Neverending Rap Battle

detox
yo detox i read your rhyme..what the **** with that bitches dancin ****? i dont get it...it has nothin to do about me..c/mon diss for real....**** no wonder your rhyme sux..

Re: detox
Aight.... This is a key, no thoughts.. my mind just spitten free
i feel that some people here attract crowds like wiggle tv
so dumb n far behind with the words they put on the lines
some of there **** is harder to read than foreign road signs
flowin behind.. they will never reach the pinnacle..
why?.... cos they bitch so much and there income is always minimal
i scribble this as a sketch copy, with no time to even think...
and fuk, it beats some of the **** here that gets dropped and then sinks
stop it with ya winks at eachother.. riding fukin dicks
cos im like a chiropractor i will slip ya fukin disks
risky n 80 have ya battle and stop whingin' n whinin'
if ya wanna reach the top well ya have to start climbing..
im dyin everyday takin a step closer to the edge
so whilst im here i will get my back scratched and my garden hedged
jeez boys it's time to stop actin like mouses and clowns
if you guys were cyclones ya still couldn't bring the house down
round after round i just see all this gangster ****
it just prooves they got small iq and zero wit
heros dont get places by keepin there feet upon the ground
.. they fly to new heights and get the best out of there towns
this sounds a little blotchy, yeah ya got me
but i dont care cos this is freestyle, not played out monopoly..
monotany is kickin in i think this is gettin boring
all i hear is talks and plans but no actual drawings..


bored so i thought i would have a quick scribble..

hey, someone drop me some lines and i'll hit you back

thasid still waiting for you to hit me up
thats if you still are

ey yo ,, ma bad MC Risky.. actually ma internet aint workin properly.. nd i got ma basketball thangs goin .. soo.. ayte herez mine..

ayte check it check it...
ur not ma broda man .. am frm tha mothaland.. i speak nepalese a language u dont understand.. f*** a crew am a one man clan .. wid a knife in ma pocket and a gun in ma hand..am a Nepalese Mc .. cant u seee.. i flow ma rhyme like am spreadin disease... Mc Risky.. i'ma battle ya.. make ya down wid ma rhyme..flow it soo bad it remind ya alwais time to time..ya think ur tha illest.. buh ur not..can't u see son am on the numba one Spot..i rap very easily like am tyin tha knot..ya think u look cool smokin tha pot..wat do people call u Mc risky..ya aint no MC.. i gotta good name fa ya Gypsy.. ur battelin wid wrong one broda.. son u in tipsy.. I can see sum stupid niggas talkin **** bou me'.. F**K time_bandit .. SucK-Ing Dick.. real ugly geek.. think hez gd in battelin as Pac nd BIG.. Hall of Shame.. Nah.. Am tha hall of Fame.. hatin newbie.. I'ma give ya lotta pain..Di*K! i bring the heat..When i drop this beat...With my flows you cant compete.. i'ma make ya history.. ya'll be tha weakest Marty's in tha world.. LoL Fu** it dawg.. dis would be tha story neva been told.. now ut time bust ur rhyme.. dude .. i hope u'll come wid sum good rhyme .. take ur time..

dude.. i think ur too good daawg..but i aint losin ma grip dawg.. show me watchu got..

look gangsta_313.. thasid'z battelin ere so ya gotta flee..
u recon ur gangsta.. gimme sum break.. ur a wanksta..
i'ma make ya unknown faeva like ur tha alien frm mars..
diss ya soo bad ya'll reach age of 99 when ya finish readin ma bars..
hey son u've jus won tha race.. its tha race whoz gnna die next..
dont cry dawg.. i'ma be dere when u're dead.. to spit on ur grave..
Hahaha Lyricall Gangsta.. u sound like a wack ass Jamsta..
Gangsta_313 tha Immortal Rappa is ere cant u see..
Raise tha white flag.. betta to surrender den face ma rap..
Dun try to spit more of ur crap.. befo ya get in ma Mouse Trap..

Wassup Detox

Yo, time. what's the link where tha proffessor bit my verse?

Theres 80, risky, prof and for realz
also eryk, time bandit and 313 without the skills
as well as lythic admit it you are just ****
and everything trix writes is fukin bit
if i slipped up and havent mentioned ya name
it's prbably cos ya that bad i didnt need to take an aim
can ya blame me though for bein such a silly prick
everyone here thinks they the bomb and are lyrically equipped
shift ya eyesights to something more easy
cos the way half ya's write... it just isn't emcee
remember when rhyme first took its place
it involved dr suess and a pencil case
now theres tastes of emcees rippin the mic to pieces
but most of the people her are just "****"... suess's fecies
eat this dogs like its ya last meal
cos im sick of seein people pastin rhymes i dont feel
say ya gonna kill me but thats just an illusion
how would ya shoot me when ya dont know what streets im abusin'
at least im choosin to free again and am willin to take a chance
half ya 's couldn't "freestyle" if ya's were thrown in a pool with no pants
take a glance at your notebook and check the last date you wrote
it was probably months ago that you even sketched a quote
i hope ya's sought out what ya wanna do with ya lives
cos being a player doesn't mean that ya got nine wives
..guys it means a man that achieves his dreams
a man that gets what he wants even if others bleeds
believe me i aint got anything that i really want
but im gettin there slowly puttin up my ideas in large font

another quick free...... take it to heart, i don't care...

