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Fri 12 Feb, 2016 10:48 am
I am writing an explanatory essay regarding a Grimm fairy tale. I started my second body paragraph with the following sentence: "In accordance with violence, poverty also plays a role . . ."
I was wondering if the phrase "in accordance with" even makes sense in the sentence. I would really like to use that phrase, or one very similar to it.
Any and all advice would be appreciated.
@Dearest-Gracie,
It does not make sense as it stands. You might consider rephrasing....e.g....
"In accordance with the usual experiences of the downtrodden, poverty and violence go hand-in-hand.