Neverending Rap Battle

ok , nice to know you have an opinion

its obvious at this point , no matter what material is put up , and whether it has a storyline or not , your not going to enjoy it because your jaded ,


ur gonna take a rebuttle and say there was no story line an no semblance of any theme , an all i did was say words like dick an butt

not noticing the similies / metaphors and plays on words


and because you have a very narrow view , you say atrocious lies , about my structuring


lol

in all honesty you should be taking tips

I have not used the same scheme twice


ur shits the exact same scheme , played out 2 word multisyllable punchlines

Ive also come to terms with the reality I use references that are over your head ...

so its easy to see why you dont comprehend the storylines

but i know whitey an drew are right , soon as you hear the way i flow , ud probally understand these better

Yes lets look at this gem of word play and schemes with a great story line. I'll convert it to plain english.

Theres Penis in his mean spirited nature and (Some sort of Alice in Wonderland reference) out of her religious cup. This same guy with the mean spirited nature is drunk on death perhaps (Juliets potion makes her seem dead so this guy is drunk on death) and he likes it. He is writing about death now. Then a bunch of bullshit about the trojan horse and God's falling off their horses laughing about man thinking he can acquire wisdom. Then a strange reference to Mary Magdeline and then a feeble attempt at connecting her to the Virgin Mary. Then some bullshit about the Eucharist and being faithful. Then don't say grace live it. Which btw makes no sense because grace is simply thanking God for food, which you can't live.

At this point you must realize you have nothing connecting any of this ^^^^.
At this point I'm tried of trying to transcribe a bunch of bullshit that doesn't flow

first off Phallyus doesnt mean falice
they are 2 different things --- DUH

I shortened Fallacy , for my own benefit here ... Its what people who have a good enough grasp on words do manipulate them

and u took this in a different direction completely , i feel as you may be projecting your own thoughts n not just reading what is there ...

and as whitey has said to you guys before , I dont just do single meaning rhymes

that bloody mary virgin mary line was a reference to the Drink VIRGIN BLOODY MARY and the virin mary and the game bloody mary ...

you do realize that the word grace means more then just sitting at the table an giving thanks for food

IE.efinition of GRACE

1
a : unmerited divine assistance given humans for their regeneration or sanctification
b : a virtue coming from God
c : a state of sanctification enjoyed through divine grace
2
a : approval, favor <stayed in his good graces>
b archaic : mercy, pardon
c : a special favor : privilege <each in his place, by right, not grace, shall rule his heritage — Rudyard Kipling>
d : disposition to or an act or instance of kindness, courtesy, or clemency
e : a temporary exemption : reprieve
3
a : a charming or attractive trait or characteristic
b : a pleasing appearance or effect : charm <all the grace of youth — John Buchan>
c : ease and suppleness of movement or bearin


I was referring to living in the state of grace

not just speaking it...

as in dont just say thank you for things ,
always be grateful an thankful and act in such candor

ok i know what it is

its has nothing to do with profs rhymes and flow

prof is just to damn advance for some people
and alot of people might not understand what he is exactly saying
im beginning to get almost everything he says bc i read the dictionary for new words
i look up the meaning of wordplay and i try creating ideas
prof does wordplay in a verse.. might be advanced for some people but
you have to understand hes creative, with his lines, he makes them his own

Falice is a slang term for dick. So when you write falice I assume falice like an intelligent individual.

And You can't just say Mary Mary Bloody Virgin Mary and say it references all this **** when the line is pointless. The references have nothing to do with anything you said therefor making them pointless.

When you write "dont just say grace live it" that translates into SAYING GRACE, which I'm sure we all know is a prayer that gives thanks for food. Therefor you can't live it...
Btw you have committed the Fallacy of equivocation. In you're attempt to defend you're grace line you have used in a wrong way and have switched definitions.

Ironic how you use the word Fallacy when you commit fallacies all the time.

No. Hes not advanced. He makes an attempt to be advanced and fools a bunch of dumbasses into thinking hes advanced when he fails miserably at an close inspection of his lines.

At first it didn't sound like a creepy song but once you listen to it through your earphones in FULL BASS, it's different. Then I thought of African tribes calling on Lucifer to give them powers ..... then I thought of Clipse and Pharrell.

There are always going to be problems between a party due to lack of understanding for one's skill and creative immersion. I think in order to get over that lack, one has to mould it into a grasp.

Do you think that without such, a potter could still sculpt vases that we have in our living rooms, or a mechanic could still repair cars that we drive, or even a rapper could still make music that we, the listeners, are each and every day inspired by? And they all have one thing in common: their own reason.

Proverbs 25:8-9
"Don't jump to conclusions - there may be a perfectly good explanation for what you just saw. In the heat of an argument, don't betray confidences."

