quick man good to see you back alive 'N' tripping lol good **** as always man...maybe we shoul dbattle some time and risky lmao ya'll should learn from my **** i bring everythng into it...wordplay punches meta's multies etc: but never personals!!!
so i will continue to spit..and d'a think my raps are good risky ?? respect mang im out
Choose-ya-crime, Reuse-ya-lines?, I 'get at ya-****' but when it comes to a-diss, ya cant get 'through-to-mine'//
^^^^^ no offense proff but your **** sounds the same over and over again but its all good! ^^^^^
you wanna go another round another 2 maybe 3 lol or stop here i can keep going if ya really want!!
aight props man on your rap tho
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^^ my new name if it comes out fucked its meant to say....
||______||Mr.Ripper||______||
yea trikstr i know i havent taken a break my minds clogged
and imsdal your right i am the cockiest i was just being nice so fuk you
kickycan wrote:and f*ck you, I'm through, can't screw, cuz my crew
leaves you to do, and me to be blue
balls on a half stick, you better eat dick
cuz I'm the bad click click click
shave you p*ssy when I say die
cuz fruity boyz dont' cry
Whore, whore, more....
yo, kicky-can -- u think u da man?
you ain't all dat (but your rhymes r phat)
that Cat hitchoo witta low blow -- wazzup witt datt bro?
they elected you prez (at least datts whutt datt thread sez)
but when Region's in da house u be grabbin' your mouse...
oh by the way trikstr i was just showing imsdal my multies thats all it was one of my weaker ones to prove a point but mine and your battles is still going but when were done lets battle doc an quikkid
Lol yeah of course... "i was just proving a point"... haha..
Keep dreaming man.
Trikster, damn you a cocky dude.. but you seriously got some nice punches!
"I got more 'hoe's than a stuttering santa clause" <-- now thats orignial and creative...
Others on this forum please watch trik and learn.. Prof, you keepin up an image saying "fuk you" to me? hehe. nice man.. grown up.
To Prof:
you made a mistake calling me fake saying i bite
i take you and throw you in a lake at night
That's a nice punch.. ehm no..
my words cause the earth to quake every rhyme i write
every time thats right, your shits pam anderson tight
Here's a multie, but the content sucks..
but im getting off topic , my tops sick
i have more to spit than water in the tropics
ripping through your optic
NaAAAH!
im told im to basic, i guess i have to face it
fuk it say that and you get your face hit
by my first place spit
multies, although the content and punch suck.
number one
i do this for fun not for the guns
trikstr like diarhea your **** runs
my lyrics burn hotter than the sun
i love to do this, to diss is bliss ,
lyrically i slash your wrists,
smash you with my fists
ooooo, I bet Trik is real scared. Be more creative with punches.
my flow moves like the feet of cassius
makein you spontaneous combust turned into ashes
yo i checked his profile
behind that broken tooth smile
was a pedifile you and your daycare style
Uhm
cant compare to my matureity
lyrical purity
my lyrics that kill
lyrics that leave you sick and ill
my blades a sickle
i attack the whole globe
wearing my black robe
Not a single punch here, just you bragging about yourself.. and bragging about yourself in battles suck. Focus on punching!
ive been holding my battle axe i write battle tracks
spitting at my max heavy impact with facts
multies, and the content was okay.. nice man.
to quick for you to react watch how you act
my punches hit exact crack to your skull your brain no longer intact
Okay
comeback when you have skill
when you have something ill still you'll be killed
i do verbal backflips and windmills
Okay
every rhymes rips through your chest
like hollow tips to your flesh
im gonna ask the opinion of the rest
who do you thinks the best
Yet another "Okay"..
i drink ink then spit
hahaha, wHAT? lame.
leave you sinking into a bottomless pit
every script has the potential to be a hit
Okay..
but not if your illiterite
who's got the illest ****
and trikstr im not talking about your clit
No no no no no no !
i use my wit its infinite
explicit and intricet
well.. okay.
but as ive said before
battleing me ends in gore
the deaths are adding up more and more
like diseases in a whore
but this is not the end of the story
it always ends gorey
for the proff that just another victory
Weak ending.. though this battle was better than the last one.
