Neverending Rap Battle

Verse-1 multies-27 makes sense-yes wordplay-4 meaning-8/10
Grammar-100% related to real life- 7/10 makes references-2 time signature-3/4

Hey santa
The fan's up
You can't run
Your damn done
I smash fun
And pop pills
Got skills
When I faught thrills
But nowadays
I'm delayed
Always late
Can't find time
Can't make my rhymes
And can't fight crime
So I've decided to resort
To becoming a cohort
To the gang that may contort
When they hear that I'm in their vacinity
I'm their father, their son, and their Holy Ghost
Might as well call me the trinity
Every hostage I'm holding boasts
That they "saw Wrathe with a gun shootin up people's posts"
I go around the country, coast to coast
So call me a fortunate fame
Don't disagree when I say there's gore in this game
It's a fact, the morons don't play!
And I'm ready to take four on and put them all to shame...

if i compare your shitt with mine your verse is nothing

HAHAHAHA THAT'S HILARIOUS

Yours seemed pretty forced which makes it very hard to read and understand. It makes sense to you cuz you made it but its pretty confusing to everyone else. It downright doesn't make sense

8 verses wrathe lets do this ill judge

Sounds about right. Who starts? Pick a number between 1 and 10?

k i got one

I pick 5

you got it i always chose five ight you pick him or you

Him

ight its on you 8

WRATHE VS 8ETUDE --- ROUND ONE --- EIGHT BARS

I ain't backin down, trackin hounds can't follow my tracks
Gettin down, spittin now, not shittin, I'm gettin, the feelin, appealin

Fakin breaths, swallow air, takin meth, I don't care
Let the police break down your doors and find your whores and empty Coors!

By law i saw you fall in tall and try to crawl when feelin small!
You're a widow so damn depressed, out the window i shoulda guessed

No response, my conscience convicts me unconscious
Unweary I'm hearing? You're screaming "please heal me!"

Your alone, home grown, it's been shown, that you can't "C" cuz it ain't yo tone
Born in the nineties ain't twenty years old

Only thirteen, and yes I've been told. I've been bold. I grew up tough
And rough so shut the **** up i won't listen to yo dissin and pissin

Young rebel, next level, I'm taking on the world, so don't meddle
I'm gonna be, no one but me, you better believe, that I'm gonna break free

If you win, I don't care, this is a damn forum, I'm dyin of that boredom
If its baseball I'm goin "home", don't need to touch "base", cuz I'll win this race

I didn't want to wait

my opinion 8 is better but good luck in the battle

So apparently nobody cares about anything but multies? Cuz that's all he had

if you wanna judge,pick any verse of my rap and compare it to that of wrathe and than judge

u are too young to understand what it was......and i'll slap the **** outa ya mouth after i give my o level exams,,,startin on 7th may

WRATHE VS 8ETUDE --- ROUND ONE --- EIGHT BARS

I ain't backin down, trackin hounds can't follow my tracks
Gettin down, spittin now, not shittin, I'm gettin, the feelin, appealin

Fakin breaths, swallow air, takin meth, I don't care
Let the police break down your doors and find your whores and empty Coors......................................nice flow by the way

No no no.... That's not how a rap battle works

And for someone "too young" I'm closer to fame than you probably will ever be

i like em so far round two starting now but you guys need to come harder more punchs and personallys metaphores similies irony things like that