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Tantalize

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Loh Jane
 
Reply Sat 6 Dec, 2014 10:34 pm
Hi English teacher,
May I ask whether my following sentence is acceptable? Many thanks in advance.
Many beautiful ladies tantalize guys by giving them a false hope nowadays.
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Reply Sun 7 Dec, 2014 03:05 am
@Loh Jane,
The sentence is OK, but could be improved by removing the indefinite article, and making "hope" plural: Many beautiful ladies tantalize guys by giving them false hopes nowadays.
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