Neverending Rap Battle

FADE TO NOTHINGNESS

[Intro]
Just when we think we're out
We get pulled back in

[Hook]
Fade ..... to nothingness
The blackness has taken over us
Now we crumble into dust
Fade ..... to nothingness
Why do we feel so obscure?
Face-to-face with darkness pure
Fade ..... to nothingness
Shadows running either side
Taking away all our pride
Fade ..... to nothingness

[Verse 1]
I was treated like nothing when I was just a kid
They all looked at me like I wasn't gonna be ****
All my life I've been ducking hits
I may as well be a duckling with my head under the ditch
Throughout middle school I was pushed back and forth
The pressure kinda felt like I was in a tug of war
Being pulled from both sides like I was never pulled before
until I crack like broken pavements and tumble onto the floor
Lectured, chastised and scandalised
It's an outrage about the way I was separated, and patronised
My mother told me she'd be sad in her grave
if this bullshit kept happening 'til the day I was frail and grey
Unable to stand firmly on both legs
like a Pinocchio with a wooden nose with my whole head stone-dead
I think my autism's the cause
of my discrimination stated by haters, without a clause
My progress gets brought into a pause
like TV screens when you press the button on the box
and the ************ just stops and just stares at you, blankly
And frankly, the situation just maddens me
Saddens me, like a Shakespeare tragedy
Like a Roman emperor, they keep stabbing me
These ******* assholes chuck me in a black hole
They're loving it when I fade into nothingness

[Hook]

[Verse 2]
The country is turning into a war zone
Buildings demolished with rockets, pick-pocketed, cities torn and blown
Arsonists speaking war Ebonics
The Devil's turning foreigners into followers
Brainwashing babe targets into oblivion
Making them turn their back on their faith and their religion
Renouncing, denouncing, it's astounding
Especially if you're a member of an anti-church council
Lots of civil wars on the streets of Middle Eastern lands
Deliver bombs like margaritas by the pizza-man
Black people still being beaten with policemen glad
Now there's a rape case in India
The 6 of them stripped her, raped her and killed her
Her undignified death has caused millions of Indians to fight for their sister
But it's such a shame that she won't be there to see it
The icon of justice, she's being it
Amongst all the nothingness

[Hook]

[Verse 3]
There's a lot of **** in the park, that goes on after dark
Dogs barking waking all the people in the yard
It's hard, to imagine things taking place
Fighting and killing going on in such a dangerous state
I lay awake thinking about all the tactics laid in place
to tackle all the reckless law-breakers
and jaw-breakers, the drug-dealers and the whore rapists
The hardcore racists and dark sadists
Thugs robbing newsagents and bodegas
gripped with napalms and gauges, all faceless
Dodging cops but they can't escape them
The next thing they know, they all get collared and incarcerated
Nothing can explain the evils of nothing
Especially when guys deprive you of something
The world is filled with retarded and thuggish ****
It's unpleasant, it's the meaning of nothingness

[Hook]

https://soundcloud.com/thedarknova/fostah-the-nova me and bambi destroying

Two words:

thats. DOPE.

battle verse i found against some dude named ferocious fists

under his name it says crown me
dare to swim in the pool of rap i'll drown thee

you want to kill yourself ************ i'll give you the knife
open your eyes to what the real world is like
your probably 20 years old knowing you aint goin nowhere in life
now step down and hand the real rapper the mic

your text drops are Atrocious bitch
trying to learn how to battle is something i had time to focus with
i learned i have to PUNCH harder with these FEROCIOUS FISTS
in my story the bad guy always wins no more heroic twists

i'm goin to the top, your goin nowhere your the one who died
you aint the lord, your just another faggot i crucified

you aint goin nowhere, your back pedalin
you fat gremlin,you aint tough you act menacin
psych ward escape you jacked medicine
hacked veterans, now sit down and settle in
you 20 year old nobody that crys when his mom yells at him

add one more line

i'll choke you with my ferocious fist, turn you whiter then Gully T (Gully TK)
come on dog face it, your punchlines are basic, you only win battles with your multie scheme

Your punchlines aren't worth ****
It seems the auctioneers fooled you
Give you a "Pound" like school bullies do
Let them bully you, into giving them your chewy food
Now you're left hungry, with less money
Looking uppity, like that Mr. Man grumpily

Just off the top of my head.

