Re: **** yall ****
King Jay777 wrote:**** im back with the mac ctand back
if you **** want beef thats gone be that
hmm kinda gay opener
but if you **** want peace you shoulda thought bout that
fo you thinkin bout talkin **** now ima roast these cats
weak punch
ayo where gto at pussy bitch is probably blow jobbin
come home take some tylenol cuz his throats throbbin
this is alright, better than that^^
you homo pussy you didnt think id be back
im strapped so you **** gone see that
lol...no one really cared when you left..weak
im **** around witchya
ill lace you **** cut you up like scizzaz
My ryhmes are hott yous as cold as a blizzard
now ima piont this next one at mc slippaz
too simple..put more thought in it next time
probably a pussy bitch tryin ta reinvent his life
on the internet true cuz he cant find a wife
hmm an attempted personal?? coulda hit harder though
Yall **** is fake outta all yall i got the best range
why dont fo realz go out and get a sex change
made me chuckle, not bcoz its g0od but bcoz its s0o LAME
cross dressin in tight dresses aint gonna get you man sex
so get a pussy and start thinkin about how ya stance set
finally an OK bar..but why talk bout man sex?
cuz when i blow through my right hook is murderous
when i swing on ya ass you gotta start re learnin ****
kinda nice
when the glock pop ya ass gonna drop
Kings back runnin the **** so yall can suck my cock
LAME
Theres three things i hate... gays pussys and bitches
ima make an incison come up and drop kick this migit
punch is all over the place..put more thought in it next time
Just like last time ya words aint hurtin me
ya im a stick figua... with a dick bigga than hercules
another lame one
now listen to all yall **** im at 8-0 stats
ill do yall like a turtle and put a shell in ya back
okay wordplay..good try though
My rhyme book is infamous the pages is stacked
ima yell **** all yall on my victory lap
weak ass closer
dr_eryk wrote:
I was thinkin' bout respondin' to this cause I dunno? bored. lol but I think I will.... check it..
King jay 777, what the hell U babblin' bout? U ain't nothin' special
Only time Ur names hot is if I set fire to all Ur Credentials (ID's)
haha nice operner wordplay tooan okay wordplay..coulda hit harder though
U hate pussy? That's why U rap bout sex changes and suckin' Cocks
Kill the town U from like it's a giant pussy, Cuz I'm ****' Ur Block
haha mad wordplay^^
I'm makin' U a bitch in my diss, Gotta keep my pimp hand strong
Claimin' to be back? Read the post's no one even knew U were gone
nice punch
I'm amazed to some extent; Cuz findin' a verse to that level of wackness is rare
I'll box U in and make U look like a claustrophobic person gaspin' for air
nice META
U and risky boys? There should be a rule statin' "no Gay Crews Allowed"
That diss was so fu*kin' soft, U should of spit it on a fu*kin' cloud
okay bar..haha no gay crews allowed lol
I ain't gonna bust on Risky in this Cuz I already KO'd him
I'm speakin' the readers in this line! "King Jay 777 I owned him"
nice personal on risky..but thats mad funny^^
U hopeless in this verse sorta like watchin' a Gamer without a game
I'll tattoo my name on Ur forehead just so U won't forget my name
that hit king
U must be a retarded mc; I'm shocked to find out that Ur limp wrist can type
Ur verse couldn't get a High five if U submitted it on the damn site (hi5)
haha its a 'hi-5' for this line from me^^
Here's the fact! Every verse U post U wants some dude on Ur dick
And if U keep rappin' bout those subjects then U truly are ****' sick
hmm didnt really feel it that much..but king shoulda felt that dick
I'll spray Ur blood on the walls Just to make Ur whole home bloody
I just murdered U kid, Let's have a moment of silence for this nobody
nice closer and wordplay too
