Neverending Rap Battle

theres always goin be someone better then another.

always goin be someone that thinks there better

time has actually something to do with it
unless you mean time verse wise.. not time rapping wise
putting time in a verse is good
being in the rap game for 10 years doesnt mean ****
its fun
but it gets annoying when people have to deal with everyone
bitching about whose better

all i can say

Prof is considered to be the best on this site
but being the best
gets you hated the most


dumb mother fuckin bars

That's true but every indavidual has their own opinion
So if you think proff is better then that's your opinion, me or no one else can change that

But if another person says it for another rapper let it be

**** it

but anyways was good to express some bars after ages.

how is this

Blindly foolish advocates
Never comprehend that my Rhyming usage accurate
Surviving on faith, and ramen noodle packages
Move hazardous, no excuse you've been tagged in this
Still packing heat 9's under mattresses
Corrupt these savages, cause I'm where the grim await
And i aint fin to hate when I'm hijacking the interstate
any Women with a thicker shape, I could penetrate
maybe Innovate to fill up my dinner plate with rib and steak
Pen to pad then tape, thats playing on a dirty crate
Some survived… others met an early fate
Ill Probably never see 38 still grinding like the pearly gates
as my sound circulate At an urgent rate
Too shook to breeze by
Goons is fronting as mc's emcees why
Thinking that they seem fly
Unaware their swag is only knee high
My flow apocalyptic, call it book of Eli

So man the barricade as they clash for savage reign
Laugh at the pain I slam, and blast hand grenades
Plans to raids, as we march in king's quarters
Brandish blades harsh with the torture
Extreme slaughter when we ravage… [slay ya]…
Scream in horror from the graphic nature
As foes withered get withered in
Cold as snow blizzard wind
Those wicked I am most vicious
Gross grimness, i oppose resistance
Wrote sickness, with a pen and pad
Now your hopes missing, provoke friction
Search the lair and then choke the victim
Reverse engineer cause i steal ya blueprints
So its checkmate before you make a move bitch

Heh, here's one you can rap on.

https://soundcloud.com/illustraight/a-dedication

But it has to be something from the heart, though. I just made this half an hour ago, and so far .... I'm really pleased.

Don't keep a certain scheme going too long in the middle you had the scheme stretched a bit and don't say lines like "still packing heat 9's under mattresses" then 4 lines later say ill probably never see a 38 it just makes you seem fake as **** and will probably get you laughed at

I'm feeling the last line

oh hell yeah but you know jones is gonna own

and i have an actual mma fight

thanks your feedback

hell yea ik jones is gonna destroy him

good luck in that fight homie

yeah tanks man

pretty sick

People dick ride the **** outta you. Its unbelievable. You are not good. You're a fool. Time to spit this crazy ****.

Everyone knows I'm going at professors neck
Im checking my hitlist and it looks like professors next
So you bout to get X'd-Man, cuz when that steel flare, leave you in a wheel chair, now you Professor X
You next asleep, good night teach
So if I let you speak, its cuz I love to hear death acceptances speech
You put you're name on the line like attendance sheets
Everythings falling into place like a Tetris cheat
These are coffin lines with tremendous heat
So you'll have common ground when you're descendents meet
Its like you getting put in hot grease and fried,
One in the wing, one in the thigh, one in you're breast with my biscuit give you a 3 piece have you leaking gravy on the side.
You guys are now witnessing a sacrifice for the slaughter
And you don't want beef like Hindu Indian daughters
You bit off more than you can chew, and you ain't got the teeth of piranhas
So you the 12th man on you're team, the proverbial bench warmer
If you think you championship caliber, you sounding outlandish
If the Milk Box Kids are the Lakers, then you are Kurt Rambis
So if you don't know who that is, thats exactly my point
So why you playing the ******* game and scoring exactly no points
You've never popped a shot, you can't rebound,
You'll need assists from you're team to get back up off the ground.
You can talk tough, but listen up, I've heard you're soundcloud and it sucks
For you to be the first pick. You gonna need more than Andrew Luck
Cuz you'll never get any bread, like you're allergic to gluton
Im running black panther on you're ass like Im Cam Newton
See battling me that **** wasn't wise
I got transformer lines, so theres more than meets you're eyes
You aint ******* with me cuz I'm in my Optimus Prime

AND YES IM ******* BETTER THAN YOU.

Lmfao I love how you brag about how much of a real rapper you are how you aren't into fake bullshit then spit a full round of fake ass gun bars and shitty sports references that are easy as **** to write ill give you the professor X line that was creative never heard that angle before

Lol **** you. You dick ride his line of shoving his dick down peoples throat and slicing people up. I spit bullshit better than he does. You dick ride one of the most common saying ever "priceless cuz you make no sense". Lol **** you.

"ur cyph's is my kids after i jerk off on ya corpse,lifeless" OMG YOUR SOOOO REAL

"untamed , guirella war kill ya corpse ressurect ya soul n kill ya force , ill of course , i dont feel remorse for the fields of war"

Lol **** you're opinion.

Rap battles are different from real rap. Rap battles= Complete bullshit and word play. Rap verses in songs= should be real

Real talk lol

thats all you have to say.... you have to admit that the 2nd verse more then the est was pretty dope

It's all rhyme scheme not really any punches or anything there wasn't much to comment on

If u havent already thought of killing yourself this verse will make you
My rare talent could shrivel you up son so try raisin the stakes fool
I know your in college and honestly that's great dude
But cuz of what your pen states i hope Sandusky gets out of jail just to rape you
The computer almost throws up everytime you have it sending your rhymes
If i snap an I kill he's tendin (Achilles tendon) to lie
Ain't a stand up guy so if he says he got a kill he's tendin to lie
Killed you twice with basically the same line
You think your tough your the hardest? Son your just garbage
If your so dope ill just roll a fuckin blunt with your carcass
If you try to front like a marksman then you're ******* retarded
Just to piss you off ill go see your mom and get to stompin her heart in
Son I'm the mic messiah here to save hip hop and god sent me
So you better lie in (lion) safety like John wendling
Why did you think that was so fuckin creative?
Your not somethin amazin sports references suck and they're basic
So dope I could stop ya brain with my brush stroke
Stop those who be mainstreamin when I crush flows