Neverending Rap Battle

Whether it was harder to write or not I enjoyed reading his more and that's how I based if it was a better track or not

You actually never posted your verse and I hold no grudge, you're making assumptions.

I just don't like you.

http://www.reverbnation.com/hawnzdynastyproductions/song/17520419-triumph-feat-slip-sentinal-whatevski?1336410755

Guess which verse is me ?

nah i wasnt complaining i was just sayin yo i got a new peice i think you might like its not like that good or anything ive just been practicing different things
i call it word playground:
Im havin fun with pity
you couldnt run a city
if you jog'd in the bostin race
but you might have a blast,mate
workout in gardens made me
so im pushing up daisy's
man you bite worse than a zombie
sama cant drop bombs like me
ill blow up the freakin world
when i exhale on it, girl
you a bitch to me, lassie
rock out schools so im, classy
hit you wit a sledge, i guess
sticks and stones a can break yah bones
when i rock the microphone
ill crush it with a bloder
lay in fridge gettin colder
yo did it occur to you
cause you pee at uranils
dont make you a stand up guy
birdie put your hands up fly
once i had sex on a plane
dat makes me a **** up mane (man)
cant stand how i sit to pee
jam! cuz i buzz like a bee

chorus:
like what you heard stay around
go ride the marry go round
of this scarry word playground X2

these cuts and bruises is the scars of honesty
i took your money bitch,no wonder why your in poverty
your a follower,just another groupie
when your done acting like harry potter you can clean the **** off of snoopy
you say im minor but your in the corner drinking alcohol bottles
SPITTIN MISSLES?Bitch ill have you working in mcdonalds
since im so useless ill punch your face in and just leave you toothless
im ruthless when i come,so you better watch out when i do ****
screaming holt,so you can feel a jolt of the past
samys back ************ and hes going HULK on your ass
......

it's a diss towards a bitch
rate it :


my dick, you keep looking you like you wanna touch it, but you're too shy to do so cause we're in public
if we were in private, i'd aim for your pussy and dive in it
ride it like i'm driving it, long time limit.
See i'm blastin you, make it the first battle, and the last to you
i'm like a class to you, do you a favor and educate that ignorant ass for you
but for that part where i ride you,
i'll reconsider it,
cause i know every transmitted disease got passed to you
so you can screw yourself with a plastic tube, and play alone with your massive boobs, all i can do is pass the lube, and watch you get high, just like an addict do
see i'm a addict too, addicted to using adjectives, verbes and adverbs to embarass you,
i will impair your ugly face, leave it smashed,
the way you act like a tough ass, make me wonder where you hidin that moustach ?
Look, you better catch this next joke, you know
cause your nose make me look at you like damn: ain't dat pinochio ?
I define whatever divine stands for, you ain't got a chance when my hands take a stance for war
i walk on water like Jesus
you just stand aboard, and watch
cause approaching me is something you just can't afford
see, I am the lord
grab the pen like i grab the sword
i got you comfy and horny, you're foaming at the mouth just like a hungry labrador
cause i'm past the great, give you the same feeling after you masturbate
so if that's the case, get your clothes off, **** that : go soft
i like things in a faster rate,
I won't give you the dick so i don't have to wait
one line from me is heavy enough to make your whole verse look like it's half-the weight
i'm not a bastard but i say things a bastard say
and the last thing i have to state
is my flow got your eyes poked from the things that i wrote
my style lit a fire in my throat
that pulled the smoke in my vocals cords whenever i spoke
i stab you till you half-dead you and your ******* cat pet, then take you clothes off and tie your hands to a skateboard, take you up hill and push you straight forward, then take you up again, but this time push you way further,
someboby call her parents
cause this chick just got murdered
your momma,

Haha....go to pg118and see it again...ima let the dark nova or whitey judge
and you said u dont like me...if i had to judge i would judge justly without considerin their name or relation wit me...even if they were the people i hate most such as bambs or illustrait...u was not an option becuz
kid like u or samy got no such high caliber....whitey was best option cuz he is a good rapper...atleast better than bambs n illustrat

Plus if i tell u ma real name n let u know who really i am u would start to hate me twice more....n ima tell u who i am...when time comes

If I were to judge, it would still be justly. And if you said who you really are? Tell me

M the guy who was considered the worse rapper on this form

M smuuks

Did you just say "go to page 118"? I don't see you there at all.

And who are you to assume bambs and I are not good rappers, when clearly we're just as good as whitey? Making a mountain out a molehill is one thing, but right now Everest hasn't got **** compared to your judgements.

For a guy who can't even spell words right in the first place, you are honestly one to talk. Seriously, you're reaching right now.