Not too shabby though.
some advice imsdal spit back 2 my rap instead of breakin down someone elses raps cuz no one gives a damn what u think of their ryhmes
yo take your time and read this
i sincerely recommend reading this
the middle east is soon to be deceased a new world powers rising like yeast this demonic beast needs to eat global warming is increaseing the heat one thing can change things an mc's minds forever changeing we need to help one another lets help each other were all brothers we all come from the same mother earth since birth you could see it in our eyes we can see through the lies we reconize what will be this planets demise every man with there hand in it standing in **** waist high in it the only way you'll die is if you quit trying doc examines the results of rock its in how you talk and how you walk on the block to get a piece sucking cock quikkid is as sedistic as me an lets not forget the mc's risky and trikstr
as ppl are getting sicker from drugs and liqour we have the truth who speaks the word every one youve ever heard has a purpose are we as humans worthless descrimination hate a criminal nation what worth this
evil deeds like envy an greed causeing virgins to bleed i know what we need to suceed a new breed truth n doc the way trikstr talks risky preaching with the word of pac we unlock pandora's box we open up the mind for those to blind to see clearly as lyrically as an mc quickkid an me were once emeny's but through the holy trininty we found a bond like all of us our words will live on after were gone through dusk and dawn
when the sun spontaneous combust there's someone we have to trust when our bodies turn into dust we will go to a better place we will become part of time an space chillin with all my homies in grace
i suggest you rate it
get up for round two when was i down/it aint my fault this kids mom is the whore of the town/
"your mama" punches are the most played out sh!t ever..
i'll bag your body up and throw it in the woods/people don't know i exist funny i aint heard ur name in the hood/but i guess that's cuz they only mention people that are good/
They haven't heard my name in the hood? I've never been there either so I don't care..
when it comes to rap i got a whole crew behind me/that will wet up your block like a tsunami/
You need a crew to take me down? Punch backfired man..
when it comes to rappin you aint gonna do nothin but fall boy/are you on a team cuz someone told me you a ball boy/
first line was WACK, but the "ball boy" line was kinda cool.. props.
just admit it it's alright we all know you knocked a fella/this dude had to "Dash" cuz we found out he roc a fella/
PLAYED!
when it comes to my crew i got killaz on the pay roll/i'm about to replace that turban you got wit a halo/
You seriously got killaz on your payroll? Or you just lying? I'm betting the second one.. Turban? Dude that was a WACK attempt at a personal punch
try me and have your mommy pick you up in the lobby/and she'll be feedin you jello like you bill cosby/
Okay
that dot on your dad's head don't mean he from india/it means you should be thankful the bullets arent goin into ya/
Okay, decent one.. a multie too.
you say you a man but i saw you wearin phrada/i throw em you catch em it's like you jorge posada/when it comes to skill this kid got nada/
sh!ttY
this aint disney land theres no minnie or mickey/his parents beat his ass and he claims he has hickeys/
you just found a word that rhymed with mickey eh? Wack punch..
when it comes to guys you know he aint picky/don't shake hands wit this dude cuz his fingers always sticky/
1st line sucked, 2nd line was okay.
i'll light your block up like my crew all holdin a torch/if you had a house i'd tell you i'm gonna be at your porch/
no lame lame lame..
but i seen your "house" a box on the road/i made sure this kid is Ko'd and that his mom is hoed/
Lmao, that one sucked and I think you know it..
Well that was half the rap.. the rest ain't worth mentioning..
btw quikkid.. i bet only trik/eryk (and possibly the proff) would understand my metaphors and wordplays in here.. the rest of you are too basic..
Proff:
That was nice! nice use of words, nice flow, nice rhyming..
