I'm just not good at expressing myself. Help!
Agree on that point. I don't have slightest clue what the hell is this post about, but
a) If you did something wrong and you think it was wrong, apology is ok.
b) if he didn't response in TWO HOURS it might mean that he's like... busy? Or thinking about best answer? Give it a time, for god's sake. It's ok if he don't respiond to you even for couple of days. At least you both will feel how it is without one another.
c) If he won't answer after that, send a small memo "did you receive my message?" "Is everything ok?". Just don't be pushy and don't be needy. It's that simple.
d) Learn smt. about paragraphs, storytelling.