WHO AM I ?
Mic Dugas aka Brappppppppppp muthafuckas
WHERE IM FROM ?
Earth,North America ,Canada ,Alberta,Calgary South East Quadrant
WHAT I REPRESENT
Hip Hop , My City , The Truth , getting raw n gritty , new shoes and packed bong ,bottoms up from the bottom up ,everyone that just got a nut

who ever thought a this , is a sodomist
alotta **** , i wanna get off my dick
u asses wondering who the bottom is ?
couldnt remain anonamys
god theyd keep thinkin he ominous

Calgary where back alleys get shut down
the streets are heat , running red with flames
melt the sneaks off the feet of a beat cop
walking the beat
Pay respect round here you cant afford cheap talk ,
get knocked in the teeth
why dont you bitches go try rocking a leash
we dont talk to police
we yell 5-0 , gone west like fivel put a five hole through ya chest
sick as **** I could puke the rest, spliff the dutch , buddha , zest
got drugs n guns in school , kids shoot both
schweet see we dont eat the pills filled with sucrose or glucose
kudos , we take two dose of pluto's the shits not disney
pressing discs the size a frizbees ,inner city gritty ,
midi cables attached to the navel
lego my eggo pussies already got a twat full a taco
aint puttin nuttin, in the crusty bagel , mainstream calls her A-hole
K O'd , Fucked in her in a K Hole , muthafuckas better lay low
an stay low, less you have my peso's
Pay respect to my essays
from bizzle for sizzle I can get crypto that cripples
from middle ta triple , that cause little mind ripples
from pizzle the sick flow that'll riddle yo pixels
we sickos n sickles ,killin it yo,watch blood trickle

Haha i meant pg 1118 go n open it

Uve been rappin here for years still u r even bit more basic than basic
here is 13years old kid who can beat u easily and he has been rappin just for 8 months....m talkin bout glitch

If i rate u bambs prof glitch whitey dfc dark nova...it would b like this

1.prof,
2.whitey
3.dfc(u can doubt on him cuz he is not consistent in postin raps but the few he posted are good)
4.glitch
5.illustraight:
6.bambs(he doesnt even deserves this spot)

N i judged it honestly....
Prof is almost perfect so hes at 1
Whitey is good in syllables, good in punchlines n his rap atleast have some meanin
3.dfc same as whitey....he got nice flow
4.glitch.the way he write bars is impressive...multies are strong
5.u...uve got the talent but u dnt know how to use it.
6.bambs....fucck him

https://soundcloud.com/milkboxkids/samplesoul

I'm sorry, but I actually don't give a ****. And just cause I've been here for eight months doesn't mean I've been rapping for eight months. yup

You're good though. I'm just being harsh. But I approve of you. You're good in my book

Erm, excuse me miss?!

Even me and Glitch had a one-off battle at one point, and (no offence to Glitch, props to him) he even thought my verse was nice. Did you even take a look?

Go a few pages AFTER 1112 and take a look at Alphabet Avatar, BOTH parts.
Go back to when I first started on this thread (and how I've dramatically improved since then).
Go back to my battles with whitey, bambino, Prof, and others.
Go back to my battles with YOU.
In fact take a look at ALL my verses, THEN tell me whether I'm basic.

To say I'm basic just proves how much a critic you are. HA. "Basic", indeed.

To quote Gen from Street Fighter, YOU ARE A BIG FOOL.

I said u r talented but u dnt know how to use your talnent.....se it once again ....thats what i wrote
U r talented imean i saw ur that rap when u posted it in which every word is startin from spacific letter..... thats the talent n thats somethin i can never do

I remember u urself said that uve been rappin for just 7 or 8 months....???

everytime u n me battled u won....i accept that fact....m not good at disain
but m not smuuks anymore...i decided to take every step wisely...n agaist me u r up next....we ll ssee who wins... on 15 i have my last cie paper after that i ll b ready to post rap and to challange u.

You do realise you've just painted yourself into a corner.

Therefore, I accept your challenge ..... I need a bit of mind exercise anyway.

WHO AM I?
Ills aka Illustraight aka Autistik aka The Child Prodigy

WHERE I'M FROM:
Earth, The British Isles, England, West London, Berkshire, Slough

WHAT I REPRESENT:
Truth, integration, respect, independence, freedom of speech not to be abused, art, classic hip-hop. To the chicks who don't relate, catch a buck 50 to the face!

[Verse]
Riddle me this, riddle me that
What other cat you know has rhymes this phat
like a pair of Apple Bottoms that the girlfriends wear
right down to the ankles without any tears?
I speak my mind like activists do
A lot of people don't agree with me, they brag like parrots do
Give them crackers to chew
They're all Polly, I've seen them flap at the zoo
I tried to talk to one once, but he just yapped while he sat on his tube
The streets are like Candy Land; cats pushing fancy vans
with glamorous tans kinda like Spanish slags
It makes me mad as a March hare
I've even seen them gleaming on the shop square
Topless monsters with flopped hair
Subconscious mobsters with false gear
And that kinda puts Ills out of place
like Daffy Duck in a Disney Silly Symphony with baby faces
While the orchestra of life is playing
I find myself at the back playing the violin and swaying
Beethoven has got nothing on a brother with hard vibes
Eaten like the Apple, "New York Times"
I "Observe" midweekly, read the 'Papers' every 'Sunday' I get
Sit in front of "The Sun" and I'm blessed
"Herald" a new chapter, 'Trade' a few verses like 'Autos'
Stay "Independent", get on "The Express"
Look in "The Mirror" "Daily", see a different sun
shine like a "Morning Star", thank the "Guardian" because He made this day a brilliant one