is this sentence grammatically correct?

My First Experience in couch surfing was with Doo From Seoul, of South Korea . . . Hi was so Wise, Kind, Friendly, and Frankly; and so I Hope to See Him and His family so soon.

or
...Hie was So ,Wise, Kind, and Friendly, Frankly and that Frankly and I Hope to See Him ...

thank you so much...

Ur welcome Maya to be sure

Don't capitalize so much. "My first experience in couch surfing was Doo from Seoul, South Korea. He was so wise, kind, friendly, and frank. I hope to see him and his family soon."

Technically Sage isn't this debatable

Sure it's collo but I get dragged across the floor and spit upon for such. Doubtless you'll be advised to at least so label any questionable usage in future postings

Just kidding Sage. We live in ominous times where everyone else is the enemy