Its SpeJail-K and got something for Mc Tolmie you wanna talk about bee's and b*tches named lee cant you see your nothing more then a wannabe that dreams about dudes on mtv Oh wait you cant even afford a t.v thats why you live under shopping kart in front of wallmart yeah Your spits real smart I heard farts that sounded more intelligent then your **** if I ever see you your gonna get your lip split like your moms clit right in two and all Hear from you is boo woo woo Who the f*ck are you I told you am SpeJail-K I'll be out back smoking a J all day without you P*ssy
u say im poor and u gonna giv me a split lip
ur the 1 who cant even afford a gun clip
i know my lyrics were **** and they werent like a bee
but my fist is , i beat u up till u beg at my knee
ur gay , if ur not rappin bout us ur rappin bout cum
u make urself sound dum
if u found me i'd pull out a gun
i think i'll finish coz my rappin is done
go ahead challenge me coz my next 1 will beat all yall ass
Beat ass on the internet? You're great
to comptonbound3
to comptonbound3
u say im **** lmfao
Takes one to know one,
Avoiding tha fact
that you was ridin dr eryks dick a little more than his sack
I aint cuttin no slack. You questionin if im a Shogun?
Your simply Sho'Nuff, IM THA LAST DRAGON... back off tha scrodum
Like Bruce Leroy I run through you weak B-boys
Throwin sonic booms like streetfighter 2 wit elite street toys
U talkin bout decoys while all u do is speak noise Be poised
cuz tha lyrocks I drop meld minds like leonard Nemoy!!
I'm going to start rating these things. The ratings will probably get tougher as I go but here's a start....
that one gets a 4.
No big lines in it that were great.
Too much scrotum talk.
is 4 gd
wat it rated out of
ha ha. this is hillarious!!!
What would rate this last post carbonsystem?
I must say im deeply inspired.
gbvhjcvnm? Well who'd have thought it.
ill pass the mic right//
i never asked-to-fight-life, but its been throwin punches//
beatin me is hard to do, like havin rolls and crunches//
i put holes-in-lungs-kid//
when im holdin-thug-****//
put a bullet in ya dome where only-slugs-fit//
im not feelin it and bitches hating so fuc*k this//
CHECK IT:
speak-eager, if ya thinkin ya 'HOT' I 'defeat-fevers' like anti-biotics, ya act hard but ya 'pussy inside' like ya thinkin that wearin 'pantie's-erotic'
look dicks, ya 'can't move me' cuz my 'bars-be-brolic', nigga u could take a third of mah brain n still u aint scarrin-mah-knowledge
ya betta be payin-that-homage, before I start 'cuttin-heads' like a 'barber-bro', n make ya body do 'windmills' like 'Vince-Carter-thou'
i aint gunna lie, cuz we 'son-in' bitches like a 'father-yo', i got guns next to mah bladder-homes that imma aim n splatter-domes
THATS TO THE LIKES OF UNKOWN SOLJA BUM BANDIT ALL THEM GAY BOI'S
PEACE ERYK, PROFF, LYTHIC ALL YA'LL NORMAL PEEPS!
MC TOLMIE RULES Da streets
MC TOLMIE wrote:is 4 gd
wat it rated out of
Oh sorry, I forgot to say, these are rated out of 10.
Anybody up for a rap to be rated?
yo rate this from one to ten if you know the rateing key do that to
just a lil taste of the proff
i cant keep my ears clear
when all i hear
is these mere neanderthalls
who act like they got balls
battleing me will be there fall
from air
into a bottomless pit of nowhere
i dont give a fuc
your just a smuck
is it my fault you suck
like a flame an a firetruck your out of luck
i stack track on top of track
when i attack
leaven you smoking like crack
spit a comeback you'll get hit
like an exquisite clit
which can fit an elaphant in it
in an instant
i create more waste than a nuclear plant
out of lyrical infants
this is just a taste of my skill
step face to face your killed
youve never seen **** so ill
i spit till bodies drop like the two towers
causeing cowards to cower
every hour
ive blossomed like a flower
a black rose
death from head to toes
from my head i bred these flows
which bring you to your knees with savage blows
i eat mc's like cherrio's
i pump like dj's stereo's
im one of a kind
everlasting in time
fast to blast a rhyme
like a nine
every line rips through your spine
and slowly deteriates your intestines
im almost done
roastin another one two or three
turn ghosts to mc's
and vice versa
like bloodcells i burst ya
i have a thirst ta end this
but i cant my thoughts are endless
so much racket like tennis
im the rap mennis
but i'll stop well im ahead
your dead like arctic agriculture
being circled by vultures
im a lyrical cure
my shits like h2o pure
Damn Good.