damn slippz im cryin. <=if u didnt know i was bein sarcastic lol..your a waste of space..hehe ey doc ill try to find the post again ok?..ill send the link ASAP

slipz and I aint at the same level, He's under my shoe
and Ur sayin' I have no skill? well where does that put U?
U act like Ur the illest rapper to ever step foot in this place
each verse U post up is like the wrong end of a pencil, easy to erase
I aint takin' Ur verse to heart, Just replyin' to that wack diss
this kid was neve 'hot to begin' with, but my words will smash slipz
quit spittin' quick 'keys' cause no ones cares bout ur thoughts
U aint even worth my best lyrics cause I've seen what U got
slipz is wack as ****. **** one of the newbies could take U
comin' at U with unwanted force, like I lyrically raped U
I can't even picture U freestlyin in real life with Lyrics posted above
I see 'gays' in Ur future, cause thats the only U'll be appreciated and get love
why would someone in their right mind, pick a bathroom appliance as a rap name?
I'm a "g-unot' fan cause spittin' agianst someone Like U, U lack 'game'
and since that wack diss is the best U got, things can only get worse
Next time U say my wordplay is tastless, take alook at Ur own verse

Re: detox
man im just playin yall i spit a verse better thren youll ever spit you wack-ass mutherfuker


wats crackin' fo-realz dawg

ahit me back

Re: detox
yo 80 man ima settle this beef now dawg a battle right now bitch here i go mutherfuker

You 'bout to be busted then a ghost on Ghostbusters
I don't trust ya then bust ya
Spill yo blood everywere like mustard and custard
I see you stutterin sayin' nuttin and sprayin summin
im struttin with yo ass as a crown while niggaz mamma's fixin up my button and splutterin and flutterin away before i twitch
She actin like a ho dressed like a bitch
she gonna hike-hitch or is it hitch-hike
im spittin like mike or im alike the mike
i use the mike woop yo ass better in a fight
murder in the streetlight at night
nigga thats aint heaven thats the devil's light
I turn nigga you better learn its ur turn
u to be burnt worse then tina turner
she was white and got killed by a bunsen burner
i spit lines and you die from the speaker
cuase yo ass gettin in the **** deeper and deeper
ima leave ya finish you off another day
now lets all get on yo mama and **** her another way Okay?

eyo dawg respect

yo whos spittin
yo i heard you talkin outta your backside squat squeze,
but i dont wanna hear the bullshit stop please,
your a crap mc ill have to set you straight,
but your voice is too high maybe its too late,
you cant stop your self sitting a home wid no rating,
watching the simpsons wilst masterbating,
im better than you im a nice fella,
your in a cella dressed in yella,
sippin on the frutella,
yo used not great, im a fly on the wall mate,
watching you kiddy mcs outside playin,
your all prayin, wilst im paying atention to attention to paying,
im gonna kick your ass mate thats me job,
your the fat one who resembals a blob,
we gonna beat ya shot ya gob, ill **** you up man me n me mob!

yo wise he busten custard,
you stupid bastard,
you i heard your rime en you stuttered,
only difference between us is i can rap en your coloured,
get some diamonds ill introduce you to jacob,
wilst your doing your makeup,
your a girl and your bitch made,
thats why i wanna role across your head wid a switch-blade,
your crazed crap still like wood your a pine,
im damn fine,
try en hit back at the pimponline!

nathyn, a mistake your makin,
stop chattin boobs youve done too much wanking,
yo ur spiiten en your mouth must hurt,
cos all the bulshit that it jus spurt,
yo are lyricolly incorrect,
lay off the bulshit ill give you some ****-nickoret,
your so **** your rhymes goin backwourds your in lyrical deubt, your really stuck,
you cant rap for ****, grab my dick en take a suck,

you have jus been pimped

yo
yo naythin that was big of you to say,
but you should jump en ill stay,
i heard you were buying viagra off ebay,
£2.10 every day, youll have to pay,
your the one tryin to strife,
man ill take your kids en rape your wife,
when im ever gonna tellya,
ena viagra sella, ena runnin form your feller,
leave you dead in a seller

PIMPONLINE
Yo listen up

YO pimpmyline is so easy,
he teased me, reading his 100 raps made laugh
man this guy shud die and never come bak
pimpmyline , fine ill pimp your line / like u smashed in the cellar/
this aint no magic and u aint uri gellar/ so u a big fella
small feet , man u got small meat, sit down take a seat
watch me rap battle with da beat, watch and learn/ come bak later when its your turn..... ill burn u like rubber, brother, your mother at home fking yer best mate WAIT no its 2 late...... bye mate

bitch ass detox read this ****
Yo detox after analyzing ur rhyme i got the inference,
That talking and typing is different.
All ur rhyme is so out and wack
before u submit ur rhyme better have it check
thing twice before u battle with me
Cuz once u lose ur gender turn from "he" to "she"
These is between u and me nothin 2 do with the word "papa" and "mama"
Hey while your eye focusing on the screen i hope u dont go trauma,
These aint real beef this is only drama:)
Ur rhyme aint sounds like rap,so let me have your rhyme get rape
Record it in a videotape and sell it to guys and horny babes.
My rhyme is surrounded with thorn,
U need a sword to cut ur way through like aragorn,
Im invisible u cant see me with ur naked eye u can only see me during im doing intercourse web site porn.
Look im tired and need to sleep next day il forget these rhymes cuz im reborn.

sup guys


ive been practiceig my structure but yo im out peace