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Tue 22 Mar, 2016 04:45 am
Other changes made to automated teller machines are: the inclusion of elder-friendly features such as larger font display, and having popular transactions on the main menu.
Is the colon after "are" necessary. Thanks.
No, the colon is not necessary, and should not be used.
How about:
Other changes made to automated teller machines are use of larger font display and popular transactions listed on the main menu.
@PUNKEY,
Doesn't give the context of why changes made.
Done in separate sentence?
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