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Is this sentence correct?

 
 
kuben123
 
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Reply Fri 22 May, 2015 08:34 pm
@FBM,
One probable solution,taking stock and calling it quits, had eluded me from the start, but I was adamant to soldier on.

(Sounds better?)
(Btw.Wht message do you get from this sentence?)
(The reader must be able to get what I mean)
FBM
 
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Reply Fri 22 May, 2015 08:39 pm
@kuben123,
Yes, that looks like a good final form.

The message I get is that you're retrospectively realizing that you should have been aware sooner that the prospects of your success were poor.
kuben123
 
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Reply Fri 22 May, 2015 08:44 pm
@FBM,
Great!
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kuben123
 
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Reply Fri 22 May, 2015 08:57 pm
@FBM,
How about this sentence?

The complexity of hate and vengeance inhibits ones ability to think rationally.
The complexity of hate and vengeance inhibits ones ability of thinking rationally


(Which of these sounds better?)
FBM
 
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Reply Fri 22 May, 2015 09:01 pm
@kuben123,
The first one. Also: "one's." Wink
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kuben123
 
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Reply Fri 22 May, 2015 10:43 pm
@FBM,
This unanticipated turn of event helped me meet life’s challenges head-on.

Having overcome some of my life’s struggles, I’m compelled to say that I’ve indeed outdone myself.

If it weren’t for my neediness to succeed and the uplifting words of wisdom from my circle of true friends (it was a small circle indeed!), I would not have sprung back.


Please point out the errors.tq
FBM
 
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Reply Fri 22 May, 2015 10:55 pm
@kuben123,
I'm going to have to let someone else take over for a while.
kuben123
 
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Reply Fri 22 May, 2015 11:41 pm
@FBM,
sure.thanks for the help
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kuben123
 
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Reply Fri 22 May, 2015 11:44 pm
@FBM,
Btw your replies were prompt and clear.Easy for me to understand the numerous errors I was making..
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selectmytutor
 
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Reply Sat 23 May, 2015 12:01 am
@kuben123,
Hi,
There is no mistake in your sentence Kuben.
kuben123
 
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Reply Sat 23 May, 2015 05:09 am
@selectmytutor,
It took me ten long years to finally settle my towering debts.

(Sounds right?)
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