Are my sentences structured correctly?

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Hi all English teachers,
I have structured a few sentences because of my coming job interview.
May I ask if they are acceptable? Many thanks in advance.
1)The abc company manages containers at the terminal.
2)It is 1 of the busiest transshipment hub in the world and it is accountable for 5% of the global container work.
3)The abc company has a good enterprise resource planning system that coordinates and integrates the entire port operations.

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[+3] - roger - 11/08/2014It is [strike]1[/strike][i] one[/i] of the busiest transshipment hub[color=#FF0000]s[/color] in the world and it is accountable for 5% of the global container [strike]work[/strike] shipments ....

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@Loh Jane,

It is 1 one of the busiest transshipment hubs in the world and it is accountable for 5% of the global container work shipments .

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@roger,

Dear Roger,
thank you very much.

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@Loh Jane,

3)Abc has a good enterprise-resource planning system that coordinates and integrates the entire port

"Good" somewhat redundant however Jane

3)Abc boasts a unique and most remarkable enterprise-resource-planning system to coordinate and integrate operation of the entire port

3)Abc Enterprise-Resource Planning coordinates and integrates the entire port

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