dunno.... might, but people on this site don't really no what their talkin' about.. no offenece, I know you guys have you'r eown style and ****, but just rhymin' words isn't rap.. Hinkaken spits alright, one decent line in a few raps.. but when it comes to elements, people lack....
and by elements i mean. wordplay, meta's, punches, multies, personals, and that ****... this site don't have it... Slipz, fo-realz, theTruth, quik kid, ONE, Ismdal, are the ones that know how to battle and know elements, but are never online. .....
but I dunno? you down for that battle though?
aight let's do this doc.. i'll spit first
I bet Eryk cries while he masturbates so they call him tha tearjerker
why's this nigga angry all tha time like a Compton postal worker?
Doc, you got me tha first time but i'm back now even berserker
overthrowin tha crown like maf*ckin endentured servant worker
your tha king who's bout to get deposed, yeah you gettin throne away
cuz nigga your rhymes are like runaway pets, they've gone astray
and what's tha deal with this tough guy image that you tryin to portray?
you know your a nice pop music fan who's got an Aiken for Clay
this nigga used to be in ballet but he found it a lil too-too difficult
got picked on as well so now a fake hardcore gangsta is tha result
Is this what happens when you fall victim to a niggas insult?
f*cked you up in tha head now so get thaproffesor to consult
cuz like a f*ckin calender bitch, your days are numbered
I don't give a f*ck what kind of life you encumbered
i'll expose you as an actor, not a rapper after I cause a scene
and prove you got less bounce than a broke trampoline
got tha nerve to call me whack? what a predictable routine
run that bitch ass mouth more than f*ckin dialysis machine
and i'm sure another "you suck" is all i'm gonna be receiven
but you can say it all you want nigga cuz tha kid ain't leavin
takin in all tha glory like your name was Morgan Freemen
i'll just call you Bermuda Triangle cuz you've swallowed alot of seamen
so just make like a widow and proceed wit your grievin
you know thaproffesor taught you everything so just stop tha deceivin
lol.. Pre-written.. and still wack..
I'll spit mine later,
gotta bounce.. lol.. ****, this will be fun (easy)
ya soo fakkee
damm yo lissen all ya are soo fucken fake, if ya was soo real ud be in business wit jay-z && memphis bleek, get it straight not twisted, im soo real, im in businees wit jay-z n his nigga, yeah das my baby..been together since *10.ten.oh.5* so dont hate appreciate, i got the sickest rhymes wit jay-z and the whole roc-a-fella crew.
yeahh yeah yeahh wattup my fam props ta da whole fam
so just shut it quick or stuff it wit a dick,
idc wat u do, juss get out ma face reall quickk
yeahh seriously u ppl i am in roc-a-fella and my b/f just got signed wit his nigga jiggaa
you serious? lol.. kind hard to believe...
just a lil tip to all ya..if ya thi nk ya eva gon make it to da business like me....its not all about the rhymes..you throw 1 or 2 goood rhymes in there n thats it....its the words n the hooks but i aint hellpin ya so get d a fucc outta here
lmao, that's somethin' everyone should know, but bein' this a Text forum, Useless. but it still should flow, and sound good when you're readin' it.. lol... and I don't think you're helpin' much anyways..
im like a bowling ball
comin in ur ur lane to knock u over
you couldnt win this rap battle
if u had a 4 leaf clover
my raps are amazing
i spit to real sick ****
u better watch what ya say
or be ready to take a hit
im a lyrical jesus some call me god
i got more lyrics than a ******* i pod
i spit it like my dick does in ur girlfriends face
i fucked tha bitch in so many ways
i fucked her so hard ud think she was dying
the funny thing is i wasnt even trying
my raps over now
its finished and done
just listen to tha crowd
and find out who won
nah dr. eryk im fo real..u gotta AIM sn..wen my baby get bak AT 5 today ima sho u the signatures n everything...my nigga got put on the label wit the whole roc-a-fella famm n shyt they grew up in da marcy projects together
yo uz a ******* bitch. who u think ur poppin off all dat shyt?! ima show u whos queen and really make u feen. you dun kno who ur talkin to so sit the **** down.
