Neverending Rap Battle

gliiitch is ravenwolf you? again?

No. My friend. I'm done with the doppelgangers

haha ight

The only reason I switched to Gliitch and ditched Wrathe was because I forgot the password to both this site and my email

Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh i see

https://soundcloud.com/bambi-17/the-horror-ft-nova

https://soundcloud.com/ills-2/illology
https://soundcloud.com/ills-2/mind-wanders

Everything in brackets is sound effects and or adlibs

Triumph***



(sound of a triumph motorcycle revving)
Triumph i think i got a shotty , 9 pumps
( sound of a shot gun caulking)
9 months in hip hops devine ****
(think u have a shot )(POP) (gunshot)
Silence your king is speaking SILENCE ( reverb,echoed)
(prison door locking sound)
tried to lock me in jail so i couldnt tell my tale
(sounds of waves , an fire from pirate enemy ships)
but i prevailed , sailed the seven seas ,wrote yale in brail
did drugs like the seventys ,sold bails,for bail
(sounds of being released)
robin hood ,robbin hoods , of there problems , fer good
Pay Respect ,Pay attention ,Patience Pay ya debts
(cut from brave heart )
william wallace with a billion dollars an a brave heart
strong as hawnz , n ghengis khan gene pool
(cut from bill an ted )(sound of metal weapons clashing)
no matter how it get shorty lifes a movie Be cool
(cut from get shorty and be cool )
(sound of a lighter an taking a puff )
lifes like a dubie , ignite, lifes light, a groovy uzi
take your shot , (shot of a automatic weapon)
shooting prisms of wisdom through your vision see isnt
the loser who writes history , its ma girl victory
shes an artists (sound of a paint brush)
do u get the big picture (snap of a camera )
or did u pay for a xerox ( sound of a xerox machine )
ambrosia elixer (sound of liquid drippin or funneling)
(the sound of a Phoenix cawing , n breatheing flames )
god it tastes like a flocking phoniex,droppin genius,
after eating hawkins penis,coughin jesus (a bum coughing)
cross thoughts with beliefs
add in faith , take that leap

Triumph***

Verse2

(How could man rejoice in victory and delight in the slaughter of men?
Lao Tzu)

(Invincibility lies in the defence; the possibility of victory in the attack.
Sun Tzu)


for the steven kings that believed in things , whatever the evening brings
doctor zuess,nothin stoppin U,talk the truth
JK Rowling on social security cheques n a daughter ,wrote harry potter, look where that got her
(sound of a engine trying to start, and then sparking an starting , driving down the street)
,henry ford couldnt afford his first auto biz, but had the drive , his engines revvin inside
(sound of velcros) ( a mic jordan slam dunk sample as the crowd cheers)
,einstein in velcros tieing theories of space time,Mic Jordan Mic Recording make rhymes
( sound of road flares lighting ) ( sound of taking a deep breath)
with a Flare for it,so high in the sky hope they have enough air for it
( change rattling in hand or pocket )
,never forfit,6th sense cant afford it,Jesus was aborted,
whether or not you can conceive it , if you believe it , you can achieve it, thats the secret

Sweet

Some of them are gunnin em like I don't know where I'm flyin
"Do, don't try" don't ask why but I don't even feel like tryin
I leave without an answer when I don't feel like replyin
And I'm cryin out "why" and I'm sighing while whinin!
Like I say naw, buzzsaw, cuttin on a nonagon
Got ya, knocked up, huffin like I'm rompin ya
Takin guns in ones, runnin em, then drive-by like a stop-and-shop
I flung the puns, but it wasn't enough, I said bye-bye as I was caught by cops
I taught the lot how to rock a lot
And cock a shot, at the coffee shop
With a rap so taut
Bustin caps in ya
Like a cap gun
Wax on wax off
Time to rap it up, and smash it up
I'm laughin off, the capita
Weezing when the back door is fallin in
cheesy, but I'm lactose intolerant
Can't tolerate how you navigate
At the back gate, gettin stabbed away
Snap awake! Rap away!
Slap or pray, either way!
Cause it's back to "hey"
From black to grey
Still just as bad I'd say
Don't lacerate...
At a faster rate!
I'm droppin off and coughin up
The coffin's stuffed with body gunk
Like I popped the trunk, there's another one

dope to prof and gliiitch

heres a track im working on:

Yo i was baptised in verbal lyrics
so i can write rhymes in herbal spirit
but you bite lines where eva you hear it

you like to chew um up and spit em back
but corporettes blew em up n lit their track
i am bustin trying ta get fair cash

i can hardly afford a damn biscuit
i aint got the equipment for this ****
all you do is respit poor piss spit

i can not deal with these fake lyracists
write in their sleep and wake delirious
i am serious are you hearing thus

i am the type to **** you in your ears
give yah hearing aids,while your sippin beers
i leave all these fake rappers drippen tears


yeah thats just alittle some thing im working on

Sweet rhymes and I don't see any bullshit filler. But the first half has a choppy flow. Still, that's pretty sweet

thanks and what do you mean by choppy flow?

Challenge to everyone in this forum...post a rap bettter than this...

verse1-multies27
Dreamin high, wiping eyes,removin sweat from my forehead
Pain died while writin my abituary inside my stonehead

Worlds trynna dig my grave not knowin i was borned dead
My wishes killed me,bitchhes pissme

,wen i die nobody would missme cuz m broke n Torn wreck,
fags labelled myevery beat whack,cryin all the time caused my eye 's H2O shed

just to forget the past i smoke weedcrack n hennessy
m trynna bring death closer to me, and u cant feel

the pain which i feel when i see my older pictures,i aint (lyin)
i too abuse dimes, especially when i see my sisters cryin

the life is mortal, every rich guys got on his face a big chortle
but i 've been starvin for decade,my hunger is immortal

m quitin to spit the raps as volunteer and m quittin to fall and bear my collapse
everynight i halt and tear with the bottle of rimy martin here on the streets

m sick of feelin grief, i dont even get peace in sleep,i swear to god i weep in dreams
plus world love to see me screamin, grab my neck and they say bleed bittch bleed

I loved it

yeah ill execept your challenge
give me a bit

It was hard to read with smooth flow

Ok...but i dont see anyone here who can judge justly....acordin to me there are just 2 honest people on this site 1 is dfc n 2 is u but since u r competing ...i dont see any one else who can honestly judge...wrathe or glitch is also an option but he got his grudge against me cuz he couldnt beat me the last time i challenged him...