Neverending Rap Battle

Does that mean you've given up?

That Merlin line gave me an orgasm

I'm likin it

It came right off the top of my head, which was something I never expected.

Lol, of course not. If you're up for more rounds I am, but it seems like there should be actual judging on our battle. Don't you think?

have whitey bambi and Dfc judge the battle they all know the -scoring format


Punchlines
Multis
Structure
Metaphors
Wordplay

yeah, upping for votes based on proff's categories ^^ no dickriding, hating votes or unspecified votes

Maybe, but I must warn you, you'll be up for quite a challenge. However, I still have a lot to absorb myself so this can be somewhat of a learning curve for both of us.

if you feel anyone gives you a byist opinion

holla - i judge strictly on what you write , not who u are

I wanna point out something so u all can recognize something

my stage name has popped up more times then anyone elses in the last few pages

even when im not the one battling

so understand , good or bad its all publicity ; )

However more, the line attacking my welfare towards my family was uncalled for, so you're going to have a lot of piece-picking to do.

You know, it was. I gotta apologize for that one. Just remember that I mean no ill will toward you or your family and wish you all the best of luck.

Good lookin out. Why don't you weigh in on the battle as it stands now?

Low blows are all apart of the competitiveness it's all meant in good faith nobody here will actually wish bad trouble upon someone's family just shake it off and know its not in seriousness I once told a kid I wanted his mom (who's in a wheelchair) to fall down the up escalator....

both of you put up a new verse , now that you have ill's with a reason to go hard and that youve had a lil practice

and i'll rate them against eachother and on an individual process so you know what to work on PEACE

Fckuck

Some ideas are remembered, some are forgotten
Some are meant to save, while others are fuckin rotten
But the ones we never remember are to be the most revolutionary
But the ones in control happen to be the most delutionary
But until thoughts are recognized, and I'm not categorized
And I come back to life, that means the people have realized
What I'm gonna say about shtit
Fckuck these rhymes, what's up with these times?
Everybody's passed out and high, words cannot define
How much we cannot rely, on deaf people's goodbyes
They can't hear themselves, that's a fuckin ****-well
This god damn hell, seems like the worst,
but pain comes in stages and this stage is the first

All those asass-holes, and pieces of shtit
You can sckuck my dckick, and reason with it
Treason is ****, but believing in it
Without lettin the heat, cool through the vents
Is far worse than going into cataclamystic events

Fckuck it
Kckick it

So friend and I are at school lunch, bully tells me that I "suck tits"
I whisper in his ear "**** this", and decide to show him where his luck is
By punchin his jaw leadin to raw ruckus
Monkey hear, monkey do
Monkey rear, throw his poo
Funky cheer, funky true
Leads to dancing one step two!
See how little things become very bad
Like all-out-war in southern bhagdad
While the north has the greatest achievements they ever had
No control, train ain't gonna run without coal!
Poor conductor so poor, he uses coal he stole, what a troll
All these stories represent real life ,With real strife
But you never KNOW it's real till a man is at your throat with a knife
So shoot ask questions later, always will be true and true
Because if you don't shoot first, then they may shoot you

braniac slash maniac walkin like a handicap lookin like a meth head
i spit then i got ya on ya death bed, but this aint no electric chair we have here
and yo last meal is a pound of coke and this knife blade goin in and out ya throat--
**** bein gangsta about ****, i aint no thug, relax
justa straight up sociopath, most of you laugh till i start throwin the axe--
ya want feedback? ill rip ya spine out ya back and put it on ya dinner plate, eat that-
so dont be a fag if ya want me to tell you how i feel about ya music
cause if its good enuff, i steal it and use it and say it my new ****, just for my amusement--
im the type thatll take two hicks and two chicks and slam dick to clit till they exchange units and uterus-
i think im close to losin it, cause there aint no coffee anymore its jusst acid in my tea cup
and your just askin to get beat up, and curbed stomped and smash and bash all ya teeth up--
talk then get fucked up, get ya gums cut watch ya coughin ya tongue up now lets see you thug up--
they tell me to rap about the average midwest kid, but i aint average anything
im a breed of my own, lookin to succeed on my own, i savage everything--
whether its two bucks, a couple cents, or a bus pass, i dont give a ****
i slap a sluts ass when she walks past then duck fast so the guy behind me looks like the dumb ass--
so gimme that lap dance you **** back that ass up so that tramp stamp is up

I know I'm not one to judge but I think ills has more experience, which gave him tools to win. Hey J, I like your style, cousin!
Ills-1
J Blake-0

Keep at it guys! I'm watching from the sidelines!

P.S. Everybody likes to rap about fucked up psychopath ****, or some hardcore violence or sex. Maybe slow down a little? lol

oh helll yea i get to judge..nice..i got this

Slow down? Nahhh **** that..