Neverending Rap Battle

THAT'S FUCKIN IT ITS OVER! I'm not oopan, I'm WRATHE, oopan died a day before yesterday/ I KILLED HIM/ everything he said was a lie/ I kissed his ass goodbye/ these are my last one syllable rhymes/ he was affected/ by someone trying to be accepted/ which was me so I gave him a death sentence/ oopan changed you didn't cause it/ becoming wraiths was only witnessed/ he lied bout everything/ I'm 12/ he got the name oopan while playing Pokemon 2 years before hell/ my gf didn't kill herself/ no one was slapped/ no one clapped for me/ I felt trapped/ so I lied/ almost cried/ but no! No one's on my side!/ when two new rappers collide (all of you)/ fighting is instinct/ my rapping's not distinct/ that's what you all think/ so how could I disagree? Look at me/ in a month I'm 13/ yet I still go trick-or-treating/ on Halloween/ I'm embarrassing!
Yet I got rid of old me/ oopan R.I.P./ rest in peace.
WRATHE amerges/ blood splurges/ oopan submerges/ my new raps need to be sharp as allegheny spurges/ and NEVER oopan reemerges.

So dudes? I told you I'm NOT oopan. That's true. Still deny me? C'mon dudes, just accept wrathe.

Your still the same person lol and those are all one syllable rhymes so idk what your talking about

Only time you killed oopan was when you played halo with him faggot

I trick or treat? Lol free candy? **** yeah

Go ahead, make fun of me, I'm done lying. At least I have the balls to say this. Anyways, about the competition?

Need tips on how to rhyme?

Just ask

I would love to give you tips
Don't act like a dick though

Easy enough glad to be not hated

Oh, and my entire rap wasn't first syllable, was it?

Same as Bambi said but yes it was

Drew being a flamer dont mean ur spittin flames
i say that to show that u can be beat by the queers and the lames

Well guess i dont have much to work on cuz im the best
**** u ur bars ur mom and all the rest
Think ur so good but im not put to the test

Ull end up like ur dad puffin weed and smackin ur wife
Dont get mad at me for crackin the afterlife
Come at me u best be packin a knife
Cuz ill send ur emo bitch ass tail between legs cuttin to relieve strife

Ok, so more 2 & 3 syllable words. Seems like it shouldn't be too hard. I'll do a rap tomorrow, I don't have the brainpower to rap now. Bobbing for apples at night in -11 degree water hurts SO bad... I can't think straight. I can talk but rapping is hard.

Here's an example of a SINGLE syllable rhyme

Ex
Sex
Best

Multi syllable rhyming is this
Back hand
Mac fan

Back and mac rhyme
Hand and fan rhyme

Or

Start swinging spiked bats and aim for the first person in tight pants prolly a bitch nice ass

You can make spiked bats, tight pants and nice ass rhyme. It's all in your flow as well.

You know what your flow is?

Justa wondering.

My rap is more staccatto

Would multi syllable words work?

Like
Could've would've
Instead of
Could have would have?

Bad example much?

who wants to mess around with this one >?

http://soundcloud.com/milkboxkids/take-your-best-shot

It isn't just about rhyming bigger words it's about connecting multiple words

Write my WRITTENS WITH SONIC SPEED then get to SPITTINN MY DEMONIC DEEDS to SICKEN NEUROLOGICAL NEEDS

That should be a good example

Erm, where have I seen that line before? Oh yeah. You wrote it. LOL

Oopan schmoopan, he's an Oompan Loompan
He sounds like a dude who's been chewing too much fruits and
Right now, he's finding it a problem to swallow them
(*Gulp*) Like a couple of balls that has scars on them
He's an "Octopussy", a prostitute with tentacles
waving his arms across the forum, it's a spectacle
all over the place like boxes of fresh veg
that the staff couldn't be bothered to order and put on shelves
It's a debacle, it's chaos, it's disorganisation
An absolute disgrace to everybody who hates him
His name sounds just like a jellyfish's testicles
when they're losing too much air chemicals
I can hear them screaming now, "*gurgle* Please help me, I'm drowning.
*Gurgle* I'm wet, someone please get me a towel and
*Gurgle* I'm having trouble getting my bowels to open
*Gurgle* *Gurgle* I think my stomach feels a bit stout
*Gurgle* I've been swimming for too long and I want out
*Gurgle* I'm not really a fish. I'm a mouse.
A ******* mouse that runs around the house and pisses off the pussycat
(Meow) I can't find the cheese, where's the Gouda at?

Ok ill

Ok illis :/ whatever floats your boat