this wasnt really a battle..but just wanted too show pplz da diff between a whack rapper[king]..and a skilled rapper[doc]
hey im back for a lil bit i just wanted to write about whats been goin on lately
i was waiting at the c-train
peddling some cocaine
5-0 asking me questions trying to pick my brain
i said i was cold trying to get out the rain
they wouldnt leave me alone
they said they didnt like my tone
asking me if i was stoned
i said do i look high
looked him straight in the eye an said **** you good bye
i was threatened an showed handcuffs
the cops said you wanna act tough
so i called his bluff
told him he's got ball's like hilary duff
he said thats enough so he wrote me a ticket
my friend bent over and showed him were he can stick it
then i said you wanna pick ****
ok i'll go to court
i'll file a report
you'll lose your job
im not your lover bob
you cant lick my nob
this officer pulled out his light
he started to wonder why there was no fright in his sight
our eye's ready to fight
he calls down town
two arrest warrants were found
guns pulled head's forced to the ground
wrist cuffed an bound
2 hours later out of jail
a promise to appear an im out on bail
what can i say criminals prevail
have a nice day this is the end of the tale
ey detox im callin you out fo a battle..i dunno am just bored..ill spit first
yo Detox ill be waitin fo your reply man
'Toxicated' and hurt..kid your suicidal and certain fo death
wordz from tha best "Learn and Respect", you aint capable of merkin a vet
tired of whack rhymes and threadz..'Mines' makin this Nerdz 'Burst' into shredz
like Perverts searchin for sex, your pitiful..Pplz earz popped when ya verses are read
neva under-estimate my intelligence, i'll be honest i can easily win this
ya 'Punches' was 'Non-Hits'..tha whole **** made no sense..what you wrote it unconcious?
Detox?? anotha lame ass geek..anotha rapper ill beat if ya aint bringin tha heat
came first to compete i bring da game..first defeat from me left you feelin ashamed
had it with whack rappers, faggots stop..ya'll couldnt drop 'Hot~sh1t' if ya ass was hot
forcin me to grab da glock..stab ya pops and make both of ya caskets drop
just face ya whack..your a disgrace ta rap..and dont get mad cuz im just statin facts
my levels 'High' like its laced wit 'Crack'..if you beat me ill go to space and back
Detox and lossess go together like trains and tracks, wade and shaq, bases and bats
break ya back layin you flat wouldnt be sick if you and i start tradin our raps
throwin uncontrollable hits, unloadin trickz..my fist on ya face..your nose in a ditch
showin im ill, disposin this b1tch..Doc N Lythic you can join me and kill this sh1t :wink:
lol, thanks for the bar by bar breakdown man.. lol
no probs man..just wanted too show peoplez how whack b1tches can get haha
detox...
yo detox u rap as if ur from detroit,speaking of u...your rhyme drop down like asteroid hitting us without even knowing it.You must be tired spitting.. here inject your self with steroid..while me? i can type edit my rhyme 24 hour none stop cuz i aint human im android.I never stop spitting cuz i believe rhymes are infinite not void.I admit i suck..but since u said your the best....your not even a bad ass...i bet u dont even where hooptie dress or any ice cream bling bling near your neck to the chest. Look avery1 here on a quest to be the best..if u think your the best..come and put me in BLAST....oh yeah be my GUEST.
80proof, U wack bitch. can't even step to Detox with that ****
luckly we got two called "professors" maybe they can teach U to rap bitch
I dont' even know why I'm spittin', Ur just a waste of Lyrics
Sayin' U can spit for 24 hours is stupid. luckily we can't hear it
admitin' U suck, that's koo'. but why U statin' the Obvious?