Listen to you as you try to keep the flow
Its probably taken practice obvious enough for us to know
Your doing good to keep up with time
much less a little boy who could barely even rhyme
ive seen guys like you just spitting lyrics on the corner
your not there yet, although each big word gets you that much warmer
now enjoy yourself as you pick words from the dictionary
but my words are different, beware theyre a bit scary
dont say your werent warned, before you run to mama because your pride got scorned, so lets see...
clearly you think its humurous to imitate the germans
ill put you on blast and treat you like those vermans
How bout this, ill offer a kind proposal
you can play the jew and ill guide you to your disposal
not that im a racist, i have jew in my pedigree
but bring up the holocaust and ill bomb your ego readily
Still think im a fool for challenging your style
i have phrases like yours in a corner, just thrown into a pile
even though your lyrics are unfamiliar, i can almost gaurantee you got them from the local drug dealer. Maybe your out of your mind trying to face a prick like me, although ill say it wasnt that hard admittedly,
i can see from here you could ruin your own scheme, speaking of nightmare, you could ruin your own wet dream
you tryed your best i see, ill give credit because you fought
but when its said and done remember by whom that youve been taught.

....emotional world lives in me i dont live in THIS COLD WORLD
or m not a human cuz i dont like boys,shemales and i **** ON GIRLS

feels like this world is IN RAGE,movin in pace fast as bentley and m walkin in SLOW-MO
or its my clumsy atitude ENGAG'D to lonliness mentally which got me walkin SOLO

i tried to control the rapper lives IN CAGE,DEEP DOWN in me but it GROWS-MORE
and it is grown bigger then me so i got DEEP DOUBT its ma SOUL OR i'm its soul yo

m sick,love,money,dad and home sick fo so long that i feel like m sick of it
i was just 13 years old when i lost ma everything,dont you think its ridiculous

my shadow is my brother in day,****,in night lonliness is my sister
this is my life,i would SLAP A BITCH by eatin poison just to diss her

sometimes i SNAP A PIC and i dont see me anywhere in picture
this world is so
DICK HEAD
it just gives hate,it just degrates or it abominates
u TILL DEATH

m not IN PAIN,pain is in me,hate lives in me which drived me INSANE,
same hate u gave me,its in my heart so love envy me,m stuck in THIS GAME

m on drugs,
fucck the skin colors,if m brown y should i diss my OWN LUCK?
critics wont leave me,i think they'll rate this track as whacK,OH FUCCK

[verse 2]
these mentors of hate are so mothafuckas they just discriminate or they JUST CAN DEGRATE
degration only generates hate,and u live in their cage so good and bad you CUNTSS CANT RELATE

god says that he does not stresses the men more than he can resist(QURAN)
i cant bear ma collapse,so i dont think fo me now loosing exists

plus poverty made me DO OR DIE dope,it rejected to leave loosin an option
we all tryna buy success,him,her,or its YOU SO I'm trynna get rich before success is auctioned

is this world as cold as its to me or mercy mocks just ALONE ORPHANS?
or life came to me after killin hapiness,dad was gone and my moma wasnt AT HOME OFTEN

i feel bad,there is no one to stanch ma dad's tears when he is on phone
i feel sad,there is no one to wipe my eyes cuz m always all alone

pain is RIGHT HERE
in my heart,from saturday to sunday monday,monday to FRIDAY
my life is NIGHTMARE
everyday is grey n night is black,m desperate to see a BRIGHT DAY

nobody likes me cuz m brown colored,some say m muslim so m suicide bomber,these americans just comes to SMELL ME
m discriminated so much that i stay alert when i talk to somebody,nobody HELPS ME

my life stimulates my pain but i dissimulate it in my invocation
feels like m prisoner of life who cant take a bail


let me write number of multies used in rap fo BAMBS stupid asss
multies used..........28(highlighted in capital ltrs)AND 4 TRIPLE SYLLABLES

