@grammerslut69,
First paragraph: ". . . there aren't checks and balances on . . ."
That should be: ". . . there
are no checks and balances on . . ." At the very least, you should have said: ". . . there aren't
any checks and balances on . . ."
". . . claims that are completely false, and aren't backed up by any real support." That should be: ". . . claims that are false and
not supported by any
accurate source." Also, the comma was not necessary?
Second paragraph: "If something isn't supported by real sources, how is the answer supposed to have any value?"
That should be: "If something isn't supported by
accurate sources, how will the answer have value?" Your use to the word real is wrong. Accurate or not, all sources are real.
Third paragraph: "Once, there were three pigs, with different opinions on appropriate building materials . . ."
First of all, the second comma is not necessary. In order for the comma to work, you would need to rephrase your sentence as follows. "Once, there were three pigs,
each with a different opinion on appropriate building materials . . ." Beyond that, you should have used the word
differing instead of
different.
Sixth paragraph: " The first build on shifting sand . . ."
That should be: "The first
one built on shifting sand . . ." I was willing to call that error a typo. But two sentences later, you repeated the error. So . . .
However, the story in your last paragraph sums up your contribution nicely.
". . . it seems clear that the grasshopper hasn't done enough work to contribute."