I know this line is filler, but this verse I just felt like droppin' this
and No ones on here lookin' to be the best, Ur just makin' **** up
spitin' weak verses in each post, now I'll pass U off to detox, U wack fuk
after this, Refer to me as Ur father, cause Ur gettin' sonned Kid
Kinda sad on Ur part. cause I'm only five bars in, and Ur already done with.
just bored.
haha ey 80proof did u read my last line on my spit..i said doc and lythic are invited to keep spittin at detox i didnt say you..dude detox kills you
yo anyone here want a little battle
if you do hit me up
peace
eyo this is 2 both of you niggaz iight and no disrespect im just playin iight dawg
You say im wack you rhyme like 2 dogs fuckin' in a sack
its time you went back to the gutter with your stutter
cause my rhymes will only make you splutter
I kill you both and the three bears and goldelox
cause 80proff you on the mike with eryk and detox
and i love the vibe and i cant describe the feelin
after been with your dead body after it hit the ceelin'
im a villin after i spit a verse u be killin yourself
and then someone else after your health
iim just bein stealth about it im out of it and proud of it
bitch you aint even git a ball yo mans coppin the hits
you just sad when he use a condom in xtra small and the feelin dont fit
its time for me to be honest and promise you after this no1 will be misssin u im still dissen you and pissin on you,cursin its worse then worse
ill drop a verse then youll be hurt by the flow just so you know
wish you could all be me but dont forget this name
you cant hate me if you want but i run this game
im the best from all the rest cause all the rest is lame
and if you wanna step up you be put to shame
im more dangerous then a bushfires flame
ill whoop yo ass so good it'll be put in a frame
im the one that got the flow like fire
im the one your mamas are always gonna desire
ill roll up MC's like a bowlin ball
the first to throw a punch in a westcoast brawll
Bitch im the king of the jungle hear me roar
eyo every nigga out there respect cause i aint got no beef wit u iight
respect most eryk man u tite as
tImE_bAnDiT wrote:haha ey 80proof did u read my last line on my spit..i said doc and lythic are invited to keep spittin at detox i didnt say you..dude detox kills you
eyo fo' sure time bandit respect u rhymes tite as and hit me with all the hits u got iight
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80proff man get the **** outa my way u just a newbie lil bitch who keep on bitin other verses
you like dumb and dumber put together man get the **** off
eyo im out dawg respect to my niggaz
Detox wrote:tImE_bAnDiT wrote:haha ey 80proof did u read my last line on my spit..i said doc and lythic are invited to keep spittin at detox i didnt say you..dude detox kills you
eyo fo' sure time bandit respect u rhymes tite as and hit me with all the hits u got iight
respet
80proff man get the **** outa my way u just a newbie lil bitch who keep on bitin other verses
you like dumb and dumber put together man get the **** off
all g0od detox man, i hate these whack cats here like 80proff
tImE_bAnDiT wrote:
'Toxicated' and hurt..kid your suicidal and certain fo death
wordz from tha best "Learn and Respect", you aint capable of merkin a vet
tired of whack rhymes and threadz..'Mines' makin this Nerdz 'Burst' into shredz
like Perverts searchin for sex, your pitiful..Pplz earz popped when ya verses are read
neva under-estimate my intelligence, i'll be honest i can easily win this
ya 'Punches' was 'Non-Hits'..tha whole **** made no sense..what you wrote it unconcious?