Please use some commas and punctuations though
hehe..
The content was also decent
yo imsdal write a rap so me doc trikstr and quikkid can rate you
Well, at the moment i'm too busy. But sure, i'll drop a verse some time.. allthough i've got nothing to prove..
(Real Talk)
Imsdal its like this, I was signed, key word was I told you when the label started to snitch I quit, my lawyer that cost me a quick 20 got me out before the industry did some real damage, end of story. As for having a beretta. . . got two thats all that needs to be said, cuz i know some one on this forum wants to snitch. Not pointing any fingers, and from the great words of brotha Lynch "oh. . . oh if your trip'n then it must be you i'm talking about. . . but if it ain't you, then don't trip."
I'm just here to see what other people are like, find out what other people out there think what rap'n is to them. 1
Quote:ImsdaL said:
I murder the days of the week, and dissin' U wasn't in my agenda
but since U said my name, I have to do more than just offend ya
WOOOW a multie!!! agenda-offend ya!! first sign of complexity is here! .. nice man.
LMAO!! ahaha.. yea... amazinggg!!
Quote:
Here's an example of a creative punch with MULTIEs..
heading-for-dis'aster
spreading-for-this-master..
get it?
Df?? ey man.. u barely eva spit and u givin dem advice?? ahh...
Just to spit,
My last rights,
these fake rappers should never touch the mic,
let alone,
holding his chrome,
ploting murder,
can never value life,
I spit real talk on some ocassions,
fuk it, 85% of my raps, deal with real lifes realizations,
rap today is joke,
talking about the **** they put on the radio,
cats shouldn't provoke, what they don't know,
especialy, what the industry tells them to flow about in the studio,
the rap game isn't just peaches & cream,
its not just blow'n O's being the sickest choke'n on weed,
believe me, when I tell those,
who teaches me. . .
I've mastered your style, but other rappers copy your flow within 3 weeks,
I've had kids rip me, sharp as talons,
I've told kids theres no point in grabbing the mic without talent,
they never had a chance because there was no balance,
between a thrown match, should I say more cuz right now i'm style'n. 1
Imsdal....i like the way you break that **** down....what you think of this....
im fixated on the simplicity of your rap imitation in a limitless world of words yours sound purged submerged in regurgitation
frusterating? yes, when i could **** better than you can spit it, next time come equiped with wet naps to wipe my ass and the mic before you kick it
go ahead and lick it clean between the lines i see your all outta raps like your guns outta caps like your bitch was all outta condoms and you cant figure out why your son isnt black
take it then pass it back to me ill show you talent before i show you sodomy beg me please to see how well i flow im rick james bitch, didnt you know?.....
yo shotty
rap to me is everything body mind and soul
its about life in all its perspectives
its about the streets the goverment ,philosophy, prophecy, aliens are we alone about the destruction of mother earth how our minds work
the beauty that can be created with words the mental pictures we create everyday its about hip-hop all aspects of it breakdance,mc'ing, turntableists, graffiti,beatboxing the whole culture so if you wanna know what i think it is i think rap for me is life
"Words of wisdom"- if the mind were simple enough to understand, we'd be to simple to understand it.(feal me)
I believe your right, but i was stating a fact, at one point in time the rap culture consumed me whole, all that matters and all that you needed was money power and respect. Now thats changed. Life now revolves around 3 words Choice, Perspective, and Control. other then that "I Feal you" read your rhyme, for the most part 94% made sense.
I don't judge people on how good there puch lines are, because some people just don't know whats funny or don't quite get it Ex: Perspective.
My level of rap, my style. . . based on Choice. people hate it because they are jelous and wish they were able to flow like me.
like me: Ability to use your words to influence your listener, Ex: Control
1 more thing i never said you theProff didn't rap about real stuff, so im going to type this again.
Brotha lynch: "oh. . . oh if your trip'n then it must be you i'm talking about. . . but if it ain't you, then don't trip.