So to say someone is being too advanced when you clearly don't know WHY they abstract their lines is nothing short of ignorance. In cases like this, nobody can be too advanced nor too simple.

at this point I must request - any and all comments that are not meant for the growth of the group or individuals , ( PUT IT IN UR VERSES)

dont fill the pages with trivial ,popularity contests

lets just RAP and PRACTICE our skillsets

well ur wrong cause phallus , is the word used for dick

FALICE is shortened from FALLACY

iunno if your noticing the difference between them yet ?

and yea to be specific , if you read the lines before an after the mary mary bloody virgin mary part , youd see that the point is connected to the lines and has a larger meaning

ur dense , If I say ( dont just say grace , live it ) then i just said in plain english (dont just say grace)

so how the hell does that translate to saying grace ??

it doesnt , thats redundant and stupid

I used the line in the way I intended it to be used ,

You think of grace as just SAYING GRACE

I was speaking about the STATE of GRACE as i'll reiterate

DEEEEEEEERP



Equivocation ("to call by the same name") is classified as an informal logical fallacy. It is the (MISLEADING) use of a term with more than one meaning or sense (by glossing over which meaning is intended at a particular time).

It generally occurs with polysemic words (words with multiple meanings)!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

simply combining metaphors /wordplay

and i will explain this to you right now, If I wanted to write cookie cutter raps , and just say everything , in a plain format , yes more people may understand them , but not everyone deserves to have the same knowledge until they choose to attain it

I have left many (GEMS) in the words I write, as da vinci n shakespeare have left clues in there work ...

my rhymes are Map's

only LEGENDS have the legend to read it

lmao or was that to much equivocation

PS , FALLACY of EQUIVICATION is an oxy moron , because Equivication is already classified as a informal logical fallacy

so yea birdie , keep chirpin

Amen

You are unbelievably stupid.
"at this point I must request - any and all comments that are not meant for the growth of the group or individuals , ( PUT IT IN UR VERSES) "

*2 Seconds later* Huge paragraph of bullshit

Falice is not a word. When reading the fake word Falice it sounds like phallus which is the word for dick.
Mary Mary bloody Virgin Mary has no connected lines. The only way it is even relevant is you're on some bible scheme. Other than that it has no connection and has no purpose in the rap making it irrelevant.
The only possible way of saying grace is to say a prayer. You can't say "State of Grace" . In english it doesnt fuking work. Its a flawed line just deal with it. It shouldn't be that big of a deal considering 80% of the lines are flawed.

And when I was referring to you using a Fallacy of Equivocation I was referring to you're pathetic attempt to defend you're line, not the line itself.

And trust me you sit on this site cuz you get dick rode here by 13 year olds who don't know what the **** you're saying. You fool them into thinking you're advanced when really you're just a ******* idiot.

i see what your saying here at the top but still man if you think your a better rapper start a new forum with new people that dont know either of you (so they wont let personal feeling affect judging) and battle there and then we will all no once and for all who has more lyrical skill and knowledge so we can stop blowing up this site and just rap

Check out my 2nd upload: https://soundcloud.com/illustraight/body-drop

the problem is....
him and everyone on this site
thinks hes the best
yet its like what 5 or 6 people

now i did listen to his audios
i mean i like the beats he has...
on certain songs.. i feel the emotion almost
but theres another side of me that says ok hes just rapping

aint this suppose to be fun....
if he dont show respect.. no ones gonna respect him
you might as well leave it alone
because im sure he could go on and on for another 1000 pages
and his little buddies.. are gonna think were the dicks
i speak the truth... or what i feel
im not gonna say any ones the best

dfc said that he was a hip hop god
i dont see it
if hes getting paid for all this ****
and if hes making moves on sound cloud
then tell me why hes still in the same damn position
as he was when he started on this site
and by my research that was like 9 years ago

soo he could diss me all he wants
call me a faggot.. say im wrong
tbh i could care less to what he has to say
its only a matter of time before some else comes on this site thats better
then him

getting paid.. i guess your not being paid enough

all he does is rhyme
thats it
then he bitches to everyone
now no one has the fuckin guts to post saying they agree with me
but i bet all his friend will read this and shake there heads yes because they know im fuckin right

i admit his audios are pretty good
only problem is the way he raps
i could barely understand him

he sounds like hes mumbling and he raps pretty damn fast
and that doesnt mean hes good

DISS ME.. cause i could care less
no one helping him out because they fuckin know that me and you are right
sooo idc what they think

DARKNOVA

wheres my battle???
did you run from it like i said you where going to

ok... ok

i.. i just have to say it

hes

hes right

Real talk

atleast you aint scared