8.5 out of 10
Somebody gunna step up and get a better rating?
Me and bro cyrus a bet chew wanna hire us
Everyone addmires us
because they cant fire us from killing fags
putting them in bodybags
dont come hear faggot you listen to slipknot and eat crop and love cops
I got the chops on my block hurry bitch load your glock
before a punch you in the cock and beat you like hard rock
I'd f*ck your mom wearing a dirty sock
somebody unlock my cuffs I wanna kill all the bluffs and eat all the pussy cream puff and chew it like snuff dont come hear acting tough
am not nice roll the dice if you lose am giving your neck a procise slice
down the throat and if your squawk like a hawk
I'll stab you with my mowhak Bitch
i'll scare you like a nightmare
cuz you soft like a carebear
I'll put **** in your underware
nobody care's nobody was there
when I gave your neck a slit and ate your moms clit
that same night and left you all a bloody sight
your mom hanging from the cieling light
now am higher then a kite and out of sight
sorry to affend you like a poor jew
and just spit you out like mountain dew and **** in yo shoes dont come back unless you got brew Pussy
damn your ****'s hawt prof gotta be said but CHECK IT<>
RATE THIS SHI*T ALL YA'LL THAT CANT VOTE PROPERLY!
to battle me is unfair, I jack more "kings" than solitare/
So please beware,im harder then Micheal Jacksons "DcK" in a day care/
Yall punches dropped,you get no props/
Yall got less skill then a quadrapalegic has hops/
I could give yall a beatdown until u could barely stand/
I could say i fu*cked ya girl, but that would mean I had sex wit ya right hand/
I know yall fearin me, defeating me? that's an unlikely task/
Especially since yall be wearin a custom nut sack as a face mask/
All yall punches are barely felt,
my breath blows they appruptley melt/
Im seein yall verses "structure", and for the ending result/
it split apart like dale earnhearts seatbelt/
CHECK:
my arsenal keep diggin, while in the one burying your loathin funeral
your not number 1, so dont confuse yourself with roman numerals(I)/
its over kids, i got the skill to even leave the best bleeding/
last time they 'came hard', they was peepin babies breast feeding/
i rest treating, yall not that big, but you might carry large/
but i'll stop your rights from text, like cancelled library cards/
i'll provide plenty of ammo and slay without sorrow
and yes, ya style's ahead of its time
since garbage day is tomorrow/
yo, yall been KO'ed by everyone, there so gay you way past-wack/
you suck more ass, than a vaccuum hose shoved up an ass-crack!/
damn thats only a lil taster...pretty much aimed at FBI or w/e his name is soldier and bum bandit
yo trikstr i love those punches bro i give you what i got 8.5 yo trikstr if you keep dropping stuff like that i'll give you an invitation to callaborate an album with me doc an lythic
is that all you got
battle me you get shot
the spotlights to hot
for you to handle
burning like a rocket fuel candle
you think your messed im fucked my brain
fluid was drained
by god and reused as rain
now who's insane
im the mind of david blaine
and suddam Hussein
i take my time
to break down lines
nouns sound profound drown your vital signs
your vitals mine
kiss my nine
i give sight to the blind
you'll see the white light well your diein
your common im exquisite
like the way deaths visits
throwing you down hells bottomless pit
you spit ****
quit well you still can
well you can still stand
with barehands i plan to cut off your circulation
use your flesh for masturbation
your barely an enemy
you think your gonna be the end of me
he he sorry thats funny like dave chappelle
i was a beast made in hell
from deceased that fell
so i have a part of your heart
the vendicticeness
that grew in your chest
is my primal instinct
i dont think i just leave all extinct
my lyrics leave you cut
wider then the opening of a gangbang slut
so close your mouth and leave it shut
thats it no if ands or buts
give this a rateing and let me know your favorite part
