Neverending Rap Battle

I made one.

Yo prof that track ya send me last night I just listened to it deeply and that 'ingesting dope mcs' line was nasty. The whole track was and plus I can tell ya have your voice figured out which has been a problem for this cat lately

It's not big enough

Why didn't I get a copy

*sigh* Wow this is getting so 9th grade. Forget it man, I'm just having fun. lol

9th grade.. Haahahahaha you're a funny dude.

Quit acting like your sooooo grown up.. You talked about ripping whitey moms liver out... I think you still have some growing up to do before you can say it's getting so 9th grade..

I'll admit it. I ain't any where near close to growing up and I probably never will but what you just said was idiotic.

And my bars are better than yours.. Thought I'd throw that in there.

Get at me dawg holla

I'm in 10th I take offense to that

been workin on this for awhile.....i mainly want ill's opinion but i also want everyones opinion .. i feel this is poetry

Enter the void where time slows at incredible rates
and gravity is thrown out casually no sense trying to level your weight
just stay calm and someday
soon maybe you will be heading away
but not now settle & stay
Ive never seen such matter in abundance
I'm looking at it from all angles to figure out how to cause a malfunction
but when gamma rays
hits split the matter and span away
your on your own like a lost child that ran away
Feeling victimized
well what do you think as i sit inside
this prism why does desolation
hit quicker then decimation
when you sit back and realize nobody's coming to address your situation
and the thought of getting complacent isn't even logical
when the possible turned impossible
gone to manifest the mazes
Viral quotes no longer now its just a spiral choke
that succumbs your present thoughts and gets inside your hopes
the void can be invisible
to the eye but never dismissible
to abide when moments become more and more pivotal
to trust the signs Ive been locked in a void but i knew a way out
cause an old man once told me inferior objects have an advantage if you know how they're played out
when every cause has a parallel reaction
i wasn't prepared to dwell with in the faction
so i got in the deepest niche only to burst up to the highest passage
That resides
above where most will ever climb
to fashion
cause eternals are everlastin
but the future is what the mental waits to bask in as i look inside
the paralyzed
dimension
i barely find the entrance as the pressure builds and the paradigm gets ready to enclosed fencing
When the void strips your soul
only to unfold
with no affection when time becomes non exististent
the line between your mind that separates our daily lives
from the lies and the fiction
that the illuminate put inside ya mind to scare ya ambition

Okay, who's pretending? I'm a freshman in college. Not to **** on anybody younger than me, but I remember my freshman days of high school. So -- I'm confused -- how is that idiotic? Is it because your around that age and feel insecure?

Yeah I talked about ripping her liver out .. and? Lol I don't get why he'd care, he talked about you and him ******* my mom SPLIT-SCREEN style (which I had to admit was funny). This is supposed to be fun, right?

I'm far from this sophisticated gentleman ,and I don't pretend to be, but the days of "you have a small dick" is early high school - middle school. Get over yourself and relax.

Oh, and save your witty remarks on lyrical skill for battling. You're not good enough to flaunt any talent you think you may posess, and if I'm not mistaken, I've already got a verse waiting for you. So you .. 'holla'. Dawg.

I don't .. care. If you're one of the guys I'm talking about, who jokes and giggles with their friends about small dick jokes, then maybe you shouldn't be offended and learn to stop being a tool.

But if you don't do that, then who cares? lol man, it really doesn't take much to get you guys going, does it?

It's sarcasm live it learn it love it like I give a **** what you think lol and Bambs shits on you lyrically I told you from the start your schemes are adequate but you lack substance I'll admit you had a couple good rebuttals but that's about it

Like I said, leave all that lyrical talk with the actual battles. I can't talk much about Bambs other than what he said to me, which was nowhere near 'shitting on me' (though I suppose everyone has opinions). They were simple, with forced multi's and a weak flow and some really god-awful lines. I'm no Rakim myself, like you so kindly reminded me, but don't up Bambs just because he's your boy. You're not doing him no favors lol.

I know from experience Bambs isn't a battler but overall he's a talented emcee better than about 90% of people

I don't give two fucks if you talked about ripping her liver out.

I just find if funny that you said it's so ninth grade when you aren't grown up whatsoever

Oh budddy I'm waaay over myself that's not my problem.

Awww someone is offended of my 'witty' remarks boo hoo

Save your fuckin tears for your pillow.

But I love you too HOLLLLLLAAAAAAA

Yeah I said it again.. Muaaaah.

Maybe he is. I wouldn't know. I'll just take your word on it.

God awful lines.. Aww I'm choked up.. Naah just kiddin.

HOLLAAAAAAA

your a weak emcee , before and now CLOWN


you have to go to university to even think u have enough knowledge to step


PUSSY ASS BITCH



ive seen more bloody flow on a tampon
then legs this war amp can stand on
chop ya lips off , wrists off n tits off , not even pissed off
mafucka
this proff ,u bitch talk,rip ya dick off shove it down ya throat
**********
hand job ur whack, and cant do jack **** , jack off
shove ya head between ya ass lips , u see that ****
impacted ya stomach , so hard u make ya self vomit
think ur sick , i'll piss sipholous into your biitch , dick
ud win n oscar ya so garbage
how am i suppose to choke a choke artist
u think ur grown n that intimidates ,
just another pussy i inseminate , u could be eleven 8
just n ape n bigger pussy with a f'n gape
hot blade to ya ear n sear it off
heres ya balls
on a silver platter
I don’t think you see the point or hear at all
im an iller rapper ,
sick of you wannabe artist
who only half heart it ,
cant kill a master ,
swallow cement you wanna be hard ****
splatter ya skull on the wall call that grafitti
you lieing , saying you king , call me rafiki
just monkeying around ,
holding up ya phone screaming u got ya first pound
dogg thinks hes a vet till he gets spade what now pussy ?
god he thinks hes a god i bet
a days wage u look like a clown now Krusty
dusty downtown custy , u think u rock CRACK HEAD
u get raped in raps bed n beaten till your half dead
then cut off half ya head cause i have ta , give u some brains
just like ya moms bum , ass is like mike come again ?
huh ? i cant hear ya what cum stain ? ive done thangs
I cant change , unlike ya diaper
baby dont ever step to mike in a cypher
up in that pussy like ima sniper , abort the fetus
or force feed it , your teeth biitch .... eat dick

..................

lol

yea i never RAN AWAY CAUSE I GOT BEATEN PUSSY

I stuck around here and went to 4 other sites , won there

have done real freestyle competitions ... WON THERE

u really wanna know all my other escapades by the biography when it comes out or just watch the movies LOL

PEACE STEP THE GAME UP

Was waiting for that..

How am I supposed to choke a choke artist. Saaaaay whaaaa

i was taut in dark Molosseum
by the warriors that fought in the same Colosseum

Looks like you've had a lot of experience judging by the poetic verse you wrote here. Very Art of War.