Detox?? anotha lame ass geek..anotha rapper ill beat if ya aint bringin tha heat
came first to compete i bring da game..first defeat from me left you feelin ashamed
had it with whack rappers, faggots stop..ya'll couldnt drop 'Hot~sh1t' if ya ass was hot
forcin me to grab da glock..stab ya pops and make both of ya caskets drop
just face ya whack..your a disgrace ta rap..and dont get mad cuz im just statin facts
my levels 'High' like its laced wit 'Crack'..if you beat me ill go to space and back
Detox and lossess go together like trains and tracks, wade and shaq, bases and bats
break ya back layin you flat wouldnt be sick if you and i start tradin our raps
throwin uncontrollable hits, unloadin trickz..my fist on ya face..your nose in a ditch
showin im ill, disposin this b1tch..Doc N Lythic you can join me and kill this sh1t :wink:
Detox wrote:
You say im wack you rhyme like 2 dogs ****' in a sack
its time you went back to the gutter with your stutter
cause my rhymes will only make you splutter
I kill you both and the three bears and goldelox
cause 80proff you on the mike with eryk and detox
and i love the vibe and i cant describe the feelin
after been with your dead body after it hit the ceelin'
im a villin after i spit a verse u be killin yourself
and then someone else after your health
iim just bein stealth about it im out of it and proud of it
bitch you aint even git a ball yo mans coppin the hits
you just sad when he use a condom in xtra small and the feelin dont fit
its time for me to be honest and promise you after this no1 will be misssin u im still dissen you and pissin on you,cursin its worse then worse
ill drop a verse then youll be hurt by the flow just so you know
wish you could all be me but dont forget this name
you cant hate me if you want but i run this game
im the best from all the rest cause all the rest is lame
and if you wanna step up you be put to shame
im more dangerous then a bushfires flame
ill whoop yo ass so good it'll be put in a frame
im the one that got the flow like fire
im the one your mamas are always gonna desire
ill roll up MC's like a bowlin ball
the first to throw a punch in a westcoast brawll
Bitch im the king of the jungle hear me roar
eyo every nigga out there respect cause i aint got no beef wit u iight
respect most eryk man u tite as
uppin fo votes..may the better Emcee win detox man still respect ya bro :wink:
yooo damn i aint seen this shi* for tiiiiiiiime but yo MC Slipperz i can't help but admire your shi* trust bro its all gd looking forward to reading your next 1
proper mad props tho mang
allright yo detox,
your crap im prefferd,
your all blured,
you use rhymes two bit shlured in two thousand third,
you aint no man use a bird,
yo im pimponline yuor spittin a crap line,
its crap should be ellegal ill call it a lyrical crime,
your lines are sluggy, yuse a druggy,
yo im hitten bois you kissen em,
you spitten lines but you missen em,
i right lines like you sniffen em,
look boi my rhymes are self evident,
now im runnin for lyrical president, wb
detox ...
Detox your diss is retarted...look im not even started...u rhyme r so funny till my ass farted. Look im nasty than a villain...il give u some pain..i set a trap averytime u rhyme so u cant rap anytime.I admit i smoke weed just to fullfill my need.But when come to spitting or dissing man its like need for speed...i aint no need upgrade such as wheel or EKZOS just to beat u DETOX...i only need to spit sulliva from my mouth and i can smell your defeat cuz my nose is more sensitive than a FOX.Your typing WACK about me when im not around....now im BACK to ATTACK so u better have ur ass PROTECT.HAhahaha your insult is so salty alot of variety....from stack,stutter,ceelin,health?name,game,lame and oh yeah even your own name "DETOX"....man u can keep all those lame rhyme inside a old BOX...even my lil brother can say the word "DEE-TOX" or "PEE-COCK".Your rhyme is ugly with so many WRINGKLE and PIMPLE....no wonder your rhyme is always alone and SINGLE....but dont get PISS...i suggest u have your rhyme fix by DERMATOLOGIST.Speaking of mom and dad...did u said that you will be my mom desire?Man shes not even retire..she got my dad...man if "HE" read your stupid **** rhyme...he will kick your pad.U said your the best cuz the other is LAME?well once i beat cho ass....il have that title CLAIM make u drop in SHAME....cuz u know what? u and me are not the SAME becuz your rhyme is better but my rhyme is greater 2bad u must except it like it or.I AINT NO RAP WANNABEE...i BEAT ANYBODY....BELIEVE IT OR NOT EVEN MY 7 YEAR OLD BROTHER BEAT "BILL COSBY"
yo pimponline dat was s0o crap..as fo 80proof..dat was whack lol fix up ur structure coz nobody reads paragraphs. lol why you all dissin detox? just becoz i had a battle wit him dont mean yall can battle him too haha whack
