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Is this sentence grammatically correct?

 
 
izzythepush
 
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Reply Mon 10 Jul, 2017 10:34 am
@oristarA,
That is not a typo, were would be a typo. And your English is execrable, you wouldn't know a properly constructed sentence if it bit you on the arse.
camlok
 
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Reply Mon 10 Jul, 2017 02:10 pm
@centrox,
Even lamer than Izzy, centrox.
camlok
 
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Reply Mon 10 Jul, 2017 02:13 pm
@izzythepush,
Izzy exposes himself as a liar. He said he has me on ignore.

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oristarA
 
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Reply Tue 11 Jul, 2017 04:24 pm
@izzythepush,
izzythepush wrote:

That is not a typo, were would be a typo. And your English is execrable, you wouldn't know a properly constructed sentence if it bit you on the arse.


That was a deliberate typo in order to be funny. You've overreacted to a non-extant error as if it bit you on the arse. Poor izzy, you logic is execrable.
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oristarA
 
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Reply Tue 11 Jul, 2017 04:27 pm
@camlok,
camlok wrote:

Even lamer than Izzy, centrox.


This time I don't agree with you. Centrox simply showed his humour:

Reread what he said:
centrox wrote:

camlok wrote:
Do you where the badge upon which is written, "Sheriff I decide the parameters"?

Where does he where the badge? On his hat? On his shirt?
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Ponderer
 
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Reply Wed 9 Aug, 2017 02:01 pm
@Sydney-Strock,
It is agreed that the sentence is grammatically correct, and you admit that it seems awkward. " My participation in this program would be of benefit to me by providing me with a head start on my medical education. " That eliminates the awkwardness and does not sound to "stiff " for someone with the intelligence to pursue a medical career. "Coached"? Possibly. Well-coached? Hopefully.
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BarerMender
 
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Reply Mon 12 Sep, 2022 03:19 am
@Sydney-Strock,
I find the sentence a little awkward. I would say: "Participating in this program will give me a head start on my medical education." Less wordy.
izzythepush
 
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Reply Mon 12 Sep, 2022 03:43 am
@BarerMender,
The original question is over six years old and has already been answered.
ascribbler
 
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Reply Mon 12 Sep, 2022 06:55 am
@izzythepush,
izzythepush
 
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Reply Mon 12 Sep, 2022 07:28 am
@ascribbler,
Flipping heck, Peters and Lee and The Little River Band. I can see why you think life has no meaning if you have to listen to that ****.
ascribbler
 
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Reply Mon 12 Sep, 2022 07:23 pm
@izzythepush,
I enjoy the occasional trip down market lane.

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elizabethwilliams707
 
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Reply Tue 4 Jun, 2024 04:19 am
@Sydney-Strock,
The sentence is grammatically correct, but there are better ways to phrase it for clarity and flow.

Here's why it's grammatically correct:

Subject (My participation)
Verb (will benefit)
Object (me)
Prepositional phrase (with a head start on my medical education)
However, "benefit with" can sound awkward. Here are some options for a smoother sentence:

Rephrased: "Participating in this program will give me a head start on my medical education." (This is more concise and uses stronger verbs.)
Active voice: "This program will benefit me by giving me a head start on my medical education." (This emphasizes the program's role.)
For an essay, the first option ("Participating...") is a strong choice. It's clear, concise, and avoids the potentially awkward "benefit with."
izzythepush
 
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Reply Tue 4 Jun, 2024 05:18 am
@elizabethwilliams707,
The original question is now over eight years, read the date stamp.

Get with the programme.
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Frank Apisa
 
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Reply Tue 4 Jun, 2024 06:09 am
@elizabethwilliams707,
elizabethwilliams707 wrote:


The sentence is grammatically correct, but there are better ways to phrase it for clarity and flow.

Here's why it's grammatically correct:

Subject (My participation)
Verb (will benefit)
Object (me)
Prepositional phrase (with a head start on my medical education)
However, "benefit with" can sound awkward. Here are some options for a smoother sentence:

Rephrased: "Participating in this program will give me a head start on my medical education." (This is more concise and uses stronger verbs.)
Active voice: "This program will benefit me by giving me a head start on my medical education." (This emphasizes the program's role.)
For an essay, the first option ("Participating...") is a strong choice. It's clear, concise, and avoids the potentially awkward "benefit with."


Good points you made here, Elizabeth. Thanks. Hope you stick around...especially for these kinds of questions.
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ewelinaszymczak
 
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Reply Fri 13 Sep, 2024 05:31 am
@Sydney-Strock,
Hi,

The sentence "My participation in this program will benefit me with a head start on my medical education" is grammatically correct but a bit awkward. The phrase "benefit me with" sounds unnatural. Grammatically, there’s no rule violation, but it could be clearer and more fluid.

A smoother alternative would be:

"My participation in this program will give me a head start on my medical education."
This version conveys the same meaning more directly and naturally. While your original sentence is technically fine for school, improving its clarity would make it sound better.
izzythepush
 
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Reply Fri 13 Sep, 2024 06:25 am
@ewelinaszymczak,
Still over 8 years old.

Read the bloody date stamp.
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