Decent start but the multis are simple as well as forced

It doesn't flow very good, and it's quite meaningless. Yes, a few lines had impressive rhymes, but that seemed like your only focus. It needs to be more well rounded. Oh, and---

Your walkin whack
Talking smack
Till your shot in back
With a hot attack
Like a heart attack

Clutching yo chest
Like you're clutching her breast
And punchin the rest
Till she lays, a bloody mess
No fate or carress
No greats to obsess

Apon ever
Happy valentines day?
No love letter
No life is better
Than the lonely lead mind
Under this endeavor

It's as lonely as mine
Just cuz I rhymed
Don't mean I got time

To post on this topic
Cuz no, I don't got it
It's rhetoric
Correct it?
Just floor it!
I meant it
Look out below,
I've descended

nigga i will kill you and mail ur body to ur family happy valentines day ****** haha

Nova, DFC, Whitey, and Prof
i wanna do a track with all yall on it. its called "nothing really matters"

basically jus saying whatever ya want, and actin like nothing matters

all i need is your vocals acapella. ill send ya the beat thru FB so if you want to do this. hmu thru fb message.

and whoever else has recording software.

i wanna produce the track too, i got a lot of good ideas on mastering and mixing this track down

so if yall wanna do this, hmu on fb and ask for the beat ill give it to ya , once i find one


LEHGO

Email it to me my Facebook hasn't been working for me

gimme ya email again. so whitey is in

I gotta find or make a beat.

but all you gotta do it record it with the beat but send it to me, wav file, accapella

https://soundcloud.com/bambi-17/beats-nothin-really-matters

THIS IS THE BEAT

its downloadable so dl it if ya want on

import it into audacity but send me your raw acca vocals.

OH AND WHOEVER IS ON THIS TRACK

ONLY MAKE YA VERSE 45 sec long. I don't want to count bars write now

but once ya hear the beat. youll know what im talkin about

only make ya verse 45 seconds. peace

send me ya vocals at

[email protected]

love yall

PARADISE FREESTYLE

[Verse]
Paradise in the afterlife
A life full of sunny beaches and yummy peaches sounds asinine
Roomy palace rooms with jacuzzi bathrooms
and banquet rooms to hold shindigs and stag nights
Lots of freaky women, swimming
while the sea is ripping, with cream on their skin and
they're skimming
Jewel-encrusted living rooms
with individual chandeliers shining like crystals do
LED, TV screens
at the back of MPV's, and how they're seen clear is a mystery
like Sherlock Holmes cracking cases
Elementary, my dear Watson
When I die and go there, I'll kick it with Jesus without a ******* care
Besides, I don't like the Earth, it's crummy there
I'd rather live as an angel in the sun that's bare
And ride like a motherfucking buccanneer

im down.. just give me some time to write

gimme ya email so I can send ya the beat

dooooopppe brotha


PISS IN MY BUSHES

i give the new meanin to bisexual
when i take a girl and a guy
and collide um
my lyrics are so sick
that i puke and take a ****
on my paper before i write um
a lot of ppl care what other think
but i stay on my grind
takin other rappers verses
makin a hit song and say they were mine
thats a joke and if you cant take it, go die
and if you dont like my music, id like to know why
nah jus kiddin on second thought, i dont give a ****
cause i got your bitch in YOUR pick up truck
lickin my nuts she givin it up
jus admit that im rippin it up when im spittin this stuff
but you can ahead and laugh at the fact that i rap
some i can come right back and bash you in the back with a bat
you fags brag about swag but me? im white boy scrubbin
trippin bitches with crutches
start throwin punches and walk away like it was nothin
you might say im discustin but i will rush to agree with you
some say im hard headed and act like im retarded
but that fact is im explodin into arsen
sendin an application to
nicolodean to get my rap career started, DRAKE