STRENGTHEN
but untill then
stick to my lyrics cause i like EM
keep ma flow , and excell THEM

peace .. Mystik..``

rate for me ye?

good luck pplz

WHERES EVERY1?!?!?

yea, cuz in the end thats all that really matters

wow.... uh... the rhymes are good... but it makes no ******* sense lol

there was once a story about little brianb
he was a lil bitch crip and could not see
he came into a town, full of bloods
he walked around,and got beet for his studs
this town was Ktown,
a place were u dont **** around
u discrace!!
we dont care about u,
we'll take ur shoes,
and leave u with only bluses
rushen u to the hospital
sreemin, help now
and cops be sayin " when, were and HOW
come here i dare u, me and Ktown
with **** u up and kick u when ur down
so think about what u say and how u say it
cause when my boys here u'll be in deep ****
ur a lil bitch and i can tell
ur prolly a nerd, and stay home cause u smell
just go and cheek it up ur ass
get off the haroine start smokin the grass
iam not tryin to harass
but i just smashed


PEACE

nigga u got a nice sista
for all i no u could be a used to be mister
what up with me bout to get bitch slapped
nigga where a vest and expect to get capped
home girl u dont wanna mess wit me
ill never go away im like a mutha fuckin flea
and ho u probally flat
now shut yo ass up before yo face meets my gat

anyone can do what i do well i welcome your opinion and i think your creative a selfish lover, but creative but i think you might wish to see the major differences you use very good vocabulary and keep with a single point but you lack multi's and punchlines metaphors are good though ! and don't take this worng its just constructive critisism i can see your a little bitter which is cool ,

but hun anyone can do what you do , so dont get so high up on yourself !!!

Wow this little bitch actually made some decent rhymes,
but we all know your too much of a pussy to comit any crimes.
Man you need to stop this fake gangster ****, get a new attitude,
maybe when you get a REAL life you'll show me some fuckin' gratitude.
Icey boy, in all realness I think your gay,
your such a bitch you couldn't pick up a can and spray.
Me? In every other drawer I keep a 9 inch knife,
so **** sending you to the hospital I'll take your motha fuckin life.

You've actually gotten a lot better since this whole thing got started,
but so have I, sooner better than later my raps will be uncharted.
Don't get me wrong, I know I'm not the best,
but to know I'm just getting better at this rap game, I feel blessed.
So Icey, stop making fake ass rhymes, its a bunch o' bullshit,
before I get one of those knifes out and give your throat a little slit.

*peace*

Hey i just wanted to say chickster , i think your great insp-her-ation , thank you . Where you from ? i think you have a great style !

i see ya hot you like the mic i wanna meet ya
im a carnivoure i wanna eat ya
your a cool girl a school girl u wanna teacher
on the desk on the chalk board on the bleachers
u a virgin ,word then how many times u had sex? nun
then you wanna preacher
hit ya abdominal section
wit a phenomenal erection
woof
woof
i aint saying your a bich it's just you never take ****
unless your naked , then you take it
like a gun an make it shoot
take it like the sacred fruit
i remember you wanting to reach climax
and you wanna keep a brother from reaching my max
well you can try to deceive all day just lie back
and i'll journey to the center of your earth like imax
you grab the bed and i'll keep ya head posted
you get out a bed i'll keep ya bread toasted
you probally saying stop dreaming
well how many times the neighbours gonna call the cops ,stop screaming !
you know the safety word
lady bird
if our love was drugs would it be extacy ,bliss ,maybe herb
maybe words
you not the type to hate sex
cant wait for the next date of hate sex
not a day of the month a date effects
im still trying to get rid of the symptoms your state effects
first time ive ever been forced in this!
by an abortonist whose methods contortonist!
only time we came up short in this, when she threw in a dwarf in this
got the noise bylaw officers reportin this
i mean how come you gotta be so forceful ?
how many times i gotta rupture ya torso!
what happened to cordial ?
i know your my on call girl but where did the cord go?
forgo any pleasure any place ya depth go
strip ya clothes off rip ya clothes off strept throat !
you get served like a last meal on death row !
im that gas in the chamber when you gasp where'd ya breath go !

what u mean? what dosnt make sense?