nahh nigga aint nobody choking
yo mammas so fat i can beet right thru her but its all gravy cuz i never even knew her
your so ******* stupid that you make me laugh. yeah this nigga said u put the fun in disfunctional
turn around so i can talk behind ya bak. yo wait up nvm. turn around again yeah nigga u look so wak. u see i talk shyt to ur face and not behind. cuz im a reall nigga. yeah thats not a lie.
nigga plz i dontr look for my shyt on the interent. im just sick with the flo. cmon man now we'r in this 2gether..**** you....i aint wak like ui
u need to be tuned in instead of broadcasting
look at u u lil weed smoker yeah i love ya but i aint no doper. u think u sick wit the flo, but u really needa kno, you ol'...so get the **** outta here....this is MY show
im sick, but na its not frum sucking no dick, you tthink wat u want bitch, look at u lookin like a ******* witch, you dont kno wat ur doin, but u sure hell are loosin, so sit down, calm down, and stop actin like a clown
iight those r just sum replys to rap battles wit my friends frum like about a couple of months ago..
dr. eryk..mind you..im only 14..but i tell u no lies wen my babys video come out ima be on it soo chek it...iight 1
lmao couple months ago?! damn.. you're 14 how olds you're b.f.. borderin' the age of a pediofile?
and you're rhymes are basic and sound elementry! step it up son!@
if your man is signed to Rocafella.. do you really think that he's gonna stick wit a 14 year old when he "supposedly" gets all that money and fame? come on now.. you can think of a better story that that!
I have the same issue as Dr. Eryk...cats on here aren't recognizing the forms of what needs to battle. I mean, I'm not trying to knock any newbies on here...keep doing it, but recognize who is doing it better. I also have a problem that this is such an ongoing thread...so many good things get lost if you don't come back everyday (case in point: me). I think having separate battle threads and having people vote would be a good idea. I found this board by accident but I was a member and moderator of a board Edit [Moderator]: Link removed and they have text battling there but it died down and faced the same issue.
There are a few cats on here that keep it going...keep it up.
Anyone wanna holla at me Orderandxaos at AIM.
ONE
Quote:yo uz a **** bitch. who u think ur poppin off all dat shyt?! ima show u whos queen and really make u feen. you dun kno who ur talkin to so sit the **** down.
nahh nigga aint nobody choking
yo mammas so fat i can beet right thru her but its all gravy cuz i never even knew her
your so **** stupid that you make me laugh. yeah this nigga said u put the fun in disfunctional
turn around so i can talk behind ya bak. yo wait up nvm. turn around again yeah nigga u look so wak. u see i talk shyt to ur face and not behind. cuz im a reall nigga. yeah thats not a lie.
nigga plz i dontr look for my shyt on the interent. im just sick with the flo. cmon man now we'r in this 2gether..**** you....i aint wak like ui
u need to be tuned in instead of broadcasting
look at u u lil weed smoker yeah i love ya but i aint no doper. u think u sick wit the flo, but u really needa kno, you ol'...so get the **** outta here....this is MY show
im sick, but na its not frum sucking no dick, you tthink wat u want bitch, look at u lookin like a **** witch, you dont kno wat ur doin, but u sure hell are loosin, so sit down, calm down, and stop actin like a clown
iight those r just sum replys to rap battles wit my friends frum like about a couple of months ago..
dr. eryk..mind you..im only 14..but i tell u no lies wen my babys video come out ima be on it soo chek it...iight 1
Is your keyboard broken or is your IQ below 80? I'm thinking the latter (that means the second option since you probably don't know what "latter" means)
And is your "b/f" above 18? Because I think there's some illegal weird pedophile **** going on.
You notice R Dub The Real Female thug hasnt posted any spits or comments in ages, and all of a sudden a "Just Hatched" MiSS_PRiNCESS arrives....... she was 14 too.... hmmmm????? i wonder????
Yeah good point there Battle.. i was noticin tha same **** too.. next thing you know Spidey's gonna come back as "Tha Flash" or some **** like that.. lol
