@Sydney-Strock,
The sentence is grammatically correct, but there are better ways to phrase it for clarity and flow.
Here's why it's grammatically correct:
Subject (My participation)
Verb (will benefit)
Object (me)
Prepositional phrase (with a head start on my medical education)
However, "benefit with" can sound awkward. Here are some options for a smoother sentence:
Rephrased: "Participating in this program will give me a head start on my medical education." (This is more concise and uses stronger verbs.)
Active voice: "This program will benefit me by giving me a head start on my medical education." (This emphasizes the program's role.)
For an essay, the first option ("Participating...") is a strong choice. It's clear, concise, and avoids the potentially awkward "benefit with."