yo, do you even know what those mean?
I had punches like crazy... wordplay too... i don't even think you know what those mean
why?
and tell me, do you know what those elements mean?
dick u dnt knw wot those mean if u knw explain it
lol alright....
structure: how well you're rap is constructed, how it looks...
flow: the flow throught you're rap. you should know this.
Meta's - metaphors/ simliles, comparin' you're style or anyting to do with you with like or as.. or usin' 'than' . comparin' somethin' bout you to somethin' else..
Multies - syllable matchin' words that rhymes, but have more syllable's in the word... like "headin' for disaster"/ "spreadin' for ur master" that's a nother MC's. fuckin' you should know.
Punches- You should know what those are. lmao "punchlines"
wordplay - a word that goes both ways, like in my rap. the "don't stand a chance" or the "head shot" line...
forealz wrote: this battle is like fingering your sister......just four-fit(forfiet)
that's a good example of wordplay..
personals: self explainatory
I just lost, bitch keep talkin/
dont try to battle me bitch, keep walkin/
i'm an amateur, **** think before you speak/
better buy new pads, yours is started to leak/
lmao, your minds like hitle
remember this hey u wo **** then so when im an ethustic then well battle again******************
lmao yeah, that was way back... even my **** back then took you're rap.. so just admit i fuckin' murdered you're ass and then when you're ethusiast we can battle agian, and i can fuckin' kill you agian
yo im back, haha damn DOC you killed him nice, since i left theres been wack ass 'rappers' joinin damnn
any1 up fo a battle, just holla and ill spit back ASAP
THIS RAP IS NOT THAT OLD...
its the lockdown of the rap game
i received the hip-hop fame, unstoppable rap reign
pumpin blood, every vein in your brain i disect
my lyrics are too hard to accept
flow swiftly while you cried and you wept
swept away, when you pray to the sky when its dark and its grey
these mortals with weak souls im constrained to just slay
your astray till this day
u obey, im potrayed like a GOD
i do not got a squad, im the LYRICAL GOD
fill your chest with silver bullets, chokin on your own blood
pierce this rod to your jaw, i rhyme with a flaw
there isnt a rap law, dice you up with chainsaw
not too late to withdraw
ur raps are made of straw, mines made outta bricks
gotta bag full of tricks, these b!tches i gotta kick
swimmin in a p0ol full of money
on the run hunny, you depict the energizer bunny
its funny,your hoppin and hidin sif your easter bunny
you gotta agree, that your rappin with bluffs
u should be thankful im on these police handcuffs
this rap game's corrupt, ill unleash an unheard verse
to terminate this universe, im a terrible curse
your words ill reverse, im the doc not a nurse
im furious and more worst, we collide and you die
i survive, and i thrive in the cife,takin lives
universal flow its ready to bust
watch the stars and the planets quickly combust
always rhyme with the bl0od and the guts
workin from dawn till dusk
my mission to disgust, infest your raps with this rust
killin u is a must, this should be discussed
united nations gather together
rain or shine im rappin whatevers the weather
whether your dead or alive, dead whenever you'll arrive
ill operate on your body for 1 hour, your body they'll devour
by canniballistic rapperz, just the money they after, thereafter
theres nothin left,except your bl0ody cracked skull
should i explain more or your just too dull?
ill nullify your raps, the pains too unbearable
ill make a record label, strangle you with a cable
betta take precaution 40 cal. ready fo action
digest this bullets slidin on your throat
you can take the scapegoat outta this rap ****, im skitz
ima blow you to fukin atomic bitz
gauge your eyes out from its sockitz, itz a nuclear warfare
go to sleep b1tch im your worst nightmare, s0o prepare
its nearly the end, with my rhyme and its flow, just quickly ascends
while you slowly decend, i cause wreck and havoc all over the world
like your brain just twisted and painfully swirled, reality unfurled
you cant compete with my complexity, my superiority
i kill like THE RING, i come out of your TV
murder you, slaughter you with the devils walkin stick
how many times should i blast you?
SIX HUNDRED AND SIXTY-SIX
SPIT BACK TO IT IF YOU WANT I DOUBLE DARE YOU TO hahaOR AT LEAST COMMENT ON IT
who ever told you that you can spit needs a straight up slap/
i'd tell you to your face, son you cant rap/
it would be a serious understatment if i was to say your that wack/
your on some next level of lame, your own league of s*it/
do us all a favour kill yourself and quit/
after readin your stuff even im wondering if white boys can spit/
and i'm whiter than you, what the f*cks up with that?/
let me say it again incase you missed it "son you cant rap"/
we need some heavy spitters to jump into the rap game/
so the fact that your representing me is a damn right shame/
even your own family laugh when they hear your name/
your rhymes make vanilla ice look over the top and hardcore/
so why the f*ck you tryin to get at me like your names Tupac Amiru Shakur/
i'd love to lock you and in a room with fatal and a hack saw/
but let me get back to the point, your rap skills are poor/
let me ask you a question, how did you end up like this?/
to spit this crap must'a taken months if not years of practice/
what does it feel like when I come along and smash this s*it/
yo, bring your mums so i can smack this b*tch/
look at you week self tryin to act hard and drastic/
man you rap like a schitsophrenic spastic/
f*ck using rubber your dad should'a used plastic/
oh by the way doc straight up murdered yo ass
yo proff was dat against me?
yo i'm coryc
the killer cc,
i'm so stealthy,
you won't c me,
when i shoot this atomic bomb,
like i'm on ur mom,
get rdy bandit,
i'm about to bust.
yo holymagic your whack dudette, i saw your shitty lyrics posted up like weeks ago f0ol..
stand up to me and youll get annihilated
you nursery rhymes will get obliterated
yo i'm cory c
the killer cc
i'm so stealthy
you won't c me man
since that first rap ya'll know who i am
see I'd lightin this **** up like true gangstas
and i'm for real son, I aint no bitch ass prankstas
when I hit this **** big we knew what we had to do
im talkin, spittin insane **** that could addict you
i guess these niggas aren't understanding
the level at which we are demanding
man, yo ass isn't competition
four of my lines and you're in submission
see my lyrics are my ammunition
and c-weim slaughters the opposition
see im cocky cause i flow so good
and im bold cause i say **** the hood
i dont need em, im fine on my own
and im ready to face any crew all alone
why bring backup, im better than an entire gang
just sit yo ass down and let me do my thang
after me, my opponents careers are disasters
they claimed ive peaked, but i keep gettin faster
keep on asking whos gonna stop the jew
but sorry man, it aint gonna be any of you
my lyrics are so hot theyre translated for every nation
see im craved by the youth of every population
now ya'll scheming and plotting to try and end my spree
but ill clap back so hard they'll want me for the first degree
scared ?
haha
dude dun even try me thats nothing
DAMN GETS WORST BY THE MINUTE haha whack..aight minispotsman
i dont even hav to write a new rap ill use one of ma classic ones and i still slaughter you...ill use a simple rap fo starters
your soul is mine
damn cant u read the sign, b1tches like u i slap
annihilate you wit a simple rap, caught u handicapped
that neck on u i'll snap, im a champion back to back
wit a platinum track and a golden plaque
i swiftly rhyme like a shark attack
hidin behind ur b1tchy crew, coz u know ur sh1tty
i'll smack u silly wit ma willy, u betta withdraw
u aint got no flaw and i rap like fatal fury
sh1t i win, FLAWLESS VICTORY
peace im outtie
hey ne 1 online n wana battle
