THIS IS TO EL ZAPATITA
i don't need to know the damn history
i just look at ur rhymes and know u'v never had a victory
and u right i am a monkey, bitch...king kong
destroying you..blowin u to king-dom..come
anyday you can come and get some
talkin like u should be charged for ur rap
u should be charged with bat
for even saying that
if u get charge its gonna be dis-charge
from the players to u for tryin to act-hard
Get back handed, flipped, n on ya head u landed
so confused, ya eye-site slanted
i'll stop playin in get ya ass planted
buried dead or alive? ya wish be granted
or u can stop ur wack **** n just can it
this isn't just a comment, bitch i demand it
your just digging your own grave
your selfish, we could help-this
but just tellin u to behave.......or quit
do it gansta
tie you down and burn ya wit a ciggarette lit
Better watch ya lip
learn out to get
in the gist of a forum
or get hit wit a fist n a for-arm
u in the eye now
u aint even hit the storm-man
..............
that all i got..i am new to rap forums....and kinda new to rap...i'd like
n e suggestions or comments on my stuff ....thx
and no..i don't think i'm good..i am very new lol
but i just saw el zapatita and he looked like someone maybe on my level
so i decided to try it out
thx..
